Lillem VS WhiteNightMare (when Vets get merked)
 

ok 10lines or 5 barz......
ill wait till u check in then we both got 20min so holla

aight well spit ya pre writer .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

u gotta spit to u fagget............................................ .................................................. .....

wat, are stupid man spit first then i'll spit after you...dam
wat, are stupid man spit first then i'll spit after you...dam
wat, are stupid man spit first then i'll spit after you...dam
wat, are stupid man spit first then i'll spit after you...dam
wat, are stupid man spit first then i'll spit after you...dam

holy shit kid look at the rulz in bitch slapped fuckin herbs changing the rulz afta they get in front lines what a fuckin pussy

aight then. whatever ya ass wants...30mins to spit both then...from now or whatever..i'll start writing some shit..

20 min............................................... .................................................. .......................

i stand alone, keepin the mic in my "hand"i got lyrical skills jelouis niggas cant "stand"merk this bitch outa tha rap game, and right into a boy "band"/
dont fool yourself nigga im livin in a "paradise"you went to the electronic store but they wouldnt sell yea a "pair a mics"/
this nigga should come wit a warning cuz he hazardist to your "ears"stop typin now nigga cuz u temptin me to chop your fingas off wit a pair of "shears"/
this nigga like a smartie,just a wonnabe "eminem"(M&M)why u gonna battle me?u lucky we just spitten "10"/
look at this bitches sig he still believes in aliens..fuck them nigga u should be afriad of "me" im dropin this kid so "easily"im beatin u wit water bombs I aighnt even shown u my "artillery"/
nigga you compramise the skill on rb,fuck your "9-4" this kid more annoying then a jahovah witness goin door to "door"9-11 will look like a joke afta i show u some lyrical "gore"/
nigga ill pull a fuckin rap hat trick beat u three in a "row"knock u down to line u up like tic tac "toe"gettin busted by the cops is the only way this kid seeing "5-0"/

Grabs da mike


Bout to split this shit like ya vocal chords into 2bits:
mix you up like hennessey and coke and watch ya flip fits:

ryhmes cutting through you like suicidal slit wrists:
ya lips be flapping like fat boys bitch tits (meaning you think your da shit)

got you looking like stone dipping in sulfric acid:
you aint lryical kid: just a retard trying to act physical:face it your placid

ya like a epileptic tripping on acid: ryhmes dont punch even if ya tryed to BASH-IT
with ya tongue in ya ass ya spitting shit like DASIT (shit white rapper)

spitting like your a pro with a record like a no-show
bitch you punches will miss like stevie wonders attempt at low-blows

fuck dude u got like 5 minutes to drop.............................................. .....................................

10lines or 5 barz...
u set up...
both spit within 30min...
usuall rulz....

you spat outta ya rulez...look spastic i already put my shit down...

its supposed to be 5 bars..spastic....

D/Q

whos voting on dis shit yall........

anytakers.....with nicely explained votes............................................. ...............

good shit.............................................. .................................................

i spit stretched lines so its acually only 7................................................. ..................................

yeah but thats still seven. you said 5bars. stretch lines are no-excuse. You should know what your doing. Or things are gonna get D/Q dont make rulez and break them...Cause you know wat happenz. Your lucky on this one..

yo uppin we need votes peeps....uppin
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uppin peep and vote realistic......................................... ........

you everyone stop sleeping on dis battle. leave a link we will both vote on any other battle fairly. So yall stop sleeping and vote on this farely....been waiting like a motherfucker...

uppin.....................uppin................... ..........uppin................................... .....

man is anyone gonna vote on our shit. dam to many sleepers, someone at least vote. Leave a link me and white will farely vote on yours. So if your getting slept on hit this up yall...

i feel bd for ya n yall aint gettin votes.........so ima help yall out

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1. weak battle...............
2. nitemare...ur garbage and dont say when vets get murked in ya title when ur gonna get a L.....
3. VOTE- LIL.............he won wit his last punch...........(finsiher)..1

yo why all da sleepers. we need to get some votes on this. me and white will vote on yours... yo com'on we been waiting on dis to close for 3days yall help out and shit....Dam stop sleeping

Lillem VS WhiteNightMare


damn can i read a good battle for once?
whitenightmare what was u thinking
u need work !! better yet just practice with the battleing
i can barely catch ya flow - and i wasnt feelin the punches, overall for this site it wasnt bad - seeing there is alot of newbs out there

Lillem lol you wasnt that tight either but your short ass verse
barely got it in my part . wordplay = punches- creativity - lack of effort all goes too
Lillem

i will not explain my vote to peeps who do notin but bitch at each other in a "battle"...

thus, wit that set into ur hollows...

winner: Lil

if u want x-planations, read upwards^

now go scream in a pillow...

or betta yet, hit this up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80190

Breakdown:

Punches:Lillem
Complexity:White
Multis:Lillem
Flow:lillem
Vocab:White
Structure:Lillem
Personals:white

Overall:Lillem


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Ay Can you check out my battle against insanewhiteboy
and drop a honest vote.......................Thanx


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whitenightmare merked him in every ccategory possible. I think that the people voting in this thread are either d/r or blind....












just kidding(had you a bit scared there huh?)
lil em merked him, better flow punches, wordplay. White you gotta elevate man, you got potential but this wasn't your day at all.
Vote=lil