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Young P 09-14-03 12:12 AM

~Street vs Young~ (ILL)
 
we doin like 8 or 10 lines
no d/r (cough cough), crew IS ACCEPTED since we in da same crew and no hate...
we both will spit about da same time ...
explain ur votes THOROUGHLY or u will be banned....
aight homie... lets do it...

Artikqlit 09-14-03 12:15 AM

iight...
checkin in...

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Young P 09-14-03 12:16 AM

Checkin myself in... might take a lil longer den expected cuz i gotta take a dump... lol... i'll float one for u.... hahha.... holla

The1 09-14-03 12:19 AM

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Young P 09-14-03 01:17 AM

YEA...BATTER UP DAWG...Philly vs Philly...Street vs Young... here it is!
Dis niggaz fake, call himself STREETLEGEND but more like a FABLE OF DIRT PATHS//
Shoulda called da battle anal rape, da way i'm able ta merk ass//
Though I'm keepin a clenched fist, my punchlines are gettin outta hand//
Sigs and battle verses... dis nigga jacks more shit den talibans//
Da rain and storm is ova...lets start on SUN-day and dis nigga wont even make it till Therzdee(Thursday)//
His lips are quiverin...cuz he know he couldnt keep 15 if he rocked a Carter jersey//(15 loses)
Fact is he dr. like crazy and still aint classified as agile//(doctors havta be smart)
I merk ya casual, can't handle dis beef wit care if i marked my verse as fragile//
Couldn't CONTROL da play on werds if his two faces ALTered// (his s/n is TwoFAced99)
Ya shits all-turd, DELETE all essence of ya MEMORY and watch ya computer screen falter//
aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME!


last line... control alt delete shuts off ya computer and makes ya makes ya lose memory...

Artikqlit 09-14-03 01:18 AM

iigh..

Ill Shatter~Ur~Nerves, 'Phatter~Then~Curves', I've Had~It~U~Nerd! And I'll Let U Be The Customer Cas U 'Rather~Be~Served!!!' / (Served - Defeated)

I Drop Like Drum-Rolls Cas This 'Emcees-A-Joke', U Must Agree-I'm-Dope, Cas Really Ur Opinion Means Shit When U Gotta Copy-A-Vote!! /*

You Could TAKE CRAPS ON UNSTABLE LEGOS And Your SHIT WOULDNT WRECK//
Even If You CURED DAWGS ON BATTLEFIELDS You Still Wouldnt Be A VET//**

What "are you?", the mo' merry the bigger, couldn't be an net-star if you were the "WEB's" Jerry Springer/
So "weak" you'll get buried to linger, u couldn't "learn verbal" skills if you married a singer/***

I sock a dike, You couldnt even 'open up' for me just cause my 'locks are tight' /
But I strike so much fear in you, When I arrive... you straight up just drop~the~mic /

Burned quick, ya not tha best, or damn near, even though ya recs sayin-a lot/ (he’s 25-5)
So put ya money where ya mouth-is or in other words a downpayment-on-my-cock!/ (u d/r)

*most of tha time wen he votes he quotes wut otha kat's say...
**claims he's a vet...but he aint...
***he lacks alotta lyrikal content..

Artikqlit 09-14-03 01:20 AM

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Young P 09-14-03 01:25 AM

wait...
REFERENCE:
3rd line: keepin a fist but punchin outta hand, get it
4th:yea... he stole 2 different sigs from websites includin da one we have now
5th:yea... vince carter....numba 15
6th: usual get d/r votes


VOTES...

Artikqlit 09-14-03 01:29 AM

lol u say i get d/r votes but yet ur in my crew...tha crew i made...u say i stole tha sig (which i didn't...i'm juss usin it lol) but yet ur usin it..lol

neway..votes

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Young P 09-14-03 01:31 AM

lol... u dont gotta get mad about it dawg... its just a friendly battle... btw... i like da sig and wuz more refferin to da Capital Punishment one ya used a while back...

Derive 09-14-03 01:46 AM

ok heres the layout....good battle....

structure-young p
punches-street
flo-young p
wordplay-street
vocab-street
overall-street


was a close ass battle but ima give this one to street....good job to both of ya

vote-street

Artikqlit 09-14-03 01:51 AM

1-0 me...uppin

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Young P 09-14-03 02:19 AM

TwOFAceD 99-StreetLegend
Young 33 Gunna-~Young P~


TwOFAceD 99: don't let anyone vote unless they from tha crew iight
young 33 gunna: wut about lil g, and hyp?
TwOFAceD 99: oh lil g nd hyp can vote
young 33 gunna: iight
TwOFAceD 99: put those are tha only two kat's while i'm gone
TwOFAceD 99: iight O n e
young 33 gunna: aight
young 33 gunna: im leavin too
TwOFAceD 99: oh ok
young 33 gunna: dont let anyone vote when im gone neither
TwOFAceD 99: k

HOPEFULLY YA'LL READ THIS

Artikqlit 09-14-03 02:22 AM

UPPIN FOR CREW VOTES ND OR HYP OR LIL G...

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Sir Cedrych 09-14-03 02:27 AM

aight this battle was blah

p got this, he had better punches and stronger personals
however street u had some good wordplay

p was more creative and complex i thought so.............

vote-young P

yit da dee

Young P 09-14-03 02:32 AM

werd... 1-1... dis gon be an ill battle... remember, noone else now except lil g if he decides ta vote... wait till me and street get back and ask us if u can vote

Artikqlit 09-14-03 10:46 AM

crew votes are coo tho...

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Mentally Kursed 09-14-03 10:54 AM

breakdown

punches both
flow young
consistancy both
multies didnt see that many
metas young
personals street
worth readin both
word play both but street took it by a lil better
funnieness street

overall ima have to say young on dis one everything was neck in neck but in my opinion he took it for me wit dis line

Couldn't CONTROL da play on werds if his two faces ALTered// (his s/n is TwoFAced99)
Ya shits all-turd, DELETE all essence of ya MEMORY and watch ya computer screen falter//

.................................................. ..............................................

What "are you?", the mo' merry the bigger, couldn't be an net-star if you were the "WEB's" Jerry Springer/
So "weak" you'll get buried to linger, u couldn't "learn verbal" skills if you married a singer/***

^^^tightest line

You Could TAKE CRAPS ON UNSTABLE LEGOS And Your SHIT WOULDNT WRECK//
Even If You CURED DAWGS ON BATTLEFIELDS You Still Wouldnt Be A VET//**

lol

Alchemy 09-14-03 11:04 AM

Structure: Young
Punches: Street
Flow: Young
Wordplay: Street
Vocab: Street

Overall: Street

This battle was really good. I liked the flow and punches of each verse, it was pretty hard to judge but I gave it to Street. He may not have had the structure but he had some wicked punches.

Artikqlit 09-14-03 11:09 AM

iight...2-1 me

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Mentally Kursed 09-14-03 11:13 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mentally Kursed
breakdown

punches both
flow young
consistancy both
multies didnt see that many
metas young
personals street
worth readin both
word play both but street took it by a lil better
funnieness street

overall ima have to say young on dis one everything was neck in neck but in my opinion he took it for me wit dis line

Couldn't CONTROL da play on werds if his two faces ALTered// (his s/n is TwoFAced99)
Ya shits all-turd, DELETE all essence of ya MEMORY and watch ya computer screen falter//

.................................................. ..............................................

What "are you?", the mo' merry the bigger, couldn't be an net-star if you were the "WEB's" Jerry Springer/
So "weak" you'll get buried to linger, u couldn't "learn verbal" skills if you married a singer/***

^^^tightest line

You Could TAKE CRAPS ON UNSTABLE LEGOS And Your SHIT WOULDNT WRECK//
Even If You CURED DAWGS ON BATTLEFIELDS You Still Wouldnt Be A VET//**

lol

Mentally Kursed 09-14-03 11:23 AM

after readin the verses 3 times i concluded (usin big words) that street did take it wit punches i at first put both but after readin it many times he did have a lil more

im not poll votin cus im coo wit both yall i meant 2 say that above but i messed up sorry 2 repost

Token 09-14-03 01:08 PM

Yo word it's a tie to me

Flow: Young P
Punches: Street LegenD
Wordplay: Young P
Metas: TIE
Multis: Street Legend

I ain't poll voting cuz y'all are both my homies but if i was to vote i'd probably go wit Young Legend...... i mean Street P....... lol
PEACE

Artikqlit 09-14-03 02:49 PM

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Young P 09-14-03 05:15 PM

yo... not tryna sway votes but ya'll gotta look a lil closer inta my verse .... ya missin a lot of personals.... uppin..................

Taktik 09-14-03 05:26 PM

Vote Young P

This was actually very close to call...................Young P took it with personals................line bout jackin more sigs then talibans was str8 fire..............personals win battles........................and thatds what took it for young p....................no hate you mboth haD SOME KILLER PUNCHES.......................

BTW stay away FROM CAPING YOUR WORDS all the time <both of you>

Artikqlit 09-14-03 05:40 PM

2-2...this is gonna go down to tha wire...

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Coast 09-14-03 05:41 PM

Aight the Illest cat from philly is..............

COAST 2 COAST//
I WOULD WRECK U BOTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha

/\ that was better than both ur shit, jk jk

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ok heres my explination,

some good stuff from both of u,

young, u fucked up ur flow by addin explinations in (parenthesis) at the end or ur lines, wordplay was ok,personals were good, punches ok....

street: i felt ur flow more, ur punches were good, imagery was good, wordplay was ok....

Love 2 both Philly Cats but.......

Vote =....................






















streetlegend

Artikqlit 09-14-03 05:45 PM

3-2..shit's gettin heated..

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Young P 09-14-03 05:53 PM

very^^^ im scared... dis shit is intense... ima haveta leave at 5-30 and if someone hasnt won by then, i dont want ANYONE voting even if theyre in our crew... just so i can watch it happen play by play aight....

Slik 09-14-03 06:22 PM

Good Battle....

BReak down

Flow- Both
Punches-Street
Personals-Young
Creativity-Street
Wordplay-Street


Nice Battle...Props to both....My Vote Goes To Street.....

Artikqlit 09-14-03 06:23 PM

NO MORE VOTES FOR NOW...YOUNG P HASTA GO...ONLY PPL ALLOWED TO VOTE NOW ARE SILK, BIDDY ND ICEBERG...

IceBerg420 09-14-03 06:27 PM

Young P:

YEA...BATTER UP DAWG...Philly vs Philly...Street vs Young... here it is!
Dis niggaz fake, call himself STREETLEGEND but more like a FABLE OF DIRT PATHS//
Shoulda called da battle anal rape, da way i'm able ta merk ass//

Good first line but u came kinda mediocre on the 2nd on 6/10

Though I'm keepin a clenched fist, my punchlines are gettin outta hand//
Sigs and battle verses... dis nigga jacks more shit den talibans//

nice personal, but taliban & 9/11 lines are kinda played 6/10

Da rain and storm is ova...lets start on SUN-day and dis nigga wont even make it till Therzdee(Thursday)//
His lips are quiverin...cuz he know he couldnt keep 15 if he rocked a Carter jersey//(15 loses)

Nice Punch here LoL 8/10

Fact is he dr. like crazy and still aint classified as agile//(doctors havta be smart)
I merk ya casual, can't handle dis beef wit care if i marked my verse as fragile//

Once again a Nice punch here...good meta's & wordplay 8/10

Couldn't CONTROL da play on werds if his two faces ALTered// (his s/n is TwoFAced99)
Ya shits all-turd, DELETE all essence of ya MEMORY and watch ya computer screen falter//

Ok line coulda came harder on the finisher...CPU jokes aint really funny to me...cuz nobody would usem in a real battle 4/10

Total: 32/50

Street Legend

Ill Shatter~Ur~Nerves, 'Phatter~Then~Curves', I've Had~It~U~Nerd! And I'll Let U Be The Customer Cas U 'Rather~Be~Served!!!' / (Served - Defeated)

nice multi's here good punch...had 2 read it twice to realize what u said 7/10

I Drop Like Drum-Rolls Cas This 'Emcees-A-Joke', U Must Agree-I'm-Dope, Cas Really Ur Opinion Means Shit When U Gotta Copy-A-Vote!! /*

nice personal here, good punch 7/10

You Could TAKE CRAPS ON UNSTABLE LEGOS And Your SHIT WOULDNT WRECK//
Even If You CURED DAWGS ON BATTLEFIELDS You Still Wouldnt Be A VET//**

now that was just lame LoL...Cured dawgs on battlefields...I know U coulda cam better than that...4/10

What "are you?", the mo' merry the bigger, couldn't be an net-star if you were the "WEB's" Jerry Springer/
So "weak" you'll get buried to linger, u couldn't "learn verbal" skills if you married a singer/***

1st line was nice but the 2nd one was weak....5/10

I sock a dike, You couldnt even 'open up' for me just cause my 'locks are tight' /
But I strike so much fear in you, When I arrive... you straight up just drop~the~mic /

Nice multis here, good personal on 2nd line...coulda did better on the 1st though 7/10

Burned quick, ya not tha best, or damn near, even though ya recs sayin-a lot/ (he’s 25-5)
So put ya money where ya mouth-is or in other words a downpayment-on-my-cock!/ (u d/r)

LMAO now that shit was funny...good personal too..good finisher.....10/10

Total 40/60

Vote = Street Legend

When it came down to it his punches were hittin harder & so were his personals....good battle for the both of U.....Much props...


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