saracen vs Restricted
 

10 lines
no crew votes
no bullshit votes
no d.r votes
no feedin
no bitin

WEN U CHECK IN...WE GOT 30 MIINUTES 2 KEY SOMETHIN...

POST RIGHT WEN U DONE....

IF UR NOT DONE....UR D.Q

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...................

IGHT...DAWG...R U DONE..

IF SO....WE WIL BOTH POST R SHIT AT THE SAME TIME


that way...no funny business...

ight talk 2 me here

i got 3 bars so far u? ive got a bit of writers block so its a bit hard for me, if u edited your best 3 bars the i could post right now.

DAWG....I SAID LINES..JUST SO U KNOW...

so i hope ur only keyin 5 barz...

wait so that means ur almost done...

so just finish up

ill post in a few

yeah well i got 6 lines then.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................

aight im ready to drop.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................................

its bin predicted,that after ive inflicted,torture on restricted//
hell be left afflicted,people that thought the VET wud win left contradicted//

claim to be hip hops reincarnation,i destroy the foundation//
your stumbling over your words,cant get ur shit out like constipation//

in desperation,ull resort to masturbation,to relieve the frustation//
heres a revalation,you caused a mutation when u raped a alsation//

if this shit was for pink slips,hed have to gain an alias,and start "a new beginning"//
his name on my win list ill be imprinting,cus no chance of him winning//*

accepted the challenge from a flyweight thinkin it would equate a easy win//
after this verse,battlin me?ull be in two minds like you a conjoined twin//



* a new beginning is his crew

drop soon.............................................. .................................................. ...........................

saracen sayin u cant lose...but u just met restricted so sure~u~can/
study verbaloligy, b4 u prosecute me 4 i scrub ur wackness just 2 smure~u~again
prescriptions couldn't tell u how 2 fix me, cuz illnes dont explain my true-ability/
cuz herbz like ur self r all the same i merk them...and stil few-thrill-me/
saracen, 3-0,but still a herb chuggin miracle-grow just 2 show he can GROW-BIG/
verse so wack..i report it and copy the laughter and show it as my favorite SIG/
chopped and slaughter'd like cowz on beef-day at the meat market/
yo im tellin u lost..and u kno its true cuz u took ur spit and with a L u marked-it/
plain and simple eatin ur ripple and formin a wave that swallows ur spits main-land/
u say ur gonna make it big but ur a newbie and losin 2 me will always leave a stain'd-hand/
(bitch-slapped that fucker)

yo restricted, afta u spit, u wanna battle? i'll set it up..

no crew hate or d/r votes
8 Lines max
due in 30 mins...

wut ya say...?

Here is my view, you don't like it ten fuck off:

Punches: saracan
Flow: Saracan
Mulit: Saracan
Vocab: Saracan
Enjoyability: Restricted
Structure: Both

Overal: Saracan

Personally Restricted I thought that that verse was as played as hell. I mean you couldent catch a good flow with it, the punches fell flat on their asses and it was boreing. So in my opinion this kid merked you.

MAN.....

THAT WAS THE BIGGEST BULLSHIT IVE EVER SEEN...

BITCH GO D.R ON SOME OTHER BATTLES DUMBFUCK

hows that dick ryding???????????????????????????????????????????? ?????

its a clear brokendown vote

Man jsut because you 14-12 and don't get a vote don't mean that you got to accuse me of d/r, that verse was shit I am sorry to say. Yes I have seen way way better from you.

So don't accuse me of d/r, because that is an explained vote and your dumbass knows it, so don't get pissed.

restricted is a lil bitch...
neway...restricted u won't answer...scared? u say i'm an herb..prove it..battle me now...

8 Lines
No Crew, Hate Or D/r Votes
Due: 15 Mins Afta Set Up

u down?

NA....THAT DONT MEAN..SHIT...AGH..MABE WE'LL SEE...


but seem'd like a herbish vote 2 me....

cuz u didnt merk me thats 4 damn sure....

this battle was strr8 up ugly, nothing stood out, the sad thing is I was feeling the newbie's stuff more

Vote:Sacrcen

^^^^^IGHT THERE U GO...

all i wanted was a veterans...poin a view....

and i didnt mean 2 cuz u of ne thing .....


GOOD SPIT....u obviously got lucky....

cuz believe me u'll be merked soon enough...by me...and ur not gonna look pretty....

Tight battle
cant vote but I think this was a pretty nice battle
wont say who i think won cuz I dun
want anyone to quote off that
so gj guys

Plz hit that up with a honest vote
getting mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78833

thx

Peace............................................. ......Word

why u gonna prewrite a verse????

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^^^better believe it.....

im gonna start writin right now.....

^^na thats wat lucky herbz...do^^

so just settle down...or we can pink slip....

nah fuck doin pink slip, its just the way u said u were gonna merk me sounded like u were gonna prewrite cus if sum1 prewrites there obviously goona merk the otha person,

no beef

^^^i didnt mean ne of my posts 2 be beefz..i was just standin up....

i dont care if u beat..me...

i was also done 15 minutes b4 U ...SO ITS MY FAULT...

GOOD SPIT....

but...if u want u can judge me by that...or believe me...

dont matter....
fuck im not here 2 bullshit...

im here 2 get experienced...and

HELP OTHERZ...OUT

SO ITS ALL U DAWG....

UPPIIN 4 SOME VOTES...

CUZ I STILL DONT THINK I GOT MERKED....

BUT W/E

PEACE

Punches: Saracen
Flow: Saracen
Mulit: Saracen
fun to read: Restricted
Structure: Saracen

saracen got this pretty easily.................. vote=saracen

yeah i just took it the wrong way wen u said u were gonna merk me soon, more votes needed 3-0 to me so far

peace

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i cant vote but saracen had that from the onpening line. Restricted i have read some of your other battles and your punchlines were alot better then this, in this battle they kind of went absolutley no where. Saracen's word play was sickning, he just out puch lined, metaphored you. However you had my fav line in the battle:

verse so wack..i report it and copy the laughter and show it as my favorite SIG/ - Restricted

but if i could vote saracen would have my vote

out of 10=====Saracen=========
Punches:=======8===========6
Flow:==========7===========4
Multi:==========8===========7
Vocab:=========8===========5
Enjoyability:=====9===========7
Structure:=======6==========6
=======Overall (out of 60)=======
Overal:========46==========35

sorry restricted didn'y mean to post right then and left your name off the top...good battle, but...
Vote=Saracen

yo sorry restricted, but i really wasn't feelin' ur verse, your flow was choppy as hell, punches weren't really played but were not hard-hitting.
Saracen-decent verse, punches were ok but hella multi's, dont seperate your bars like that, and try combining the multi's and vocab with some nice punches and you will be ill as fuck.
Vote=saracen

cmon yall one more vote neede to finish it off,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,, so far 4-0 t me
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saracen took this easily vote saracen........................................... .................................................. .................................................. ............