Parallex v Tha Vision
 

Only newbs (up to four wins)
10 to 14 lines
No Bullshit votes
No alias's
No feeding

Check in............Drop ur shit first..........Is there any time limit???.......................................... ......

sorry dawg computers fucked up!
Blind spit okay
let me know you are awake we will both spit, verses due half hour after your next check in.
I said no feeding anyway so blind spit shouldn't be a problem aite

well, so long as we are both here and online

looking for fair votes on my other battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78369

if ya dont like them rulez
check in again I'll spit first
Remember, no feeding
how long will you need to post a reply?
set your own limit when you check in~but asap ok?

if you don't want this battle any more, tell me so I can get it closed down. Can't start another battle till this is out the way

...or you could just go offline when you get my pm to come check this thread! What are you scared of man? You havent been "searchng for all posts by this user" have you?
Just let me know if you are gonna show or not, I couldn't think any less of you, whatever you do. Just remember, we both still elevatin' I can go around you, or through you...dog it's your call
holla

Gots school and other shit after that so I aint have a chance to come and spit, calm down kid...I'll spit in a lil if I'm still online...

Look out...another cat wants to show me what he's talkin

about...so simple that i just can't believe he's walking

around...he got game but its his outline they'll be chalkin

and now...I'm ripping this faggot up don't care what y'all think

"I do"...Tha Vision thinks, reading up the last shot

guess who...aint losing. His shit, just makes your brain rot,

fuck you...lunchline bully all your punches have been played...what?

with two...punchelines "strung" together? I'm "a-frayed-knot"

Ill shit...I spit quick but I drop a verse with precision

big dick...a sick clique bet ya wish ya was me...eh vision

New flow...you a homo. I'm just playing with a new style

you know...you like "oh no", "it wasn't like this in 8-mile"

vision...your no killer dude, you will never be shady

listen...cause i'm iller than a stillborn crack baby

(_-=15th line finisher ~ lol=-_)
like ya boyfriend, I'm improvising behind doors...strap a plank cross MY ass so I wont fall in yours

Somin quick....Couldn't really think of nothing....

I'll rip this faggot and walk off with an extra pair-a(of)-legs(parallex)//
Rip anybody, I don't give a fuck who, just give me tha where-and-when//
Fuck this fag, ya shit "just aint right" like "married-men//
Beat tha shit out of "Duke" like "Terrapin" and watch you get "shot up" like "heroin"//

What tha fuck is you spitting?, RB need to block-ya-shit//
Ya writing wack rhymes so like "Jacob", you need to "watch"-ya-"wrist"//
Imma pocket-this, somebody need to stop-this-bitch//
Before I pop-this-kid, and watch him "fall hard" like "flopping-hits"//

Your better off walking away cuz you can't handle-my-words//
Ya whole verse is just fucking stupid like walking in sandles-on-dirt//
Somebody needs to ban this kid, his fucking bland-flows-should-go//
Just hand over this win cuz you cant even get ya hand-on-a-vote//

O well its whatever.....Vote peoples........................................... ............................................

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

ayo vision i was eplaining earlier that my poll votes arenot
going thru for some reason.....

but my input is this....vision first line was a killa...nice wordplay
and creativity on that..punches landed nice..disses hit good...
felt tha heat..overall nice battle verse...

parallex was good also...but structure and flow was your downfall..you had good material but your disses were kinda basic...ya flow was throwed off at points..iight punches but elevate a lil...

vote vision........sorry can't poll right now

aite uppin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(2)

Decent battle.............Breakdown

Punches: Vision
Personals: Para
Wordplay: Vision
Multi's: None really
Meta's: Vision

Vote = Vision

Hit up my battle against EnVy Ny would ya?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78782

Wow...I didnt have multies? Wtf? Are you on crack or somin?............................................ .

Yo ima Drop a Vote Here But i Will Ask that You all Drop a Honest Vote ON Mine TOo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78601
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78662

Wordplay Vision
Meti's Vision
Multi's Vision
Punchs Vision

One sided a Bit i think

Vote Vision

Here it is

Good shit to the newbie but honestly The Vision took
this his punches were hittin harder than Parallex's but
no hate though just get better because you have potential,
especially about the plank line.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<

Uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .......

Aight Vision took this

Overall verse wus way betta tha other dude wusnt tryin i think but that what u get

Vote: Vision

Vision u won this multis punchlines and vocab iight spit u coulda came harder hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77957