HCabuser v.s. Miraculas One
 

aight im here.............................................. ..............................

rules:
5 to 10 lines
no crews
and you go first

aight now htat i see its up, i'll spit later

peace............................................. ......word
..........peace.................................wo rd........

Hope you ate cherrios for breakfast cuz i think you forseen ya future.....
U already got holes in your stomach so theres no need to shoot ya.....
Spittin my verse in 3rd person so the perspective u see'in is flipped......
my verse like tossin u in a woodchipper feet first see yaself get ripped......
I loose words in front of you herbs.....you...whatcha' ma-callit?...........
He wanted to attract atleast some to his BARs, thats why his avi's alcoholics...

Spit soon aight.............................

Word................................ouT........... ..............

you think you can win this battle? yeah right/
you just grew a big head and thought you can fight/
i'll beat you till your weak/
and your halfway dead on the side of a creek/
now your lying in the hospital in a "deep" sleep/
you'll think everyones praying but there not, there betting on when you will die!/
upp! its about that time/
here comes the cries

uppin for some votes, now people vote.............................................. .........................................

will someone post some votes its not that hard come on................................................ .............................................

i dont see what the point in battling if no one is going to vote so come on its not that hard vote and leave

come on people we need some votes .................................................. ......................................

for the forth fuckin time, lets get some vote up on this
uppin for votes............................................. ................................

someone check this fucking battle and vote.............................................. .................................................. .

Aight dont sleep on this people, just cuz we cant "give ur battle an honest vote" doesnt mean u can just sleep on this........

WoRd...........................................PeA cE

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YES FUCKERS WE ARE INZANE!!!!...hahahahaha

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The American Dream wasn't meant for me Cause lady liberty is a hypocrite she lied to me Promised me freedom, education, equality Never gave me nothing but slavery And now look at how dangerous you made me 2Pac
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YO MY BAD i wus tryin somethin OUT and I ACCIDENTLY POSTED

lol

ANYWAYZ PZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.................. ............................

damn propain u could have at least vote , but wutever, we need some votes
uppin for votes............................................. ........................

mirac wins with
punches
flow
structure
personals
funny (I laughed with his as opposed to me laughing at HC's)
complexity was better
eveything was better
(I'll even say Mirac's was so-so but anything is enuff to beat ppl like HC)

Mirac merked you

HCabuser, your style is identical to that of MY ASS WITH A FACE DRAWN ON SIDEWAYS SO MY ASSCRACK LOOKS LIKE A MOUTH AND WHEN I FART IT SPEAKS AND SPITS BETTER THAN YOU!!!....

sorry, had to be said...stop the herb infestation

you know wut bitch ill run all over u with this shit, not only that also ur mom, say my shit is wack, ill have to put a fucking crack in ur face, u fucking "shit face"

HC man oh man...you need to hire a ghostwriter
and maybe you'll getya first win..you was to elementary..
disses was basic..punches were'nt that good....wordplay was doo
doo..up up ya skillsman...

M-one you coulda flipped ya first bar alil bit betta to make it sound
hot...you was iight tho but up your skills alil also..disses were ok
punches you had about two good ones..overall betta verse

vote M-one

vote on my battles honestly when you see 'em

Aight
Upping upping upping upping upping upping upping
Upping upping upping upping upping upping uppng

Peace............................................. .......worD

Aight
Upping upping upping upping upping upping upping
Upping upping upping upping upping upping uppng

Peace............................................. .......worD

Aight
Upping upping upping upping upping upping upping
Upping upping upping upping upping upping uppng
Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping

Peace............................................. .......worD

Aight
Upping upping upping upping upping upping upping
Upping upping upping upping upping upping uppng
Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping

Peace............................................. .......worD

Aight
Upping upping upping upping upping upping upping
Upping upping upping upping upping upping uppng
Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping
I know people are viewing this battle
so why no votes?
cant one hand type?
keyboard too sticky?

Peace............................................. .......worD

I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

FUCK U PEOPLE SERIOUSLY NEED TO VOTE
some lazy ass people just cuz they wont get a
"return the fav" vote

vote for dis i'lll return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79344
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goddam this was a weak ass battle. so therefore i ain't votin on this shit.

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was an aight battle
nothing too spectakular
but I htink Miraculous 1 took this battle
his verse was lil more complex, also had a better verse
both need some elevation tho

vote - mirculas one

Vote=~Miraculous~0ne~
Purely on wordplay, punches, flow, aggression and crushing a herb when the best line you got is:
"Hope you ate cherrios for breakfast cuz i think you forseen ya future.....
U already got holes in your stomach so theres no need to shoot ya....."
HC abuser, No hate, but you should seriously elevate before you step to a battle forum again. Just got to vote honestly.
Also, you should only really up a battle if it is getting proper slept on. You can only up your own battle 4 times. so try to pm cats and beg a honest vote off them. We all know what it's like have to wait for a result!
Yo but HC, I really feel strongly that no-one should ever have to read anything like that verse of yours, as soon as one of my battles is over I'm putting a call-out in bitch-slapped pick it up or
w/e, but the rulez are:
1-20 lines
Spit together
Verses due in 30 mins after check-in
U get from now till then to pre-write (and don't even step up if it's not your best)
No biting
No shady votes
Think about it
Ps. I AM A NEWB!!!

Vote Mirac.

You spit some hott shit..........hard punches............nice shit................HC you need to elevate.....no hate jus work on improving......................................