13th Disciple VS Feeble Minded
 

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Chek In's Due: Monday 9/22/03
Verse's Due: Wendesday 9/24/03

Good Luck & Make This Match The Illest!!!

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i have to go out tonight.. ill drop tonight though!
do not drop a no show verse i will definitely drop before the night is gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

so unless you wanna stay up really late drop first.


Only in the Probation Match will the loser be out of the league
if you lose you are still in... unless you post too much like a newbie

Evolve

leader of Omens...^3 posts up already showing Signs of a newb...
at times u explode....but nobody feels the effects of ur magnitude!
like Austins wife.....this bitch Feeble is known for abusing Power...
& more fake than dealers subsituting cocaine for All Purpose Flour.
like steppin on cereal boxes......kid, u just keep pressin ur Luck...
even Chrit wanted 2 ghostwrite this shit....& thats word....what?..
an IR agent...ready 2 ban biters....dawg then start bannin urself..
u was caught bitin the spaghetti line from Duper vs ITouchMyself..
damn...even ur aliases got banned..Nick O Teen and also Enhance
see, even if this was Monopoly......u still wouldnt have a Chance...
in Mod Forum ur a constant joke like Brandons feelings on Sand...
no point to get mad cuz if u don't give a fuck we dont give a damn


blah.....12 lines.....match it.......

i offer a toast - cuz only thing disciples give is the fatherly host
im hotta than most, like mailmen on strike dont bother to post!
couldn't hit me with personal if you said get ready and look...
but believe me - i'd personal you but theres too many to put!
tryin to make peace, already hes shook, old guys got weak knees
he could design shirts..i still wouldn't pass his treat-tees (treaties)
dawg..............ya 40...............so getta life! im not messin & fuck
but the moment you posted. . you started pressin ya luck!
cant defeat me. . u aint renowned for shit, just a confounded vet
ya sig still says blessed with skills.. well, u haven't found em yet..

done. thats ten. read it all. now.

*walks in...time for another awsume breakdown*

13th's Verse:
leader of Omens...^3 posts up already showing Signs of a newb...
at times u explode....but nobody feels the effects of ur magnitude!
^^nice starter...7/10
like Austins wife.....this bitch Feeble is known for abusing Power...
& more fake than dealers subsituting cocaine for All Purpose Flour.
^^lmao...8/10
like steppin on cereal boxes......kid, u just keep pressin ur Luck...
even Chrit wanted 2 ghostwrite this shit....& thats word....what?..
^^nice..7/10
an IR agent...ready 2 ban biters....dawg then start bannin urself..
u was caught bitin the spaghetti line from Duper vs ITouchMyself..
^^lmao...word...dot ever use spaghetti line again :mad:....8/10
damn...even ur aliases got banned..Nick O Teen and also Enhance
see, even if this was Monopoly......u still wouldnt have a Chance...
^^tight..8/10
in Mod Forum ur a constant joke like Brandons feelings on Sand...
no point to get mad cuz if u don't give a fuck we dont give a damn
^^ehhh...not bad 8/10

Total:47/60

Feebles Verse:
i offer a toast - cuz only thing disciples give is the fatherly host
im hotta than most, like mailmen on strike dont bother to post!
^^not bad..6/10
couldn't hit me with personal if you said get ready and look...
but believe me - i'd personal you but theres too many to put!
^^nice..7/10
tryin to make peace, already hes shook, old guys got weak knees
he could design shirts..i still wouldn't pass his treat-tees (treaties)
^^u fucked it up...6/10
dawg..............ya 40...............so getta life! im not messin & fuck
but the moment you posted. . you started pressin ya luck!
^^not bad...but concept is played...7/10
cant defeat me. . u aint renowned for shit, just a confounded vet
ya sig still says blessed with skills.. well, u haven't found em yet..
^^best lines in ur verse...9/10

Total:35/50

60-47=13
50-35=15

Vote:13th Disciple

blah..this was weak..


i expected a whole lot more than this guys..


both of you lacked punches and resorted to newbie tactics..

a few nice mulits and a few metas...but mostly all filler.


but overall,

i think that Feeble had the harder hitting personals..


vote-Feeble

DeZ is word...hard battle to decide...
but....imma go wit feeble...13 th had
filler in his verse and he knows it.....
feeble edged it out by hair...i think he
had betta punches...barely...i expect
yall to amp ya shit up neXt week......

pZ

VoTe= FeeBlE.

Ah....shit...it wont let me edit my last
post..but i voted fo tha13th in tha poll
when ment to vote for feeble.
Evolve go head and fix that.

~uNo~

um
id say 13 won
cuz he had personals...to go along wit a lil bit o wordplay
and cuz
feeble kinda bit his luck line...jus looks that way cuz well 13 posted first so yea...u shouldnt have had ur own 'luck' line..
ya fillers suck

vote 13

even though feeble had a pretty good closer..13 closer was blah but decent

Aight

13th came much better in this with personals...

Flow ws rather close...

Punches go to 13th... not bad feeble....

Overall: 13th takes it in a close one...

Much closer than I thought it would be...

Vote does not count... Not in the league..................................
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Evolve

3-2 13th... will edit w/ vote later.... Stop beefing in this thread...
if you are gonna beef go to the Beef Thread in the Office...........
if i see anymore beefing here or freeposting... 1 vote will be deducted from the guilty person....

Vote 13th

But to be honest... this battle sucked... i thought 13th would come
w/ alot harder punches, but it was mediocre at best

& Feeble to be honest the only line i was feeling in yours was
the last one... the rest was ehhh

so my vote is for 13th... cause his was less worse.. if that makes
sense

^^I think most of the battle was ehh

i vote feeble bcos he had harder.. no.. he had less weak punches and more of them..
13th u started very nice but seemed to fall off afterwards and that last line was shameful for a vet like urself, you seemed to have ok punches or w/e to start a bar, and then the finishing line sucked & fucked it up....

Feeble was more consistent in his shit so i vote him.. disappointin battle tho

13Th Had Some Funny Lines, And Some Decent Punches, But Also Had A Lot Of Weak Lines That Made me Really Dislike His Verse....Thru Out Both Verses I Think It Was A Tie, But Feeble's Closer Just Edged You Out 13Th....So Overall Vote... Feeble Minded.....

cant defeat me. . u aint renowned for shit, just a confounded vet
ya sig still says blessed with skills.. well, u haven't found em yet..
^^Not bad, Not Bad At All

But I Did Expect Way More From Both Of You Guys...Peace

yup.
that makes 4-4. uppin for a final HONEST vote. no crew votes please.
thanx for votin evolve............................................ .................

No doubt.... need one more to close this up.... & go vote on the
Capcom VS Young P battle... so i can close that as well..............

Vote - 13th

Both were under your usual standards,
only line i kinda liked from feeble, was the last,
a couple from 13th, but boh mediocre at best

So i vote 13 due to less wackness
(^kinda what evolve said, but none the less true.)

13th Wins
Feeble Loses

Battle Closed............................................ ...................................
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