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Paul vs Steelfist
20 lines at most
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fuck 20 lines.. i msaying i make the ruels since your a newbie.. and im saying lets do a ten bar shit
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i said 20 at most, I only need like 8.
Your face is a punching bag, and you cant stand the beating Around your eyes there's more colours than black panther meetings I'm not racist, but it's true, I do batter and destroy fags Who carry on playing wackness game like bad toy fads Your the rap boy band, in fact... your the equivalent to WHAM.... And that prooves the fact your never straight on tracks In this battle, Your rep aint the only thing im wrecking I'm taking the mickey out of your life like kidnapping disney legends I hope this ain't too complicated. I get into the disguise And become a judge and give you two thumbs up, and then two more in your eyes. hahah, good luck. Love. |
This battle is Gonna be HANGING UP like every chick he calls
CUZ HE COULDNT FLIP SHIT STANDING IN A SHITTY STALL FOR EVER THREAD IVE POSTED HES SUCKED OFF A HUNDRED AND SIXTY BALLS ILL SEND YOU OUT ON A STRETCHER LARGER THAN THE SIX OF MISSY DRAWS YOU WANNA DISS ME PAUL? YOU SHOULD GO AHEAD AND THINK THREATS SON YOU DEFEATING ME IS LIKE ELEPHANTS LOSING FIGHTS WITH INSECTS IM NOT IMPRESSED, BY THE SHIT THAT YOUR TYPING IN TEXT SON THE ONLY TIME IN- SEX, THAT YOU COULD RELATE TO A GIRL IS IF YOU COMMITED INCEST( GET IT) DELIVER A BLOW TO YOUR ASS THAT WILL HAVE YOU MOVING BACK AND FORTH LIKE BROKEN DOWN SWING SETS |
Weak Battle On Both Sides.Steelfist Had better Disses In This One So He Takes It.Punches Were Weak And There Was No Complexity
Vote-Steelfist |
lol, he never flowed, made sense or had any punches that hit me. You must be fuckign stupid to vote him, somebody who knows what a verse should be like vote next, not someone ignorant and stupid.
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Chill Kid... |
yo paul crying about votes is not going to get you anywhere..stellfist had better punchlines and more multies
i vote for steelfist |
Personally I think Steel Fist took this....His punches were funnier & they hit harder....Especially this one right here....
FOR EVER THREAD IVE POSTED HES SUCKED OFF A HUNDRED AND SIXTY BALLS ILL SEND YOU OUT ON A STRETCHER LARGER THAN THE SIX OF MISSY DRAWS ^Comedy........LoL Vote = Steelfist A hit up my battle against Prophecy_06....... |
^^agree with alpha.....this was kinda weak...but it was pretty good.....Steelfist had much better punches, vocabulary, wordplay, and complexity....he pretty much ran this battle through....nice job from u Paul....but pick up on ur punches....
Check This: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79766 peace 4:20 |
lol.. you liked that shit.. yeah i guess that shit was pretty funny but what i ment to say is" ILL SEND YOU OUT ON A STRETCHER LARGER THAN THE SIZE OF MISSY'S DRAWS"
LOL I MESSED UP ON THE EDITING |
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I have to admit it was a weak battle...
ANyways I have a problem that I cant poll vote cause of a problem with my voter status. So if an admin or mod see this please give my vote to Steelfist... This is how I break it down Flo = Steelfist Multi's = Steel Fist Punches = Paul Structure = Neither Overall = Steelfist Check my battle Northern touch. vs. MC Voodoo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74021 |
yea this was a mediocre battle...paul lacked creativeness..he had no heat..punches were weak..disses was ok...he had a terrible starter verse...elementary my dear..
steelfist did'nt hit that hard either but he had betta punches..disses were basic..work on some wordplay and bring heat fellas! vote SF |
yo tonya.. i admit this wasnt the best i could do .. but i typed this shit up real quick
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Metaphores - Paul
Vocabulary - tie Enjoyment - Steelfist Punchlines - Steelfist Wordplay - Steelfist Creativity - Steelfist Personals - neither Structure - tie Opener - Paul Finisher - Steelfist Multies - Steelfist Flow - Steelfist Overall - Steelfist (7-2) |
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If it weren't for lines like that, I would have had to flip a coin on this shit. But the vote goes to steelfist for having better punches Vote=Steelfist |
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