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One Voice (Raps True Meaning)
Here it is.....
Rap, Reading Among People, Is What I See Words, Are What We Read, Rhymes Are What We Keep Feelings Are Deep, We Express Emotions Its What We Do, Yell Out Among Yall With Full Devotion Its Like Slow Motion, With What Goes On Yall Think Its A Song, But Its Like Heaven, Where We Belong Dont Matter Who You Are, Say What You Feel Some People Kneel, Like Prayin In Their Own Way, They Reveal We Cant Keep Sealed, We All Gotta Let Go You Dont Gotta Be A Pro, Say What You Want, Dont Do It For Dough Some Think ITs Just A Show, But To Us, Its Life Its How We Fight, We Use Words, Instead Of Guns And Knifes Hook: People Take Rap The Wrong Way Dont Even Bother To Listen To What We Say Its Okay, You Have Your Own Choice But Really, Its Just Expressions, Over One Voice Its Not All About The Violence And Bullshit People Throw Fits, Over The Words We Say, Get Over It We Just Like Any Other Music, We Express Everyone Got Stress, We Just Write It, Instead Of Making A Mess Fighting Over Our Words, Such As Profanity We Aint Supporting Insanity, It Just Happens, Not Everyone Friendly So Next Time You Hear Them Dissin Our Music Dont Refuse It, Tell Em Not Only To Listen, But You Use It! Hook: People Take Rap The Wrong Way Dont Even Bother To LIsten To What We Say Its Okay, You Have Your Own Choice But Really, Its Just Expressions, Over One Voice.... |
Yeah, that was nice. A gust of fresh air, sorta reminded me a KRS-ONE. Sounded like it would be nice in audio, too. Sweet multi-rhymes with meaning AND flow. Maybe could have less simple-er
rhymes with more consistent syllable similarity,but thats askin alot. This's my 1st post and 1st rhyme i read and it's givin me good expectations. Full-Props to Slik. Peace |
^^ Thank you......
Glad to be the first one you read.....haha.....:) |
yo that was awesome, flow kicked ass, vocab was hella good, im new here and i havent read many rhymes, but for the ones i have read this is one of the better ones. im wit mc b.r.g, full props to slik.
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Thanks......
Whos b.r.g? lemme know....lol |
Mc BRG was the 1st guy that posted...lol
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hahaha i get it........
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lol, it was ok but nothin all that great.
avg. rhymin no punches deepness i dont like and u had to much of u seemed insincere. and ya from thing says the motha fuckin streets lol...you go to a catholic school lmao. |
^^ haha only wish i went to one....it owuld be better than the one im in now....but yeah
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nice shit mayn, i felt dat shit duke....1
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I have to say Slik u talented ....amazing skillz u impressive
Join Ijl we need skilled femcee's like yoself |
that was a nice peice, seemed pretty basic but complex thoughts, the word play an flow was great, the hook i enjoyed the best..your verses were good but your hook i felt was really dope, props lates
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Good drop right here. Really good concept and it's not played out, so good drop there. Nice vocab and basic on the rhyme structure. Pretty damn good dude.
Hit me up... Laaate. |
^^ Word thanks.....
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goood sh*t. simple and yet powerful. This is real, so every one who disses what we do can suck a dick. much luv and keep reppin.
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^^ Exactly....Thanks for all the feedback...
Lookin for a few more EXPLAINED feeds.... Anyone? |
PROPS DOGG! What more do I gotta say?
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^^ lol true
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it was aight, yeah...
not that much wordplay or rhyme scheme there... still, it flowed decently... and it had something to say... I was definitely feeling what you talking bout here... thas what, to me, made the drop pretty good... cause it was made in a pretty simple form... I usually don't be feelign those... but like I said, you had something to say... that made it worth reading... Peace |
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