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cameronj86 vs Mentally Kursed
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u spit first i set up no c h dr votes |
okay checking into the battle, good luck. Lets have some fun here and may the best man win... *continues to talk shit until he reaches the 100 character minimum*
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Ah crap so I gotta get registered by alldig or the end? Dammmit, well I'll prolly drop by the end of the night or tommorow morning. Don't worry i will prolly still end up goin first
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aight jus drop as soon as possible and u only need to get registered by the admin to vote in elite
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Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman? I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets |
aight ill spit in a lil bit
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Soooooooooo, ummmmmmmm when's a "lil bit" |
hey you hurry up and bring your ass in here, and why'd you change your avvy and signature from megaman. Fuck I hate going first when assholes do stupid shit like this....
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aight ima start keyin mine now and yea i put mega back in so itll go wit ur personals when i read it i didnt understand y u said y i took it out but now i do be done in a lil bit
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Mentally Kursed's last statement posted: 09-13-03 at 02:54 PM
boy it must be some verse you got, it is taking over 3hours to write!!!!!!! All these delays you better bring some serious heat mental. Stop stalling and drop dammit |
Aight check it,
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills// Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal// Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest// Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”// Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest// Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists// Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift// Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift// Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face// Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case// |
Aight check it,
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills// Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal// Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest// Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”// Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest// Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists// Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift// Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift// Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face// Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.I. to solve the case// *edited for spellin* |
uppin and only read my 2nd verse the first one had errors
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lol cus the first one had spellin errors
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ok my vote goes to.................... cameron
reasons - better flow, some tight ass punches, but yet some whack pucnches, seriously the dog line was off the hook mentally had some good punches also but i wasnt feelin his flow, and u worked off his readers digest line so that was no good, so again my vote goes to cameron, props to both of ya |
oh yeah couled ya vote on this batttle for me its been mad slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4772#post774772
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uppin 200 posts to vote
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NO.
Mental posted in IR to have that vote taken away... nowhere in the rules does it say "200 to vote" you can't change rules because he voted against you. Vote stays, ima clean up all the freepostin right now. And got dayum... you took foreverrrr to spit. |
the readers digest shit was nice, and the c.s.i thing too, but cameron had harder punches and personals. i didn't like the fruit loops in the start either. you took to long, mental.
vote=cameron now return the vote, all yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79486 |
ok gonna break this down
Cameron Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan ^^Michael Strahan lines are played, you tried putting a creative spin on this, but its still played. Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words ^^First line was nice as hell, but I didn't really like the second line, just wasn't feeling it. Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman? ^^setup was bad, but you made up for that with a nice personal. I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic ^^setup was blah but DAYUMMMMMMMM nice punch prob the best in your verse. To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets ^^this was kinda stretched, but decent finisher nonetheless. Overall-decent verse. Some punches hit hard, others were wack, but props to ya. 7.5/10 Mentally Kursed- Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills// Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal// ^^horrible opener, had no flow to it whatsoever. Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest// Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”// nice bar, good use of multi's, you combined them well with your punches here, nice. Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest// Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists// ^^once again, you lost your flow, punch was bad here, blah. Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift// Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift// ^^good use of multi's, but this did not hit very hard. Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face// Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case// ^^once again, good multi's, but choppy flow and punch was not hard-hitting. Overall-I've seen much better from you, this wasn't your day man, punches were off, flow was choppy, the only thing I liked were your multi's, which are of no use if you can't combine them with punches. 4/10 So Punches-Cameron Flow-Cameron Wordplay-Cameron Structure-Cameron(MK try not splitting your bars.) Vocab-MK Multi's-MK Metas-Cameron. Opener-Cameron Finisher-Cameron VOTE=Cameronj86 |
My vote goes to Mentally Kursed.I was feeling his flow more
than Cameron's even though ya'll had some good punches. Cameron had it in complexity and multis though. GOOD SHIT THOUGH GUYS >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Gone too. -Amby |
That dyslexic shgit was the hottest thing ive heard in weeks...damn and that wallet shit was hardd EVery catagory to cam no dr good spit
Mentally complained bout ya vote... gone -Amby |
um............ okay........... so most of the votes don't count, well does anyone else wanna vote on this battle
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good battle.....
break it... ight FLOW....tie punches...mental meta's..werent many...so tie vocab...mental structure..tie enjoyabilit..tie origanalit...tie overall a good battle....but ...mental pulled it through by a smidge.. NO BEEF....NE WHERE... GREAT BATTLE... JUST I THAUGHT MENTAL..CAME..WIT IT... |
Metaphores - cameronj86
Vocabulary - Mentally Kursed Enjoyment - Mentally Kursed Punchlines - cameronj86 Wordplay - Mentally Kursed Creativity - tie Personals - neither Structure - cameronj86 Opener - cameronj86 Finisher - Mentally Kursed Multies - cameronj86 Flow - tie Overall - cameronj86 (5-4) Highlights: cameronj86 -He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan -To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace Mentally Kursed Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case// |
ill break this down bar by bar, as fair as possible.
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan ehh ok.. ill give this 6/10 Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words second line was confusing, first was ok, 6/10 Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman? lmao, nice personal 9/10 I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic wasnt feelin it, 5/10 To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets pretty nice 8/10 overall- a good verse with a few nice punchlines, i was feelin it though... 34/50 Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills// Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal// lol... solid punch 7/10 Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest// Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”// very good wordplay, not much of a punch but very nice bar, 8/10 Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest// Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists// LOL made me laugh, and im not in a good mood so thats hard 2 do right now, 7/10 Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift// Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift// pretty good pretty good, 7/10 Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face// Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case// whats the FBB? good setup bar and lost me on the second line. 6/10 35/50 damn that was some close shit.. its almost impossible to make a decision, both verses were very tight, and its down to the last point. MK wins by one point. he had a more consistent verse, he only had one or two that stood out, and cam had some good punchlines, but had some confusing bars and lacked consistency. i broke this down as much as possible. vote-Mentally Kursed hit this up honest, no DR BS.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79874 |
My vote goes to Mentally Kursed.I was feeling his flow more
than Cameron's even though ya'll had some good punches. Cameron had it in complexity and multis though. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ agreed..................1 |
I voted so hit this up honestly:
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yeah i would have to say mental....i was feelin his a bit more...but that dyslexic one was dope cam......props to both..........
vote= mental |
i thought cameron came wit the full package he had everythin ment came hard but not hard enought vote cam
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^ Bullshit votes don't count.. One sentence votes = bullshit votes.
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OK... i don't know why this was closed... i asked The End and he didn't close it... so i reopened it and set the polls with the honest votes.
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yea i asked him if u jus put he had better punches and flow count and he said no so i showed him it he took off roux vote and mc thrilla votes cus they were one line votes i told everyone you cant jus say betta punches *cough the first vote *cough* but thats how it went it should be 2-2 cus j dubya and rappad explained their votes
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Tight battle props to both,
BREAKDOWN Metas-Cam Punches-Tie Flow-Tie Structure-Cameron Wordplay-Mental Vocab-Mental Opener-tie Multi's-Mental Finisher-tie VOTE=Mental 3/2.............. peace |
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Cameron's Flow was Better...(ryme Scheme)...the Punches Hit Better Too. To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets That Line was Your Best Line in My Opinion... -------------------------- Mentally Cursed, Your flow had some Good Wordplay.. Vocab was better then Cam's...But Punches Didnt STAND OUT as much Too Me.. CLOSE BATTLE... POLL VOTE-CAM.. Return The Favor AND DroP An hOnEsT VoTe Me –VS- IceBerg420 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79004 Me –VS- PugiList. STOP SLEEPING! http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=79262 |
i'll break it down
flow=both Multies=MK Personals=Cam Vocab=Mk Overall=VOTE MK PROPS TO BOTH I've seen numerous battles where you post crappy explanations... start explanin. -Amby |
Well, this was close...
But I'm a toss this to Mental cuz he simply hit more often. Cameron had a couple of filler lines that kinda cost him. No doubt, the NYPD line was great, but it wasn't a diss. The "kiddie porn" line was good, but, again not a diss. The "bland/megaman" line was played. I think everyone who's battled Kursed lately has used it. Mental had no filler and hit the whole way along. Flow: Mental Punches: Mental Wordplay: Cameron Metas: Cameron Multi's: Mental Very close. But... Mentally Kursed |
this was a good one, it feels better when the vote is 4 vs. 4
let me break it down......camreron punches were mostly on point, they were complex and thorough but some were too complicated, and others didnt make sense, and that "reachin for the wallet"line was pure ill, that had to be my favorite one of this battle, but your flow wasnt there, some strected bars and choppy shit mentally kursed, you also had some good punches, they werent as hard as cam's but your deleveiry was well put, and some of your lines were played in that catergory, your flow was all there too, and i seen u threw some multis in there, but try to up your vocab, and wordplay, make da battle more interestin vote=mentally, good shit to both, but his stuck out |
Another crappy vote by COM opens the battle at 4-4. These kids need a final vote here.
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