Lethargic vs Steelfist
 

10 barz I'll spit first

Sorry, this site has a new setup. Here you go.

I'm back, throwin punches, brandish a new hitlist/
Spit twisted, throwin Fists to the face of a Steel witness/
Ready to rip this, like rapin a virgin, and tore his scripts/
Pussy's get thrashed, makin him bleed from every orifice/
Laugh as you miss, the point of producin profane prose/
Faggot attackin poetic, I'll combat usin your symbol and rain bows/
Whoa! This kid's playin with death, son, you wanna tempt fate?!/
That's Comedic, so I'll let The-Marvel-Arm handle my Light Weight/
Oh great, it's too late, this kid's already been smashed, like 2 times/
Left for a year and I'm rusty, still breakin this newbie in 10 lines/

It took me about 10 mins to type that verse. I've been to two classes and had to go drop a class, and you still haven't posted.

Waitin on your wackness and uppin

I DIDNT AGREE TO THIS BATTLE.. FUCK IT.. IM NOT REPLYING TO YOUR WACKNESS.......................................... .................................................. ................

link provided

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79810

now post up you wack punk.

EXACTLY AND I ENDED UP NOT BATTLIGN EITHER OF YAL.. I BATTLE IS ONLY VALID WHEN BOTH RHYMERS COME TO AGREEMENTS TO BATTLING RULES.. ADN I NEVER DID THAT WITH YOU.. THE DUDE IM BATTLING IS PAUL.. HOLLA

Scared little kids. Aren't they cute? You can even have 7 days to write your verse. That help matters? Sissy

if that nigga didnt agree this thread should be closed my nigga.

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That's just it though...the only rules posted.....posted by him might I add, were the 10 barz rule. I agreed to them. He told me to come to front lines and battle him. Don't believe me? Hit the link. He just bitched out, I've seen his shit, and it's just that...shit. He punked out because he bit off more then he could chew, and now he's trying to weasel out of it. I don't wanna win by forfeit, but this kid is bitchmade. Don't even give me the W...just give this punkass mother fucker a L. He deserves it for bein scary.

lol.. dog get off my dick.. i said whos up for a ten bar battle.. i said both of yall should go to frontl ines.. since i made the call out.. its only common sens that it would be me that is supposed to make the battle thread right.. with the rules and shit.. but nah i aint really agree to battle yall i battled paul

anyways man your wack son..

Tight Verse Lethargic....I Dun Think It Matters Who Makes The Battle Thread If You Both Agreed To It.Whether You Made The Callout Or Not.

Give Him Some Time Lethargic....And Jus Post Steel

Damn...No Need To Complain

lol.. son the think is.. do you see me agreeing now? fuck no!.. i never really agreed to batle this cat.. i called liek 3 cats out.. and i said whoever wants to battle me shoudl go to front lines.. now i make a callout and i say WHOEVER want sto battle me should go to front lines.. adn i battled PAUL cuz i made the call out and i choose to agree to who i want to battle.. and i aint agree to battle this wack ass cat

AIIGHT FUCK IT IM SICK OF THIS NIGGA TALKING SHIT I GOT YOU
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HEY YO FUCK THIS KID HE DICK LICKS
GET PUT ON MY HIT LIST,
AIR your corny battle on MTV at 4:30 cuz your DIS'S' MISSED
GET YOUR WRIST SLIT TRYING TO FUCK WITH SOMEONE ABOVE YOUR STATUS
YOU CAN NEVER GET ABOVE THIS KIDS STATUS
like tight DRAWS you STICK to and KISS ASSES


YOU THE TYPE TO SUCK VOTERS OFF AND DEEPTHROAT
I TAKE THREE TOTES OF THE WEEDSMOKE
WATCH THIS FAG PULL AN OSCAR DE LA HOYA AND BEG FOR REVOTES(LOL!)

WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE
even if you was an FBI AGENT and this battle was held over the ~PHONE~ you still couldnt TRACE MY LINES!!(their above his head)

holla

lol- "AIR your corny battle on MTV at 4:30 cuz your DIS'S' MISSED"

man im a have to vote for steelfist.. shit is ill.. hahahahaha

aiight up this shit.............................................. .................................................. .........................................

up this for votes............................................. .................................................. ..............................

Vote Steelfist better verse....i think

Hollaz~1

aiight yeah yeah yeah.. good lookin dog............................................... .............................................

Hmmm....I smell D/R's....obviously people didnt glance at Lathargic's shit correctly...Its clear as day that he murdered that man....

Laugh as you miss, the point of producin profane prose/
Faggot attackin poetic, I'll combat usin your symbol and rain bows/

Did Ya'll see the wordplay in there...No!! I did he snapped pretty hard.

Ready to rip this, like rapin a virgin, and tore his scripts/
Pussy's get thrashed, makin him bleed from every orifice/
^Most of ya'll prolly aint get this line cuz ya dont know what an Orifice is...LoL

Steel U had some good punches but ya lines was way extended...aint no way U could put that verse on a audio track an make it flow.....Although I did like that DissMissed line...good shit

Vote = Lethargic

LOL.. AIIGHT WHAT IS THIS NOW.. YOUR TALKING SHIT DUKE?

AIIGHT UPPIN FOR REAL VOTES............................................. .................................................. ......

YOU THE TYPE TO SUCK VOTERS OFF AND DEEPTHROAT
I TAKE THREE TOTES OF THE WEEDSMOKE
WATCH THIS FAG PULL AN OSCAR DE LA HOYA AND BEG FOR REVOTES(LOL!)


That shit was nice. I vot for steel fist even though I cant post a vote. the whole piece was nice.

Man I aint talkin shit to U steel, I'm talkin to these dumb motha fuckas who always look past the Newb's shit cuz they want they battles voted on wit returned favor votes.............Bull shit......

FUCK YOU MAN.. ANOTHER FREEPOST OUT OF YOU AND IM A REPORT YOU TO INVESTIGATIVE REPORTS.. IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR TRYING TO SWAY VOTES MAN

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................

yo i think steel straight merked diss cat he came harder on the punchs wordplay mutli's and it all flow'd nicca good shit props to both vote steelfist holla

good lookin out ..uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ......

and nah tonya im really 4 and 1.. i lost a battle to mr spits that i was leading 4 to 2 because a mod said i was uppng the post too much.. wtf

Yo I read both verse twice , and I got to go with Steel FIst , the dimissed line , and the De La Hoya line won it for him , both verses were aiight , but when punchlines stand in yer head after the match is done , its hard to vote for the other dude .........No DR here , thats my honest opinion , props to both ....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77171
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80297

CE

AIIGHT GOOD LOOKIN.. UPPIN FOR MORE VOTES............................................. .................................................. ...............

UPPIN FOR VOTES............................................. .................................................. .............

aiyo...
lethargic had a good flow and structure... but thats bout all he was packin... no fancy wordplay or punches...

steelfist had a flow, but no structure... but he was packin punches from everywhere... my fav. line was talkin bout being aired at four thirty and his punches missed... lmao...

vote- steel

Hey, man...

I do have other things to do besides vote promptly on shit, ya know.

Despite Capcom's swaying...

I can read just fine and am voting for Steelfist.

I really liked the MTV line (funny and hard)
I really liked the De La Hoya line. (current and topical)
I really liked the FBI line. (funny and nice punching)

Multi's: Lethargic
Wordplay: Lethargic
Metas: Steelfist
Punches: Steelfist
Overall: Steelfist