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Parallex Vs ShEpNeY_zAnY
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30 mins from time you check in |
ARE YOU GONNA POST THE FKN RULES
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No cheating, I got no problem being merked, but only if I deserve it.........
15-20 lines Blind spit Verses due within 30 mins of check in No bullshit votes |
15-20 lines
NO D/R NO HATE NO CREW VOTES NO FEEDIN NO BITING UNLIMITED LINES YOU SPITTIN FIRST I MITE HAVE TO SPIT TOMORROW CAUSE I GOT SOME PROBLEMS AT HOME iight Pz |
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dont worry just spit
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15-20 to unlimited...
fuk it jus make it 15-22 22 is unlimited ************************** *********************** ****************** |
i will spit first thing tomorrow.......i got skool now and i got some shit i needa do iight Pz
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Before this battle starts I'll tell you, this is my intention://
to repossess your life cos you forgot to "pay attention"// at school no-one likes you cos you're a nerdy computer ace// a smith an wesson is my fuckin "point and click interface"// tearing up every line, defeat just created a demon// you a storm at sea, rain heavily but only swallow "seamen"// I'm Parallex you fuck, not a man you should be testing// Hollow-points rip through ya shirt to cave your fuckin chest in// i'm defined by my spit and the by the games that I play// I ran out of weed, so I think Ima "smoke" this "herb" today// Zany, he might be, yo, but pretty, he's definately not// this kids momma used to feed him, at range, with a sling shot// My flows are alright, yours aren't and need fixing// and now I'm eating this "cunt" easy just getting my "licks" in// with my tounge i diss emcees, but the women I please// Yo momma calls me "koala" (a bear which eats bush and leaves)// so get the fuck outta here with your prom dress and pumps// fucking with me is dumb like leaping a chasm in two jumps// cos, when it comes to talent dog, you'll always be broke// the only time you have the last laugh is when you don't get the fuckin joke// ...be-yatch |
Now stick that shit in you fucking crack pipe and smoke it.
take as long as you need! I'm out REP'n Da banditz still holding tryouts for any who got skillz |
Your Punches Werent There, They Were Comin Poorly..
Were You Dissin Me, Or Writing A Fukin Story.. This Kid Commitin Sins You Can Find His Ass Hidden In Churches.. I Kill This Kid With Keystyles, While He Takin Years To Produce Pre Written Verses.. His Crew Is Suppose To Be ILL But To Get Members He Has To Mention Them In Every Battle.. You Gay Bandits Betta Quit Rappin And Go Back To Roundin Up Cattle..(the sig) This Kid A Thugged Out Dick Ryder Why You Even Think Of Flossin.. He Doesnt Have A Chance To Be Ill, Even If Ya Rolled In Toxins.. The Crew Reckons That If You Join They'll Make You Famous.. Them Bunch Of Pricks Are So Wack They'll Only Make You Nameless.. Another Target To Trap, Leave His Parents Crying Like He Got Kidnapped.. He Rode So Many Dicks He Knows The Sizes Of Jockstraps.. Why You Wan Battle Me Cause I'll Jus Hand You A Loss Cause My Punches Come Harder Than You Havin Constipation.. Cause You Gave Me The Free Win I'll Give You A Free Ticket Of Appretiation.. Couldnt Win If You Had Spotless Raps So Watch As I Sneeze As The Windex Lingers.. You Makin Pointless Verses Like He Typin Without His Index Fingers.. You Fukin Weak..Punches Leavin You Unable To Speak.. Lable This GEEK...As The Wackest Freak..Cause All Your Punches That Landed Were Fukin Cheap.. Come Here With That Wack Verse Actin Like You Have Swell Hits.. I'll Punch You Upside Tha Head So Hard You Wont Be Able To Spell Wits.. He Aint Even Got A Problem Being Merked..He Must Be Used To It Cause He Plainly Shit.. After I Merk You 5-0, I Hope This Is The Last Time I See This Bitch Spit.. Man No One Cares About Your Name..You In The Wrong Game.. You Lame..So Turn Your Ass Over And Hang-Ya-Self Wid Shame.. My Last Line So Lets Make This Hurt...All My Punches Worked.. ^^^Thats Word..SO PARALLEX PREPARED TO BE MERKED.. UPPIN FOR VOTES |
welcome back, nice drop but, uh... that took nearly 3 1/2 hrs to write?
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Man Dont Sway Votes You Bitch...It Took Me Half A Fukin Hour As I Said I Had Shit To Do...So Dont Be Swayin Votes Cause You Got Merked.....
Pz and UPPIN FOR VOTES.... Fukin 3 and a half hours u say hahaha dont make me laugh u fukin NEWB |
Yo, dont think that would sway votes. It's all up there for cats to read anyway (including you saying you had shit to do, my bad, I missed that) post times and shit... w/e ======================================== uppin
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Ok this waz tight as fuck, I hard battle to judge, Paralex's flow was defenatly better as shepney did stretch his lines and I though paralex's hits were on point aswell also he had good meta's wordplay and hits....
BUT Shepney came back with harder hits to rival almost all of paralex's he switched em around on him and hit him back with his own shit in my opinion....so my vote goes to shepney zaney... can you guys check out my battles please against com and lionello |
UPPIN FOR VOTES....UPPIN FOR VOTES....
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nice sig ^^ anyways i think shepzany took this with a more battle worthy approach, parralexes verse was tight and it flowed but the disses werent very hard and i think he needs to use more wordplay...... you can tell he's new coz thats what i was like,,, its not his rhymes coz they are good, its his content that let him down, as soon as he knows what wins a battle on this site then he will excell in my eyes, good battle both of you
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Poll Vote Aiight Pz******
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^^^^^ i did, its just i got AOL and it takes like 20 attempts and a bit of time to do it. its done now though
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Zany my boi, so im a up this shit...
Personally this was a draw, cause flow from the enwb was ll, and punches were ill aswell, but punches came harder from zany... Flow vs Punches hmmmm......anywayz get sum more votez in... ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ |
aight break down good battle but sheph came wit it
flow it was even punchs i gave it to sheph he came harder than p wordplay sheph multis sheph good battle but the vote goes to sheph |
UPPIN FOR VOTES....UPPIN FOR VOTES....
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CLOSE FUCKIN BATTLE ENJoyed readin it but Zany had streched Shit I think PAralex came sick But i have to go wit who had hard hittin Punches and that was Zany
Vote: Zany Hit this up yo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...40&pagenumber=2 ^^vote honest |
Poll Vote Aiight Pz******
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sorry i cannot poll this vote but i actualyl disaggree with all u heads i think the newb took it his shit was nicer than zany's....i found that the newb had it !! hhonest opinon !
please vote on this battle please ssomeone it is madd slept upon | | | V |
fukin bitch ur gettin banned for freepostin and askin for votes when u cant even vote so BANNED bitch...i bet it is Paralexes dik ryding partner or somin.....and soul ITS CALLED PUNCHES WHICH HE LACKED
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^werd...
............. But Zany he's jus puttin in his opinon and asking you to vote on his since you put his opion on yours... So he can't get banned.... Anywayz uppin fo votes.... This goin on 4 too lnog lets get it closed... Pce |
kinda right there^^
BUT he freeposted and he asked for votes when he cant vote...i seen heapz of people get banned cause of that and he must've edited it cause it didn't have honest oppinion on it before or else i wouldn't of givin a shit.. Pz bye bye rebelsoul |
both verses were ALLRIGHT but i liked parallexs shit better.. he had came with better punchlines and his shit was to the point.. where as the other dude wrote a fuckin long as paragraph to get his point across
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I'm glad someone is reading the verses!
lol Respect!!! UPPIN======================================-==-= |
Vote-Shep
Why?:Shep was better in every aspect but Structure, your lines wer streteced like a fat womans stomach. So improve on that dude. Parallex your spit was pretty good but try to battle people that don't jave 13 wins yet. Good spit and elevate:) Poll on this for me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
dis guy can actually vote which is nice to see...some people who are ew dont even read the fuken verses
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Shep got it......
Floh, stucture, Vocab and basically most everything else...... parallex elevate....... Vote: Shep |
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