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Slik 09-09-03 09:29 PM

One Voice (Raps True Meaning)
 
Here it is.....

Rap, Reading Among People, Is What I See
Words, Are What We Read, Rhymes Are What We Keep
Feelings Are Deep, We Express Emotions
Its What We Do, Yell Out Among Yall With Full Devotion
Its Like Slow Motion, With What Goes On
Yall Think Its A Song, But Its Like Heaven, Where We Belong
Dont Matter Who You Are, Say What You Feel
Some People Kneel, Like Prayin In Their Own Way, They Reveal
We Cant Keep Sealed, We All Gotta Let Go
You Dont Gotta Be A Pro, Say What You Want, Dont Do It For Dough
Some Think ITs Just A Show, But To Us, Its Life
Its How We Fight, We Use Words, Instead Of Guns And Knifes


Hook:
People Take Rap The Wrong Way
Dont Even Bother To Listen To What We Say
Its Okay, You Have Your Own Choice
But Really, Its Just Expressions, Over One Voice

Its Not All About The Violence And Bullshit
People Throw Fits, Over The Words We Say, Get Over It
We Just Like Any Other Music, We Express
Everyone Got Stress, We Just Write It, Instead Of Making A Mess
Fighting Over Our Words, Such As Profanity
We Aint Supporting Insanity, It Just Happens, Not Everyone Friendly
So Next Time You Hear Them Dissin Our Music
Dont Refuse It, Tell Em Not Only To Listen, But You Use It!

Hook:
People Take Rap The Wrong Way
Dont Even Bother To LIsten To What We Say
Its Okay, You Have Your Own Choice
But Really, Its Just Expressions, Over One Voice....

MC B.R.G. 09-10-03 12:23 AM

Yeah, that was nice. A gust of fresh air, sorta reminded me a KRS-ONE. Sounded like it would be nice in audio, too. Sweet multi-rhymes with meaning AND flow. Maybe could have less simple-er
rhymes with more consistent syllable similarity,but thats askin alot. This's my 1st post and 1st rhyme i read and it's givin me good expectations. Full-Props to Slik.

Peace

Slik 09-10-03 03:35 PM

^^ Thank you......

Glad to be the first one you read.....haha.....:)

aintgonnastop 09-10-03 09:05 PM

yo that was awesome, flow kicked ass, vocab was hella good, im new here and i havent read many rhymes, but for the ones i have read this is one of the better ones. im wit mc b.r.g, full props to slik.

Slik 09-10-03 09:46 PM

Thanks......

Whos b.r.g? lemme know....lol

Otherwordz 09-10-03 09:53 PM

Mc BRG was the 1st guy that posted...lol

Slik 09-10-03 09:56 PM

hahaha i get it........

Feeble Minded. 09-10-03 09:56 PM

lol, it was ok but nothin all that great.
avg. rhymin no punches deepness i dont like and u had to much of u seemed insincere.

and ya from thing says the motha fuckin streets lol...you go to a catholic school lmao.

Slik 09-10-03 09:58 PM

^^ haha only wish i went to one....it owuld be better than the one im in now....but yeah

R.V.A. 09-10-03 10:08 PM

nice shit mayn, i felt dat shit duke....1

~ProPaiN~ 09-10-03 10:10 PM

I have to say Slik u talented ....amazing skillz u impressive


Join Ijl we need skilled femcee's like yoself

rule 09-10-03 10:30 PM

that was a nice peice, seemed pretty basic but complex thoughts, the word play an flow was great, the hook i enjoyed the best..your verses were good but your hook i felt was really dope, props lates

tsheff112 09-11-03 10:06 AM

Good drop right here. Really good concept and it's not played out, so good drop there. Nice vocab and basic on the rhyme structure. Pretty damn good dude.

Hit me up...

Laaate.

Slik 09-11-03 07:01 PM

^^ Word thanks.....

J Nice 09-11-03 07:05 PM

goood sh*t. simple and yet powerful. This is real, so every one who disses what we do can suck a dick. much luv and keep reppin.

Slik 09-11-03 07:07 PM

^^ Exactly....Thanks for all the feedback...

Lookin for a few more EXPLAINED feeds....

Anyone?

J.Dubya 09-11-03 11:29 PM

PROPS DOGG! What more do I gotta say?

Slik 09-12-03 03:51 PM

^^ lol true

Alias-C 09-12-03 06:11 PM

it was aight, yeah...
not that much wordplay or rhyme scheme there...
still, it flowed decently...
and it had something to say...
I was definitely feeling what you talking bout here...
thas what, to me, made the drop pretty good...
cause it was made in a pretty simple form... I usually don't be feelign those... but like I said, you had something to say... that made it worth reading...

Peace


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