J.D. vs SiCCly iLL
 

25 mins from check in
no streched lines
5-10 bars
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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

.:.GOOD LUCK.:.

checking in dogg holla lets do dissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssss

i'll check in after you spit
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ur quick to get KNOCKED OUT like MIMES on AMERICAN IDOL
yer best punches were just illiterate written typos
i'm lookin for HEAD n ya girl looks like a GENIUS
you'll neva c da LITE OF DAY like BIG PUNS PENIS
he betta hope i'm not trying to make his verse toast
cuz j Bites Mad Lyrics Claims hes STUTTERIN WITh QUOTES
hope u dont choke cuz my rhymes'll slit j 's throat
i'll bring CRACKHEADS to COURT to prove I"M DOPE
Finisher
Fuck bullets, I stab you with my pencil to fill your lungs with lead/
Add one to your head, so you know that you’ll always be “#2” whenever my names amongst the thread//

ok, checkin in...
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They say I have a sweet tooth the way I eat at your bars/
My words will cause disease, leave you infected with sars//-1
My friends call me Cobra 'cause of the venom I spit/
Your verse is yet another reason why herbs should quit//-2
Ya could have a drug addiction, every minute take a pill/
Even with all that dope in your blood you aint SiCCly iLL//-3
It's like I'm seeing decomposition as I watch ur words rot/
Putting your verse on a stove wouldn't make ya lines hot//-4
Look at this bitch he left where he was from blank/
Full of so much shit I could use him as a septic tank//-5
SiCCly's talking about how his rhymes will slit my throat/
He could cop Satan's line but wouldn't have a hot quote//-6
Like a bad nightmare my verse will continually reoccur/
You went out with about as much bang as a gun's silencer//-7

UPPIN (1)
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oh yeah, 1 more thing...NO quoted votes.
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Here we go:

Punches:Both
Flow:J
Multi:Siccly
Enjoyability:Both
Structure:Both
Vocab:J

Overal:J

This was a small yet nice battle. both Mc's came extremely hard and there verses were evenly matched up until Vocab. J had te advantage on vocab which gave ihm the win.

Siccly:Get more orgnazied, extend you lines and get better grammar. Try to get mroe multi's, you could be good if you learn more.

Drop a vote please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5249#post775249

UPPIN (2)
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UPPIN (3) Come on y'all
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Hit this up then leave a link, I'll return the favor
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You're gonna have to start uppin this SiCCly, cause I only have 1 left
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DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP
DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP DON'T SLEEP

Close Battle.Both Had Some Nice Punches And Disses.Only Turn Off From Siccly's Verse Was The 2nd To Last Line.Ive Seen The Pencil/Gun/Lead Concepty Too Many Times.Nice Punch But Played Idea.

vote-J.D.

^Thanks
Currently: J.Dubya 2; SiCCly iLL 0
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ok good shit by both but im goin wit siccle on this battle everything was just about even so it was hard to see who won in all the categories so i went by who's i felt more and it was siccle aight good shit mad props to both vote siccle

This was good battle...Punches from both were on point, but a couple of played concepts were spit as well.....SiCC used that Pencil lead concept,PLayed and J Dub used a SARS line which is definately played.....But overall I think J DUB took it....He had some nice persoanls in there plus his flowed a lot better....Siccly iLL U came hard on ya last battle that I saw but I guess U kinda fell off on this one.....

Vote = J Dubya

Hit my battle up against Prophecy_06 its a no brainer....I easily won it just need the quick 5 votes...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79803

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Come on y'all, no freepostin please...
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I VOTE FOR J DUBYA HE HAD THE BETER OVERALL FLOW AND RHYMING PATTERNS.. AIIGHT KID YO CHECK OUT MY BATTLE AGAINST PAUL.. HOLLA............................................. .................................................. ...........

yeah nice battle but i think j took it

they both had nice flow and i think j took it wit added punches and vocab

siccly did have some played lines but where still aight wit wordplay

J.Dubya - 4; SiCCly iLL - 1
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long battle, but j dubya EASILY won this, FAR better punches and siccly had a cheap verse...

vote goes to j dubya.

Kautious' vote was taken away cuz you two are riding each other's dick... and if i see you vote/voted on mc81's battle for him... his vote is bein taken away... and J.Dubya... you're bein banned... you got banned before as J~Dubya for spamming your battle threads... yet you keep doing it.

*EDIT* I just checked... J.Dubya posted at 4:47 in Mc81's battle... and 3 minutes later Mc81 voted in here... no way mc81 clicked the link right when J.Dubya posted... and couldn't have read both verses that quick.

Ambiguous, I PM'd you explaining everything. I hope you will understand. The last thing I want is to get BANNED.
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i think j tokk it wit punches flow personals metas and wordplay this was a good battle

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^Thanks. It's 4-1 again, one of the votes got removed....
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I really think JD took this
reasons:
flow
wordplay
punchlines
vocabulary

props to both emcee's
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^Thanks for the opinion, but you never poll voted man so it won't count.
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