J.Dubya vs shockthaworld
 

no dr
no hate
no crew
no bite
no prewritten
40 mins to spit
you spit 1st

How many Lines !!.
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forget it nevermind it doesnt matter alright

I'll be done soon


quick Murder !!!


Im the hottest thing out !!

sorry, unlimited now I guess...
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well just try to Match My Verse

LOL but knowing you - your verse will probably be 3 pages

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Im the hottest thing out.., Look Verbally Abuse-Fools That Refuse-To-Lose Against Me ..Slip-Noose.. |Label Ya Pores A Myth| With |Tatoos Of A Legend| Coated With Ya Blood-Juice ..
|Chew This Loose newbie|., |Like Ya Avy, Mate|.. Translate Jd’s Life-Line And Increase The Stats Of Death-Rates.. Smack Ya |Noggin’ With An Almanac| And Shift Ya |Mind Of State| ..
No-Need-To-Hate.. Flows-Feed-Your-Fate.. Bleed-Yo-face.. Ima See 2 it, Ya Dr’s Can’t Save-Your-Case..Its 2 Late, I Left Ya |Suckin’ Bics|, The Way shock Gon |Erase-Yo-Taste| ..
Placed This Waste At Death’s Gates.. Paced Endurance.. My Chants Send-u-in-trance.. Flash’d Life In Glance.. I’m So Advanced To |Re-Arrange Ya Persepective| Quicker Than |Blind Transplants| ..
Knock The Static Off Ya Pants.. Chance, You Can’t Grasp-it.. Goddamnit, I’ll Make You Drool To A Star Just To Reek Havoc On This Planet.. Like |J-Kidd’s Throwback|, shock Left Ya |Heart To The Net| ..
Cart-Yo-Carcass In Sets.. Place Bets As-Far-As Ya Left Without Senses..Breast-Fed Still Smuthered In Cleavages.. Post-Battle Jd Gon Be |Covered In More Blood| Than |Aborted Fetuses| ..

Watch the gauge raise on my rage like an animal caged
I'll rock you so hard, you'll think this was the stone age/
My words are so tight, they haven't yet been uncurled
you could blow earth up, but still wouldn't shockthaworld/
This aint a debate-this is your fate, there's no time to wait
your flow had no pound, how can you be a heavy weight?/
Yeah, you did live next door, to me, but ya don't anymore
cause my verbs were to hardcore for a whack ass whore/
How the fuck you say you gonna "erase my taste"?
Ya didn't even write that verse, you just had to copy-n-paste/
Those strecthed lines don't mean shit, I see them all the time
They're taking to big of steps, and are in a field of land mines/
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^Look at those bullet holes that not even I can control
It's like I'm playing hockey and hittin you is my goal/
Ya shit had no structure, how's it gonna survive an earthquake?
All it will take is a little shake to cause ya foundation to break/
I hear you mumbling under your breath, "damn this is a merk"
I'ma erase that smirk, you's a jerk who need to go back to welfare work

Uppin,, Good Battle

You came harder than I exspected !!!
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my votes goes to shock

better flow, vocab and punches

Dubya came nice, and easy, flow was there, but punches didn't hit as hard

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please drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4417#post764417

im votin for dubya cause it was punchlines line after line, i couldnt really flow with shock cause he has so many line things it confuesed me.

Wow your dumb !!

see thats why i hate postin in regular frontlines

half of these people cant READ


shit is horrible !!

^I agree 100% For some reason anytime some one uses strecthed lines everyone things it's the shit. Look at both mc's structures and flow, J Dubya's was right on compared to the other guy's. I can't vote but it would be for J Dubya. PROPS MAN!

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yo this was a hot battle but my vote goes to jdub he came wit harder punches........................................... .........................................

word on tha that^^ .
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i think shock took this 1 word on that elite shit.. but u took this one dawg hard spit hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77957

i alot of shock's verse was filler multi's and rarely hit.. the drool to a star bit was tight.. but apart from that you had few stand outs..

j.dubya had flow problems in bits but basically he just play out punched you

personals: j.dubya
rhyme scheme & structure: j. dubya
flow: j.dubya
multi's: shock
vocab: shock
wordplay: tied
complexity: --
metaphors: jdubya
punches: j.dubya
opener: j
closer: j

vote = j

^Thanks a lot guyz!

Currently: me-2; shockthaworld-1
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Come on y'all! Hit this up with a vote so when can determine a winner and get this thread closed. Thanks in advance to those who do.
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C'mon some leet heads view this battle !

tired of these newbies !! killing my votes


THEY KNOW NOTHING!!

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J Dubya

J had a better verse... had more connecting punches... his lines
weren't streched beyond believe like STW... STW was concerned
w/ multi's... which isnt bad as long as there are punches that
come along w/ them

^^Took words from my mouth, Jz punches hit harder, and shock had a choppy flow, so i come to the conclusion that J took this peace.

J Dub... based on structure only would win... but he had better lines... cause... um... well it was pretty much structured better... and it didn't suck as much...


shock you gotta change the style dunny... it's wack...

for some odd reason... i can't poll vote... so... uh... *shrugs shoulders*





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Haha. Thanks anyway.
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^Enough said...