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IceBerg420 09-11-03 04:27 AM

That match U all been waitin for...."IceBerg420 vs.13th disciple" PINK SLIPS
 
15-20 lines max
no crew votes (Regime)
No D/R votes
No vote swaying
No Freeposts
Only post if u're poll voting
All votes must be thoroughly Explained..
No hate votes, If U have beef wit either MC ya cant vote
No Recyling
No Biting
No Bitchin
500+ posts 2 vote
no feeding
1 hour after check in....drop

13th Disciple 09-11-03 11:16 PM

checkin in beyaatch.......................................... ..............................
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IceBerg420 09-11-03 11:20 PM

Check-in.......................Motha Fucka.....................................
.................................................. ...........................................

13th Disciple 09-12-03 12:17 AM

yo....is it just me.....or does Iceberg do nuthin but bitch?....its
time to put an end to this shit.....keystyle baby....




like SNL's Ambigously Gay Duo skit...Berg stop riding our dick!....
i seen ur sig..'Fall Of The Regime?' how?...noone ever heard of TIC
shit, Avalon beat u dyslexic bringin NOLAVA, ur easy like a problem
2 solve...
then one of the illest in regime beat u but couldn't teach ur verses
to Evolve..
how u gonna act like a Dr. Evil?...when 'Power' is sumthin u lack?..
its lights out!!.....like a Somalian dressed in nuthin but black......
ur style is played..like the 80's jeans wit holes & filled wit a patch..
ur wack, even Knight called u out even after caught bitin from a
wrestling match...
'Reverse Bladed Sword?',more like nerf javelin,cuz its the Revenge
of The Nerd....
Fuck Iceberg,even RB held a ceremony namin him biggest of herbs
u claim u hate Regime,but yet in the forum ur the top rated poster
& 28-40 shows u couldn't deliver fire, even wit defaulty toasters..
better collab wit Tom Cruise..for u this battle is Impossible Mission
^notice the setup to show that ur fake, like a backslidin Christian
time to serve up this slip for this bitch, get rid of the shit talker...
and leave Berg more banned than 2 Live Crews Luke Skywalker...
nuthin but personals,why play wit words,when goin for the core?..
i see the bitch in u and David Banner already said that Real Girls
Get Down On The Floor...



there it is .....bitch.......i didn't even have to pull out the big guns
for a pussy like u.......

13th Disciple 09-12-03 12:17 AM

i know u been waitin for me to drop....u got 10 minutes by the
way....so paste ur prewritten........................................ ...............

IceBerg420 09-12-03 12:26 AM

*Check out this nigga(13th) pic...for those who aint seen it or havent peeped it in a while.....Pertains to some of the personals...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70284


13th disciple also known as 13th dickhead the leader of regime..
He claims he mean.... please, this bitch rocks a jerry curl like Mike did in his teens...(micheal Jackson)
I've been waitin to have u banned, fuck the rest of them herbs..
I've seen better MC's than him on MCdonald's signs in the suberbs..
I bet his stupid ass gone throw a played line about my record..
Well lets talk about U and how ya crew dick ride.... like ya wife or better..
Watch me Iron this nigga out like my name was Blac & Decker
Bitch I'm the big cheese round here...U justa shred of cheddar
13th get ready to be slipped...considered yaself checked..
When Erect.. only thing he good for, is askin men "Who's Next"(check his title under name)
His mind gets outta wack when I talk back about his kids, he trips...
Well guess what? After I fucked ya wife, she told me u looked good in pink slips...(Oooo)

(feel the storm.....Its comin....Get ready to be slipped)

Ol sweet & sour ass nigga....Fuck U and ya pussy ass crew
wit no skills ya spits didn't do shit but Evolve into Sureal wack raps & H4iKu's..
Beat me? U tried to.....Man this motha fucka aint real..
Suckin people off for votes is the only time 13th "Blessed wit skills"(check his sig)
The deal....Ya words are more useless than a pussy Thug named Whyte...
While mine pull more TriX than that pokemon lovin fagget Jay Cyph....
Thats word life...This a pinkslip battle but you'll never see the end of me
13th you's a pussy and Spliv still can't lose his virginity

*edited for spelling.......

Mr.Christensen 09-12-03 02:13 AM

cant vote...wont vote...
just upping cause i want to see the end of this...
good drop from both...
sorry to be a F.A.G.

BROOKLYN 09-12-03 02:09 PM

ur style is played..like the 80's jeans wit holes & filled wit a patch..
ur wack, even Knight called u out even after caught bitin from a
wrestling match...
^
THAT KILL'D IT FOR ME

ICE HAD SOME NICE PERSONALS & PUNCHES BUT 13TH HAD THE WORDPLAY & SICKER PERSONALS
HIS WHOLE VERSE WAS PURE HUMILIATION TO ICE BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TO ICE FOR DOING HIS BEST

VOTE=13TH


DROP A VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79243

IceBerg420 09-12-03 03:10 PM

80's jeans with holes and filled with a Patch? WTF.....I dunno where U saw the funny in that one man but w/e lets keep the votes comin.............



*Sarcasm not bitchin u homo (13)

Madd Preacher 09-12-03 03:35 PM

13th: evalutation

funny

how u gonna act like a Dr. Evil?...when 'Power' is sumthin u lack?..
its lights out!!.....like a Somalian dressed in nuthin but black......


aiight

u claim u hate Regime,but yet in the forum ur the top rated poster
& 28-40 shows u couldn't deliver fire, even wit defaulty toasters..

finisher was ok

i see the bitch in u and David Banner already said that Real Girls
Get Down On The Floor...

the rest of the verses i didnt post because they were either shit and didnt make 'too good of sense"...or were just plaid or you came lame...over all i say you did a 6/10 effort with this....woulda been 5 but personals made up for it....




Berg: evalutaiton


Opening was funny as fuck...good job


13th disciple also known as 13th dickhead the leader of regime..
He claims he mean.... please, this bitch rocks a jerry curl like Mike did in his teens


if somma yall dont notice...even though he didnt highlight it....the verse has multi connections in it...


ooooooo!...(thats all i can say)


13th get ready to be slipped...considered yaself checked..
When Erect.. only thing he good for, is askin men "Who's Next"


clownin...


His mind gets outta wack when I talk back about his kids, he trips...
Well guess what? After I fucked ya wife, she told me u looked good in pink slips...(Oooo)


alright alright...im not gonna post any more lines...because this duke spit madd fire....

damn...thats pimp game right here....and imma punchline man...Bergs verse was fulla them...


Hands down vote goes to BERG...

if i cant post ma poll at school..(where i am right now) imma do it when i get home...


Igido

13th Disciple 09-12-03 06:01 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by IceBerg420
80's jeans with holes and filled with a Patch? WTF.....I dunno where U saw the funny in that one man but w/e lets keep the votes comin.............




No Bitchin.......

that was ur rule.....this is just a warning

IceBerg420 09-12-03 06:09 PM

I wasnt bitchin dumbfuck......I just stated the obvious..................
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Born To Kill 09-12-03 06:26 PM

I gotta give this to Berg for some really hard hitting and mean ass punches...

He must hate this cat cuz he was downright cruel.

13th came good, but not like he should of.
(Why would you use a played as hell line like Mission Impossible in a pink slips battle?)

The "fucked his wife/you look good in pink slips" line was the nail in the coffin on this one.
(Too hard hitting, too personal, and great wordplay)

Flow and wordplay and metas were ok...
This was so personal, it had to come down to punches and Berg just came too hard.

On a side note...
I think this shit is sad.
All us are here for ONE FUCKIN REASON...
Despite our ages, our races, and our fucking countires.
Despite our crews, our jobs, and our talent levels...

We all love this rap game.

We are all here for that one shared reason and you think it would bring us together but, no, we gotta have heat left and right and stupid fucking pink slip battles (losing good ass slingas) over internet heated bullshit...

We should all take our heads outta our asses.

Peace

Chrit Alias 09-12-03 06:44 PM

The Ultra-Mega-Mega-Super-Non-D/R breakdown of B2K's herbness:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77588

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ight=iceberg420

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ight=iceberg420


You fucking herb
I should lend you my name

Word Life

Soul Theory 09-12-03 06:51 PM

I'll be back to vote . . . but for the record . . .

. . . droppin' links in battles is extremely homo . . .

13th Disciple 09-12-03 07:35 PM

well Berg....u should already be DQ'd for bitchin but its all good...
Duper has a good point and proved it...and by the way Ice, ur
runnin out of D/r's....soon...the vets will be in here.....and lets
see what happens then...ghost

IceBerg420 09-12-03 07:50 PM

^LMAO STFU.............................................. ....................................
.................................................. ...U've been sonned once already
today..................................

13th Disciple 09-12-03 08:39 PM

Berg and B2K...yall are some herbs.......u just got caught D/r
each other...so u just went and voted against each other so it
won't look suspicious....yall like some undercover faggots and
shit....lol.........

IceBerg420 09-12-03 08:46 PM

^Is that bitching I here........................And besides nigga U must cant read cuz Evolve Clearly merked that man....Kinda Like How I'm merking U now......See what happens when ya show ya ugly mug on the Internet....U & B2K are prime examples....LMAO.......
..................sonned.........

13th Disciple 09-12-03 08:49 PM

^keep that attitude.....cuz watch how i enjoy using ur same line
against u.......hahahah............scrub.................. ..........................

Mad Man 09-12-03 09:47 PM

I make a point to check out all Pink Slip battles, and this being a battle between 2 Emcee's that I truly hate, I'm glad to see this. But seeing only one can go. 13 took punches, meta's, clown's, all that shit, Ice Berg, you truly blew on this, just like all of your battles, and this battle my friend is a big sausage fest. 13th is still reigning supreme, no matter how much it hurts for me to say it.

Sir Cedrych 09-12-03 10:06 PM

the poll should be 3-2 iceberg lead and u know it...all of those votes were simply fair....u guyz hate to see one of ur "buds" to leave...

IceBerg420 09-12-03 10:08 PM

Man WTF someone been fuckin wit the poll!! I just saw the damn thing and it was 3-1 and now how is it 2-2!!I smell a Dirty Mod....Thats complete Bullshit that U got to get a mod to cheat for yo ass 13th..........I saw that thread U posted in Emcee Interactions and All of your D/R's flocked toward U like some pussies.........This some BS and believe the polls will be fixed....U lucky I even let Madmans Hate vote count....

13th Disciple 09-12-03 10:14 PM

^lol.......i don't know what ur talkin about...but u are cute when
u get mad.......come on.......lets kiss.....lmao...............................

*directed to IceGlacier*

Sir Cedrych 09-12-03 10:18 PM

this shit should be fair tho...madman's vote was indeed a hate vote...the polls should be intended as 3-1 or 3-2 so blah

13th Disciple 09-12-03 10:20 PM

^get off Icebergs dick...i'm tired of yall d/r's and such comin up
in the thread....don't let me unleash Regime on yall faggots and
slip ur whole crew....

and fair?!.....look at Born to Kill's vote....wtf...are u serious?......
the links are even provided....shall we bring up the rest of the
cats also?.....shit, herbs.

Sir Cedrych 09-12-03 10:29 PM

^^^lol i aint on nobody's dick...and how are yall gonna slip us if we dont accept? hmm...well anywayz i just want shit to be fair....however i think everyone want this shit to be fair

IceBerg420 09-12-03 10:31 PM

Dont listen to the Dipshit....He fucked around and sucked Madmans Dick and got him to vote for him and take one of my votes away........................

Chrit Alias 09-12-03 10:50 PM

13th's Votes:
Brooklyn
MadMan

Icebergs votes:
B2K
Madd Preacher

First vote of battle was completely hate:

"i give this to iceberg just becuz i wanna see 13 outta here
vote: iceberg"

Polls are correct at 2-2
Even though B2K was a D/R vote

phiXion 09-12-03 11:22 PM

This battle was closer than I expected, IceBerg did come pretty hard in this verse I dont care what you all say, If you think hes whack good for you....But he had a decent verse this time aiight? Now I got your PM IceBerg...And this aint a hate vote so dont trip aight.....

13th hit hard with most of his punchlines and disses, and humour, although ive seen way better from him and when I was reading his verse I was shocked coz I expected way more, then I read IceBergs verse and decided I was going to vote for him because at the time I thought he had the better verse, But I double checked the verses to make sure of the vote but then I read 13th'z lines closer and felt that they hit a lot harder then IceBergs....Berg left 13th with black eyes tho...Coz the part where he disses the whole crew was mad tight.....But it wasnt enuff to take 13th....

This battle was close, I think the way the mods have dicked the poll is bullshit, but whatever.....my vote goes to 13th disciple.....

No hate to anyone, but vote=13th Disciple

Axiom 09-12-03 11:59 PM

I just cleaned some free posts... keep that shit down to a minimum...

*EDIT* I took away madd preacher's vote... he only has 2 wins... no way he can vote in ELITE.

Perfekt 09-13-03 12:38 AM

13



like SNL's Ambigously Gay Duo skit...Berg stop riding our dick!....
i seen ur sig..'Fall Of The Regime?' how?...no one ever heard of TIC

6 / 10 Eh .. It was an alright set up , could have been punchin harder

shit, Avalon beat u dyslexic bringin NOLAVA, ur easy like a problem
2 solve...
then one of the illest in regime beat u but couldn't teach ur verses
to Evolve..

7.5 / 10 No Lava Was kinda weak but the Set up with Evolve was nice

how u gonna act like a Dr. Evil?...when 'Power' is sumthin u lack?..
its lights out!!.....like a Somalian dressed in nuthin but black......

8.5 / 10 Nice Metaphor That Livend the Verse up a lot

ur style is played..like the 80's jeans wit holes & filled wit a patch..
ur wack, even Knight called u out even after caught bitin from a
wrestling match...

5 / 10 Eh... Kinda Weak

'Reverse Bladed Sword?',more like nerf javelin,cuz its the Revenge
of The Nerd....
Fuck Iceberg,even RB held a ceremony namin him biggest of herbs

6 / 10 Ehhh..... Still Kinda Weak, Set up was alright

u claim u hate Regime,but yet in the forum ur the top rated poster
& 28-40 shows u couldn't deliver fire, even wit defaulty toasters..

9.5 / 10 Thats what I expect From 13 2 punches and a metaphor in 1 line set up perfectly

better collab wit Tom Cruise..for u this battle is Impossible Mission
^notice the setup to show that ur fake, like a backslidin Christian

6.5 / 10 Alright Metaphor coulda been better

time to serve up this slip for this bitch, get rid of the shit talker...
and leave Berg more banned than 2 Live Crews Luke Skywalker...

6.5 / 10 ONce Again Metaphor was kinda weak , but punch was decent

nuthin but personals,why play wit words,when goin for the core?..
i see the bitch in u and David Banner already said that Real Girls
Get Down On The Floor...

6.5 / 10 It was a good line but not good enough to finish a Battle


Line By Line - 62 / 90.... 69%
Punches - 6 / 10
Metaphors - 8 / 10
Flow - 8 / 10
Multis - None
Wordplay - 7 / 10
Complexity - 7 / 10
Personals - 5.5 / 10
^^ - 41.5 / 60 - 74 %


Final Score - 71 . 5% C




IceBurg


13th disciple also known as 13th dickhead the leader of regime..
He claims he mean.... please, this bitch rocks a jerry curl like Mike did in his teens...(micheal Jackson)

[b] 6.5 / 10 Ehh... Im not a fan of dissin sumone on there Appearence but Otherwise it was an alright Metaphor


I've been waitin to have u banned, fuck the rest of them herbs..
I've seen better MC's than him on MCdonald's signs in the suberbs..

7.5 / 10 MC / Mcdonalds Line kinda played but none the less a good set up and Metaphor

Watch me Iron this nigga out like my name was Blac & Decker
Bitch I'm the big cheese round here...U justa shred of cheddar

1 / 10 U Justa Shred Of Chedder..? Any resemblance to Younggadgets Spaggetti Line? Wow its not only a horrible line but a horrible biten line.... WACKNESS AT ITS WORST

13th get ready to be slipped...considered yaself checked..
When Erect.. only thing he good for, is askin men "Who's Next"(check his title under name)

7 / 10 Nice Set up and Punch

His mind gets outta wack when I talk back about his kids, he trips...
Well guess what? After I fucked ya wife, she told me u looked good in pink slips...(Oooo)

5.5 / 10 First Line Was Wack as Fuck , But second Line Compenstates with a nice Metaphor

Ol sweet & sour ass nigga....Fuck U and ya pussy ass crew
wit no skills ya spits didn't do shit but Evolve into Sureal wack raps & H4iKu's..

6.5 / 10 Nice Metaphor..

Beat me? U tried to.....Man this motha fucka aint real..
Suckin people off for votes is the only time 13th "Blessed wit skills"(check his sig)

8.5 / 10 Nice Set Up and Personal , One of your best lines

The deal....Ya words are more useless than a pussy Thug named Whyte...
While mine pull more TriX than that pokemon lovin fagget Jay Cyph....

5 / 10 Weak...

Thats word life...This a pinkslip battle but you'll never see the end of me
13th you's a pussy and Spliv still can't lose his virginity

5 / 10 Alright Line Weak for a Finisher



Line By Line - 45.5 / 90 50%
Punches - 6 / 10
Metaphors - 8 / 10
Flow - 7 / 10
Multis - None
Wordplay - 6 / 10
Complexity - 8 / 10
Personals - 10 / 10
^^ 46 / 60 - 78 %


Final Score - 64 % D


Winner Of The Pink Slip Battle In A Close One............ 13



- Perfekt



EDIT - AMBIGOUS POLL MY VOTE FOR 13 , FOR SUM REASON IT WONT LET ME POLL MY VOTE.... SO COULD YOU POLL IT

Sureal 09-13-03 12:43 AM

^Now Thats A Break Down... 4-2 For 13... Uppin For More Votes..
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Derive 09-13-03 01:03 AM

well anyways....i cant top that shit lol...but anyways ill cut to the chase

13th's Verse:
Punches:8/10
Wordplay:7/10
Flo:8/10
Metaphors:7/10
Muilties:None That i Saw
Complexity:7/10

Total:37/50

IceBerg:
Punches:7.5/10
Wordplay:6/10
Flo:6/10
Metaphors:6.5/10
Muilties:None That I Saw
Complexity:8/10

Total:36/50

Was A Very Close Match But...

Vote-13Th


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