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pot1ent vs. Bare Knuckles(Hot)
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1 hour to drop no hate '' crew balh blah etc etc Explain votes really well...or votes do not count |
BK you've got the pm and shit now
Verses due by 10:30(GMT...rbs time) ..............................................G'Lu ck o N e |
I ain't waiting no longer for you to drop...wanted to drop at the same time...but fuck it
... I'll slice up ya hands so you'll be true to your name Bare Knuckles or Wackness?.. there both the same Is winning in range? when he gets L he'll beef over it You try to incorporate advice in spits cuz he uses tips All punches missed me but viewers glad there gone Only gives the win away...don't say where he from Or what he's done, Truthful profile cuz he ain't rolled Bare Knuckles styles similar to oragami cuz it'll just fold Even when lyrcis are stole, he steal can't throw hits He exagerates all his verse so he can make a meal of it Ya styles will yeild in elite cuz all it'll do is give ...up... His lines need to pick up...so he got shit in his clutch So he can earn bucks from his raps he bucks his verses After this his style will be a mystery, have to un earth-it Purpose of his lines must be massages for his spine Hittin yo back...brains shelfed cuz i'll rack ya mind o N e |
One hour to drop!? That's herbed, honestly.
I've got a LONG english essay to write, I'm only finished the introduction, so I'll hit this up later, and drop a verse. It will be dropped today though, so don't fret. |
BK quit bitching i hate peeps that pre-write...who are you too say thats herbed...
It's cool, i'll wait for you to do ya thing Geez I never even accused you of anything n you gettin tangled up, take your time to diss my record...L-O-L Pz |
Potent!? You better sit and learn whenever I rip your verse,
Then leave your eyes full of more red and grey than your signature. I came to battle, equipped with stones to rock your mind, And I'm putting more shots in ya face than Fifty and Pac combined. I mustn't lie, your verse has no punches, it was just random words, Yet I'm a skinny fuck, and I'm STILL holding more weight than your verse. But I'm a dickhead too, as I love getting people pissed off with me, Whereas you're a dickhead aswell........................... literally. I'm gonig to bury you alive, and leave you scared in a coffin, Your skill is half of mine, like your wins compared to your losses. That's kind of funny, so I'm going to say what I need to, If you think you're dope.. so are the 24 people who beat you. Matter of fact, make that 25, cause I'm leaving you rocked, And it doesn't even take an idiot to know how to smoke POT. Fuck it, here comes the sixteenth line of this worthless rhyme, But I'm gonna go write for King of Theives, at least he's worth my time. "Enuff said" (Check his custom status). |
aight battle, but I think potent came out on top...some lines by both battlers were aight, lines, didn't really rhyme, but potent had better punches, wordplay, but bare knuckles had some good flow...good battle...
VOTE=POT1ENT |
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BK took this...
Potent tried to come hard... But lacked any real punches... BK takes it on punches... Vote- Bare Knuckles |
Knuckles had just a bit too much filler in his verse...
That's the only thing that cost him this battle as far as I see it. Pot1ent hit with every line, BK used a couple to talk about himself. Flow, hardness of punches, wordplay, all that...was about the same. Just more brought to the table by Pot1ent... Very close, but someone's gotta lose. Good battle by both. Peace |
Vote BK
BK just had alot better punches.. His whole verse was more consistent than Pot's............................................. ................... Further Explanation Pot1ent... your setups didnt connect to make any punches ex I'll slice up ya hands so you'll be true to your name Bare Knuckles or Wackness?.. there both the same how does the first line connect to the second... calling him wack isn't a punch... that bar is just filler Is winning in range? when he gets L he'll beef over it You try to incorporate advice in spits cuz he uses tips how does the first line connect to the second... & it seemed like you put "Is winning in range?" just cause it rhymed with your last bar... this bar is just filler as well Im not saying you dont have potential... but you aren't developing your concepts the way they should be... wording is everything Peace |
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that says it how it is i vote potient........................................... .................................................. .................
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Poten came out hard but then start to fade...
BK came out good with great flow and punches... My over all vote is for BK Northern Touch. vs MC Voodoo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74021 |
This was completely one-sided; how a voter could possible think Potent was the victor is beyond me. .
First off, Potent automatically lose points for labeling this thread "(Hot)." As for his piece, it was easily interpreted as a pre-write - at least from my point of view. None of the punches were particularly hard-hitting, or personal, for that matter. example: Quote:
What was that?! Without mentioning how fundamental it was, it just wasn't hard-hitting at all. . You seem to have the flow down, but just get more creative with your punches - do not think about them before you post; let them come to you. "Feel the vibe:" so damn blasè, yet true. Bare, on the other hand, dropped a good piece - mediocre by his standards, though. His personals are a good model for you, Potent - study them, understand them! Quote:
bwahh! Chuckle-worthy, as a matter of fact. The only thing I'd recommend for you to utilize, Bare, is wordplay. If you add some well-placed wordplay, you'd be the best text writer on this site - easily. VOTE: Bare Knuckles *Add one to the poll for me, mods. I can not poll vote from my computer. :( |
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and that is word.....vote BK |
So that does it..
After I have counted up all of the votes, It turns out as: 5-3 to me. Time to close this bad boy. |
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