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Focus'd VS EnVy Ny
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i spit first same ol rules lets go..... |
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I optically blind your mind to withstand the test of time//
spitting a perfect rhyme where metaphors are metafives// Nothing has as many lines, it's like a lyrical trilogy// modern day sililoquoy that rips you metaphisically// drop rockets destroyin ya optics, you cant see me like empty eye sockets// hotter than hawaiin tropics you aint pikachu but i got you in my back pocket// nigga please I have more tools than a carpenters kit// I keep words "fit", like billy blanks on teabo and shit// god almost sent you a blessin b4 I got mah post in// So I had to key mah shyt quick n dawg its still smokin// what type a caliber you expect? rap charity and im wack exempt// redirect ya verse and save ya breath you cant test the text game It's over whos NEXT |
.:Just Seen....Seemed For Like A Open Mic N Damn Dat was A Fast Drop...Droppin Wen Im Dun:.
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not really......it took me like 20 min to do dat! but its cool good luck dowg.............................................. ......................................
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Brooklyn Holla Back
Focus'd Needs To Elevate Cuz His Skill Is Lower Than Old Tities In There 90's If You Look For Me In Focus'd Food It's Not Hard To Find Me (Bit Verse) Your Style Is Just Like Your Lyrics Bittin N Simply Art~Official (Artificial) Simple Fact Change Your Name To Marvin Because Your Gay Everyday Face That (Marvin Gaye-Singer) It's Like All Of His Punches As Rented Cuz They Come With The Least (Lease) Effect Focus Puts Dicks In His Mouth So He Gets The Sound Hard Affect .:.:PlAy TyMe OvA bUh Bye:.:. Focus'd Being A Video Director Only Way Your Verse Making The Cut Classify This Lyricist A Vulture The Way I Eat Your Guts Anotha Fiyah Masta Piece.... N I Had One Of Ur Lines A While Bak On My Verse But Its All Good...Good Luck |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7494#post767494
vote here and i'll return da favor honestly |
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Envy Murdered This Kid.. If It Wasn't Pre-Writ
It Might As Well Have Been.. Cuz iT Wasn't Good Either Way.. EnVy Had The Punches .. Wayy Better Punches Vote - EnVy NY |
I give this to Envy
better disses tho Focus'd have da vocab Vote = Envy can ya'll vote on dis battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78905 thnx yo |
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I call this a Murder....Envy ....took this better punches......better overall....=envy
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yo envy took this shit easily. better, flow, punches, and metas.
~one~ vote- envy ny fgsfdgdfgsdfgsdfgasdfg |
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ENVY. HANDS MOTHERFUCKIN DOWN
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Focus'd that tai bo shit was played wit the "and shit" part just to rhyme it and what the fuck? POKEMON? ARE U KRAZY? you commited suicide dogg!
Punches:Envy Flow:Tie Wordplay:Envy Enjoyment:Envy Overall:Envy but i did enjoy focusd for some reason lol Vote: Envy NY |
3 one-line votes were taken away from envy... 2-0 favor of Envy... UPPIN for these kids.
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Doesnt Really Matter But Whatever...
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ok
Punches-envy Flow-envy Wordplay-envy Structure-envy Creativity-envy Vocab-focus'd Vote-envy was one sided in my opinion |
sorry...forgot to drop a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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^^^^^ He's Tellin' The Truth..... No quoted votes. -Amby |
I tried swayin the vote for Focus'd... wow, i'm cool :)
Don't sway the vote either if you can't vote. -Amby |
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Envy took this in all catgories, murdered in wordplay and punches, and flow...
I think thats all that needs to be said... Pce |
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Here i'mma break it down,
Flow- focus'd Punches - envy (focus'd had none) Wordplay - envy Personals- none Overall Envy - his punches won this battle |
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