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StreeTLegenD VS Tonya~Montana
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5 Bars Max No Crew, Hate Or D/r Votes Due: 30 mins...8:00pm... check in... good luck... |
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iigh...make sure it's in by 8!...
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***My Verse***
Releasing-Tha-Flame -Like I Was The Head Of A 'Band Of Nintendos' The Way Im 'Leading-Tha-Game'// Preaching-Yah-Fate -'Knock You Out' So Hard Gotchu 'Moving Away' Seeing Your 'Leaving-This-State'//(Unconscious) Swiftly-I-Drop Wakk MC's -Your 'Fly' Lyrics Become 'Limp' When You 'Cum With Feathers' -When You 'Hit-Me-Its-Soft'// Your Dissing-Is-Not Ill -All Your Doing Is Playing A 'Clock On A Broken Bulb' Cuz Your 'Ticking-Me-Off'// Your A Fagget Get Off My Dick, Little Bastard Your 'Jacking Off To Pics Of Cows' The Way Your 'Beefing-Online'// Trash-This Rascal Leave You Absent At Class, Cant Come At Me-Puberty..You'll Receive-It-Sometime// |
iight
I'm I battlin A Street Legend dam I ask
who-is-this// as far as {W}rappin you gonna come out EMPTY HANDED like a lonely BUM-ON-CHRISTMAS// I'ma Heavy Hitter, you Buntin, so get your REP UP// afta this loss JACKIN-YA-DICK can't help you keep ya HEAD UP// now I got you Thinkin SPANISH, you wanna RUN-WIT-THA-BULLS// you ROCK BOTTOM & can't escape so call him PITTiful// tha Talk of your Town is me and ya crew asking have you Seen Her// as far as you I neva seen a STREET LEGEND that's was BITCH MADE like he was MOLDED by NEUTRAGENA//{cosmetics get it} each drop I come raw like MEAT STOCK// you small dick like a PeaCOCK// you can't REACH-MY-LEVEL cause tha FLOOR is where your PEAK STOP// nothin personal towards you.........holla! |
Aight,
Tonya, I liked your Flow and your Skill was Evident But im'a Have to say that SL took This ONe Word Play Tie Vocab Tie Personals Tie Multi's SL Humor Tie So i guess Vote SL http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78601 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78662 Aight.... Drop a Honest One Here..... |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh uuuhhhhhhhhhh ok!.............................good explanation....................................... .........{not!}
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oh yea let show luv and vote honestly yall...... and yes i will check yall battles also!!...............................hola!
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Okay look, Tonya Montana took it easy as...
her wordplay simply killed it her punches hit harder, and her disses were better, she took this battle no doubts, coz she a gurl niggas aint givi her props she deserves, tonya took this coz of her wordplay and punches and disses, street legend had nice shit but not as nice as tonyas, peace |
iigh...1-1
i couldn't finished my verse cus my comp logged off.. well...keep em commin :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::; |
hott battle
but i think sl took this he took it wit more humorous wrodplay and punches tonya had sum good hits and wordplay 2 but it wasn't getting to me much hot battle though vote-sl |
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Your opening was alright, at least it wasn't the same basic scheme you see through out the rest of your verse. Your second bar, changes style but kind of loses it because this punch had way to much filler. the last punch was okay. Quote:
you're opener is decent and your second bar was kind of losing it. It didn't really flow together well. The third bar seems forced and the fourth bar was all filler. If you would have come some of it out, it would have been a nice punch. Then ending was okay. Some of your punches I just wasn't feeling. vote street legend |
iigh thanks uppin...
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LMAO!!!!!!!!
good god tonya rips this kids head off streetlegend...nuthin but weak ass self glorification..tonya punched u wit personals and wordplay and damn thats a sick ass femcee........get tha fuck outa frontlines kid it does u no justice....but really nvm if u lose this battle ....lol that shit was tight lol oh yea vote tonya montana...but i cant poll vote..jus my 2 cents....dont be herbs ppl read tha BATTLE verses.... good show from u both :) |
ripped my head off? lol..
all she did wuz talk bout my dick... Quote:
^wtf lol.. neway..continue tha votes... |
StreeTLegenD VS Tonya~Montana
some people try too hard !! Okay Punches are nothing these days it accually how your word your verse !! if you have good wordplay and decent punches your going to end up winning !! if its easier for somebody to Read and Understand Your shit thats what they'll vote on ! and if thats shits hard and not appealing - the Newbies will automatically vote for the words they understand In this Battle, both sides were alright to me- I'm more of a long verse battler myself wordplay: Tonya punches: street Mutlis: barely street creativity: street skills: Tonya Overall I can honestly see Tonya has better skills than street Just in this battle they didnt show enough COME HARDER NEXT TIME VOTE: STREET LEGEND |
uppin...[2]
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shockthaworld=dickriding herb who cant battle, vote or do anything associated with freestyling....
hoe. |
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^^^couldnt have sed it better |
really.... REALLY CLOSE battle.... ima hafta hand it ta SL thought cuz his werdplay and multi's were just a bit betta... everything else wuz too hard ta judge... BOTH NEED PERSONALS
Vote-SL |
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