B-MAK vs. JB1
 

aight rules yall....

5 barz (10 lines)
he spitz first
no hate votes
no krew votes
no dickrydin

i'll drop a verse in a hour at da latest............................................ ............................................

You see "Jack", your like up to my knee cap,to battle B-Mack
you don't need rap, just a flee trap.
I mean a flee collar, cause you just a "wee baller", i flip these fuckin styles like i flip a free dollar
To your charity cause, when you rap people rarely applause,
you barely have clarity, and suffer from popularity flaws.
So with acrabatical assault, i'll smash that rap to a pulp,
attack you from the back, then snatch the cash thats trapped in the Vault. That ass is a malt, you better start sippin it up
I'm gifted and tough, to rip and to bust the most significant wickedest stuff.

aight prepare to be merked son......................................

the only time u "ballin" is when u dickrydin and kissen scrotums/
u shoulda brang ya whole team to battle, but still i'll disconect modems(more-of-dem)/1st bar

if my barz were pussy u couldnt get next to me,he adores me wanted to meet me so he figured he'd battle and text me/
u couldnt beat me if u were meks or k.o._g(k.o. guy), i take away ur ballz and pride, lyrical visectimy/2nd bar

ur hard to tell apart,frum stank farts,putten people to sleep wit ur rhymes like tranq darts/
im numba one ranked with thoughts,dis battle u juss lost, ur records first loss thatz da price it costs/3rd bar

to compete wit me,yo ass gon' need more steez,merk yo ass machete style,lyrical vorhees/
u pretendin u dope makin it up like old seniles and war stories/4th bar

im tired of battlin this HERB so letz end end/
if WACK wuzz a person, yo he'd be ya best friend/5th bar

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aight i cant vote cuz my and B-MAK in da same krew so im juss uppin this for him but lemme break dis battle down.....

punches:B-MAK, the other cat had not too bad punches but sum lines juss didnt seem to have very good punch lines
vocab:JB1
multis:same
flow:B-MAK

so if i could vote it would go to B-MAK

uppin this for them

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Punches: B-Mak
Flow:JB1
Structure:B-Mak
Vocab:JB1
complexity:B-Mak
Multies:Tie
Personals:Tie(there was none)
word usage:B-Mak

Final Vote:B-Mak

I'll battle you knamwob you peice of shit.........................................
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DONT SLEEP ON DIS!!!!!
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damn..this battle is gettin slept on more than homeless people sleepin on floors in shelters..too bad I cant vote..but if I could I would vote for bernie mac...his verse just killed..it was all around good..except for personals....jb1 you need to elevate..both of yall do..we all do..so I'm just droppin my opinion and uppin this shit for yall even though its already on the frontpage..peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8642#post768642
brand new battle^^^

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DONT SLEEP
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punches - Bmak
Flow - JB1
multis - JB1
Wordplay - Bmak
Name play - none
vocab - Bmak

Jb, you shit was wayyy too simple, you hadn't one punch in your verse, you had multis, but you didn't dominate anything... your flow was nice as fuck only because you flipt the script with the multi usage at the end, but that was about it.

Bmak your shit was kinda hard to read, you had too long of lines with less flow, and it was off charts... your punches connected, but on a weak level and your vocab was pretty nice... there only at the end tho...

both of you have some elevatin to do... alot of it

Vote - Bmak

oaky here it is...cant poll sorry
JB1's verse had little or no punches but the flow and multies was very nice.
B-Mak...man those were some of the weakest punches so corny and shit it just makes u look bad.....
example:"if WACK was a person he would be your best friend"
??? my god thats horrible....
Vote - JB1

Please vote on the battle in my signature even if u dont have 100 posts...bein slept on real bad...thanks Peace

mY vote don't count...I guess, but as far as disses go I seen some vulgar shite from b-mak, and some technical shite from jb1. B-mak's burns were more apparent, but jb1's were more suddle, and flowed nicer. Jb1's was more compact with nice flow and multies, b-mak's was longer, good rhyme form, (but really stretched) with harder punches. On the screen-close. On the mic-I bet jb1 would sound alot tighter.
winner jb1

Peace