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Mynd Melt 09-15-03 03:20 PM

Mynd Melt VS. prophecy06
 
20 lines
i spit first
same ol voting rules....

Mynd Melt 09-15-03 03:45 PM

I got salyva like liter fluid that will make ya "Mynd Melt"/
Send u packin like deport police wuz on my belt/
Fuckin bitch, battle'n me iz a no-no/
You aint even aight, you so-so, couldnt "see me" if I sent you a photo/
I could drop 2 bars & be done/
Because your spits is reused like everyone elses, feel like Im watchin re-runs/
Its apparent shit, but you probably aint aware of it/
My rhymes birthed you, if I died youd be parentless, I could spit this in ancient Arabic/
Or tha original Latin language/
Im flagrant, like steele Smith & Wessons, my record is "stainless"/
I spit divine divinity, rhyme infinity/
My lines define centuries, remember me & make friends with me or your end can be as my enemy/
You useless, last-supper ruthless Judas/
Ima confuse this music student like he was a cubic rubix/
It aint tha battle its tha principle/
Deadlys bars you cant stop me, bite all you want, Im still invincible/
Like diplomats in foreign countries, to your rhymes I got immunity/
Fuck you, tha & those soon ta be, we can go you & me or you can be murdered by Divided Unity/
Ill bust & rush & not givafuck, tha truth has been spoken/
Cut prophecy from his guts-ta-his-nuts thrust through his mind crushed, & really leave him wide-open


my first battle wuznt shit im ready to come like this all da time.......

prophecy_06 09-15-03 04:23 PM

nigga, my lines are ~sick~ and they'll ~throw up on ya~
bitch, you couldn't be ~hard~ wit ~bitches on ya dick~
ya putcha ~punches in quotations~ all they are is ~talk~
~rip~ ya like ~cardboard~ and ~leave ya on da walk~ like
~curbside recyclin~//5 lines

nigga, u could be ~stabbin wit knives~ and still couldn't
~kill mics~. attack me i'll ~reverse em~ and ~drive me
through ya~ like bein ~impaled by spikes.~ ya life expectancy must have ~legs~ the way its ~runnin out.~ every ~punch~ lines ~hit harder~ than an ~ali bout~//5 lines

i ~cutcha feet off~ and ~shoved em down ya throat~
so you can experience the ~taste of de-feet.~i couldn't
be ~beat~ if i told ya bitch i was ~good wit my hands~
and she hooked me up wit ~hand-job.~//4 lines

i cause so much ~mental trauma~ i make ya ~mynd melt.~
ya ~punches~ are comin from da ~invisible man~ they ~can't be felt.~ when ya was ~typin ya name~ ya made a ~typo~ and forgot to hit ~delete~. dumbass, you submitted ya verse only ~half complete.~ proph has just shut ya down like ~control alt delete~//6 lines

prophecy_06 09-15-03 04:24 PM

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prophecy_06 09-15-03 04:48 PM

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A.T. 09-15-03 04:57 PM

Aiyo....

MIND MELT- you had a good flow goin and some fuckin ill ass word play... your vocab. was decent and you had a few punches that I really liked... I like your style.
Overall you had a good spit... your last two bars were fuckin ill as hell and I think thats what made your spit good, cause you had a strong finish... I rate this shit at an 8.

prophecy- your structure was way off and your bars ended in some odd places and it threw your flow off... I couldnt quite grasp it until like the middle of your spit, but once I caught on to it, it was pretty tight man... just keep ya structure in check and you'd be doin better... your vocab was decent, and your wordplay was also pretty good... your punches werent hittin too hard and that kinda dropped it for ya too... just keep at it and better ya structure... I rate this at a 5.

vote- mynd melt...

prophecy_06 09-15-03 05:02 PM

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Tonya~Montana 09-15-03 05:45 PM

Mynd had a simple verse...kinda borin cause he did'nt hit with no oooh's or ahhh's... disses were ok..punches were so so..he had no heat..had a touch of creativity..some lines seem forced

prop was iight but some of his bars did'nt rhyme...he had hella played punches...structure was kinda off...disses were ok..both need to step it up a lil.....

vote Mynd....he edge with a slightly betta verse...

prophecy_06 09-15-03 06:31 PM

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deser_eagle 09-15-03 06:35 PM

mynd- you had NO good punches at all. they had very little if any role in ya verse. ya structure was off

proph-had a coupla played lines, but overall the lines were tight, and they hit pretty hard.
vote-prophecy

prophecy_06 09-15-03 06:39 PM

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prophecy_06 09-15-03 06:55 PM

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Originally posted by prophecy_06
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Mynd Melt 09-16-03 11:46 AM

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont let dis go to waste!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mynd Melt 09-16-03 12:00 PM

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Originally posted by Mynd Melt
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont let dis go to waste!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ålphå bë† 09-16-03 12:02 PM

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Originally posted by deser_eagle
mynd- you had NO good punches at all. they had very little if any role in ya verse. ya structure was off

proph-had a coupla played lines, but overall the lines were tight, and they hit pretty hard.
vote-prophecy


Agreed.Mynd Was Too Weak.Proph Had A Stronger Verse Wit A Bit Of Complexity Too

Vote-Proph

mc thrilla 09-16-03 12:30 PM

i thought proph won this wit his punchs and thats all its gonna be close but i think prophecy will pull it off wit his punchs vote prohecy

prophecy_06 09-16-03 12:31 PM

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prophecy_06 09-16-03 01:41 PM

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Originally posted by prophecy_06
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CarsonJet-2k4 09-16-03 01:44 PM

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Originally posted by Tonya~Montana
Mynd had a simple verse...kinda borin cause he did'nt hit with no oooh's or ahhh's... disses were ok..punches were so so..he had no heat..had a touch of creativity..some lines seem forced

prop was iight but some of his bars did'nt rhyme...he had hella played punches...structure was kinda off...disses were ok..both need to step it up a lil.....

vote Mynd....he edge with a slightly betta verse...


^^absolutely.....great explanation from one of the best...

^^agreed upon.....Vote-Mynd

prophecy_06 09-16-03 02:14 PM

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Mynd Melt 09-16-03 03:38 PM

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prophecy_06 09-16-03 04:28 PM

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cripwalkin 09-16-03 04:48 PM

prophecy took this shit easily the 5 line was kinda wack and didn't make sense, but he made up for it wit da resta his verse. otha dude was aight, but prophecy edged it out

vote- prophecy

prophecy_06 09-16-03 05:06 PM

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prophecy_06 09-16-03 05:18 PM

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Steelfist 09-16-03 05:30 PM

prophecy too k this much better rhyme skills than the other dude

good battle though.. vote- prophecy.......................................... .....................


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