dmoney419 vs lil_ballin_boy
 

ok post 10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no b/s
no biting
u prolly know the rules

dawg you spit first im ready when you are dawg go when your ready im checking in just make sure you spit before 10:30 holla

ill post 1st

ok damn its been a while ok here i go
please sir dont hold anything back, lose track of time decidin if ur black
subconcios takes over cuz u think rap, styles, while u talk smack
thinks his puches are hooks and jabs, bu hes still wearin pads
tryna get mad spittin this and dats kinda sad but he couldnt touch glass
i see the future and i know ur shite weak
couldnt spit hot if ur feices produced heat
obviously ur cool cuz u write rhymes smoke weed and drink 40s
"i do all the gangsta thing" i jus do what i see in the stories
bitch leave ya hopless and knock ya balls out
word by word ur unworthy cuz i made the call out

sorry bout the delay got held up with someone at my door

ight its all good

please sir dont hold anything back? you would wish i would hold back when i kick you in the sack
im only losing track of time when your girl is licking my sack i give da bitch a heart attack
when i throw one of my "hooks" youll fall to the ground like a sack of books
i aint got time to play little boy because im the real macoy
the last thing you hear is click click boom the last thing you say is damn hes a loon
im crazy and you better know it you will never be able to flow with it
im deadly so you better run and hide you dont want me to pull out my nine
that would be like telling death your ready to die you know me boy you know i dont lie
my times almost up but my reign of terror isn't because you know it aint to pleasent
you witnessed it yourself because you were burned to ashes and put up on a shelf

its all good playa now we need votes

ight holla and vote give some tips to i want to see what i need to improve on and what im getting good at thanks

come on people vote im bored right now and i wanna see some votes vote fair also thanks i need some critiqueing holla

yo uppin for votes............................................. ..................................................

vote-grotesgue

Why: d you are such a fucken noob, you were feeding on his verse, which is big big no no, not cool at all. Most MC's around here frown upon it, so that is why you are not getting the vote, next time don't feed off of his verse.

Otherwise if you edit out everything that is feed then you would lsoe because gro had better punches and flow to go along with it. Though this is only a noob battle. Elevate and keep trying.

thanx for the vote still upppin............................................ ................................................

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this is gettin mad slept on please vote, yo d help me up this..............................................

uppin for votes holla we sleepin vote and get this battle over.............................................. ................. its a rookie battle but vote anyway critique the battle holla

wow this has gotten slept on................................................ .................................................. ..........

hey yo d, are ya up for a rematch, noones votin on this one so lets battle again....................................

what the hell come on and vote jesus we want this battle to get over damn rook battles need votes and critiquing too damn

godamn this has been slept on................................................ .................................................. ...........................

yo grotesque, u proly should stop uppin ur battle, ull be dqd, and the win will go to D, so make sure u pay attention to it, im just helping u out dawg, my vote goes to grotesque because he had little more to his verse, but for D, yeah dawg u do need to keep elevating,

vote: grotesque

yo ima say grotesque took this, heres my breakdown.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-grotesque
personals-grotesque
overall-grotesque

props to the both of ya, but ima say grotesque takes this.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84864
itd be much appreciated.

peace.......

Grotesque got this man it was a good battle but this shit got mad slept on for a while but he wont forget about it my vote goes to Grotesque......................................... .........................................

flow=grotesque
punches=grotesque
structure=grotesque
wordplay=grotesque
creativity=dmoney
overall=grotesque

grotesque got this cuz he came harder with the punches---the other start rappin bout how he's gonna shoot em and shit started off aight but ended like crap.

vote- grotesque.....

str8 up reason........
dmoney fed offa gro like a motha fucker.....and i hate that......

major lack in creativity.......just shows u have nuttin....absolutely nuttin.......
hope you take this advice.....cus it will cost u more votes in the future...pc*1*