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polygraph me cause dawg i spit it true-
you only hate me cause im the opposite of you.
who takes a minute to mimic waht i can do in an insant for 3600 seconds consistent......
ask any body i collab with-the toilets the only place it takes me more than 20 minute or more to drop shit-that's it.
and since it my spit-plus you ride dick-do it in rverse press you lips togeather and kiss my ass.
francture m.c.'s caue they style is broke-write dissess on ginsus and cut jokes-till you choke then egg you to reataliet to leave you yokes.
for thinken you could handle-my style of battle scrambles word like scrable-if you bite my rhymes i'll bite your adams apple.
nigguz is transparent-when i woop your ass like your dad i'll make it A~PARENT.
i'll never fall off so the only CUM~BACK-i know involves my nut sack and some whore being stuffed in her asscrack.
i measure my dopensee by scale not by sell's-if you putyour heart in to rap i'll leave you off beat like acapell's.
my IQ is as SHARP as my vebs-never taken out of context but i MINCE words- live a METAPHOR... rap dope and FLIP BIRDS~riden through your burbs-yellen (FUCK YOU HURBS)!!!!!!!!!!!!
practise what i peach thats why i tell-rapers i'll see them in hell-before i smoke them pass him a blunt cause he catchen an L-
and well....im illest at droppig bars-so sick fans send me get~well cards-doctors charge me for life support and cops force me to keep handicap tags on my car.
i keep it above par.im finally in the gree-only real m.c.'s golfders and donald trump understand what i mean.
but no more thuggen low budge-now i get the same presidents i wanted dead to hit em with my grudge-am i wanna of the illest?
1500 songs plus still going you JUDGE!
you can stain me kid you cant even smudge-let alone hit me hard enough to make me budge.
JESUS CHRIST im nice plus the begotten son-and not placing in a battle is the only way you LAST in one.i split duns twist sum
and for CHRISTOPHER RIOS stay rapping with BIG PUNS.
there is no haiste i shit on rappers cause they just a waiste-for dick riders id tongue your moms and girl if i wanted to see how a clitoRIs taste.

UPPIN

Oh that was sick, all things considered! Your living up to your name. That was off the charts. I liked it.

THANK YOU HIT ME UP FOR A COLLAB

yup...that certainly was ill son...you gotta get aim fo' real though man...or yahoo IM or somethin' nahmean...

it was dope. but try making your lines shorter... stretched lines break the flow...


good piece over all tho

Yo was feelin tha wordplay,vocab and some nicely thought out and quality multies,bar lentgh seemed necessary but may be difficult to spit,maybe not though.Liked tha concept and this was a dope peice all around dawg.

Peace

thnks

UPPIN

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Great start....I read alot of your posts and dawg u been elevatin alot recently............
Keep up da good work and Happy B-day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

THANK YOU TENSE I BEEN WATCHING YOU TOO.YOUR DOING GREAT AND BY FAR HAVE KEPT ME ON EDGE WITH ALOT OF YOUR RHYMES I LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING MORE

Thanx Word......


PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

NO PROB

dope drop, had good multies an punches i liked that line about the bathroom that was great LOL, but overal 9/10 good drop homie 1

You know I have to come through and drop my comments..on the real youngin..you came up tight on this one. It was off the damn meters, fam. Get at me.

ok work on it

and u aint no vet

and u a bitch

dAMN, THAT WAS HOT! Nice metaphors, and word-play; lots of content, not just a bunch of words linking up rhymes. Ya gotta love it.I'd say thats pretty fine fo under 20min work. Keep em flowin bro. (i liked the "catchin a L" part)

PEACE