SmokaJoka666 vs. COM
 

10 lines max
due date is tonight by midnight....therefore it doesn't matter who spits first as long as both emcees make deadline
no recycling
no biting
no playing off of verses
no crew/hate/bias/dickryde votes
VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED!!

peace
4:20

checkin in........
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peace
4:20

Smokas Heart Rate Is Critical And He Just Failed The Physical
Worried About Facing, Being Adjacent To A Miracle
You’re Pitiful, Got It ‘Locked’ Down, But I Cut All-The-‘Keys’
This Battles Cat And Mouse And I’ve Hid All-The-Cheese
And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’
And you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic
I Summoned-A-Fight Wit My Saber Like Vader I’m Ya Father
My Punches Loosen More Teeth Than Chocolate Mixed With Tartar
For Starters I’m The ‘Cookie Monster’ Taking All Ya ‘Dough’
Killed So Many ‘Lines’ When I Sneeze, I Try Not To Snow

This Bitch Is Wack, Spit His Name Dyslexic And U'll See He Is A MOCkery//
Rhymes Bigger Than Gnome Seats, Feel The Meltdown Of This Chrome Heat//
Reppin A Gay Crew Like 10 Minute Audios They Owe Men Long Beats//(Omen)
If U Were To Have Sex With Three Women At Once U Would Still Be Gay//
I'll Rename U Donky Kong The Way I Make Ur Skin Decay//(D.K.)
Like Silence Of The Lambs, Kid I'll Leave U And Ur Rhymes Defaced//(don't get it...don't vote)
I'll Treat U Like Britney Spears In A Strip Club, In The End U'll Be Raped//
If This Kid's Rhymes Were Fuckin Speedin Tickets They Wouldn't Be Placed As Fine//
U Blow More Than Datin Mines, Like Jealous Invertabrates Kid I'll Take Ur Spine//
How U Gonna Win With Punches Gettin Older Than Brooklyn Overrated Lines//

*edit*placed parenthesis beside S.O.L. line

peace
4:20

^^^Whack. the other guy had good lead ups but he failed with most of his punches. coms gonna take this on the fact he had almost better everything. coms punches were original and i like that, and compared to joka...they hit. vote-C

Original??? LMAO!!! kid had punches in his verse that i saw last year....read the verses next time...lol.....

peace
4:20

^^ TRY AND SWAY THIS VOTE AGAIN OR BITCH TO VOTERS AND I'LL GET YOU DQ'ED...
PIPE DOWN AND LET VOTERS VOTE...
THIS IS ELITE NOT HERBLAND

^^lol....speaking of herbland...did u have any punches that were directed towards me....man i fuckin hate voting favors....and u can't get me DQ'ed for speaking the truth....but this is all i got to say...the rest will be nothing but upping....

*edit*
+ it's a bitch move to win by DQ

peace
4:20

** Ignores Swaying n' Bullshit Posts **

Joka .. Ya New To This Style.. Ya Need To Get Used
To How To Do This, And Do It Well.. Com Knows
What Hes Doin Here.. And Did It Better Than Joka..

Im In 9th Period Of School, So I Cant Break It Down Fully..

Vote - COM

*warning*

sway votes again and i'll simply close this shit...

so...

shut tha fuck up :)

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Vote - Joker

Seriously, the other kid was ass, nearly all his lines were played or non-creative at all, everyone was like id seen before, what happened to oroiginality? At least joker came decent, and with less polayed lines, thats what gets my vote.

Voted: Joker

Smoka Jokkas Verses could Have Been Worded Better..
COM hadda A better flowing Verse. Which made the
Punches sound Better...
Close Battle...

POLL VOTE-COM..



Return The Favor AND DroP An hOnEsT VoTe

Me –VS- IceBerg420
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79004

at least the Vets read this shit.....uppin..........and ^^u can't poll yet....u gotta PM the admin.....

peace
4:20

iight heres the breakdown

COM
Punches:6/10 (some were played)
Flo:7/10
Vocab:6.5/10
Creativity:6/10
Overall:7.5/10

33/50

Smoka
Punches:6.5/10
Flo:6/10
Vocab:7/10
Creativity:6.5/10
Overall:6/10

32/50

Vote:COM

^^won 3 categories...yet he still get's overall better verse??....oh well...uppin....

peace
4:20

and also...battles are about punches not flow. homos.

I THOUGHT JOKA WASNT GONNA SWAY THE VOTE<,, I HATE BATTLING WHINING BITCHES............

uppin..........
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COM
Punches:6/10 (some were played)
Flo:7/10
Vocab:6.5/10
Creativity:6/10
Overall:7.5/10

33/50

Smoka
Punches:6.5/10
Flo:6/10
Vocab:7/10
Creativity:6.5/10
Overall:6/10

32/50

Vote:COM

my dawg purple u cant break it down any betta than that..he took the words outta my mouth

^^^sorry to freepost but...that was quoted...both of y'allz are straight so I don't want either of ya to get cheated out of a win...

^^^ SO WAS BAXTERS VOTE, so if you are gonna erase that vote then erase BAXTERS too, so its fair
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man..stfu. ive been around longer than both of you and i havent seen any of those. stop swaying votes, im about to erase all one line and hate votes from this battle.

i mean one line and quoted votes, i dont think there are ne hate votes here.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^^NICE LOOKING,, ,uppin for votes.......
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i got to go with joka his punches came harder and made more sense whiles com verse was just simple don't get me wrong the lyrics were just thye were misused

^^^FUCK OFF OUT OF HERE NEWBIE THIS IS ELITE YOU CANT VOTE IN HERE READ THE FUCKING RULES..................... ....................
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Vote Com

Overall better verse.......................you had some played concepts but had tighter punches

Smoka - you also had played shit.......................but you lacked the harder punches..............

Thats what did it for Com

com took dis, shit was on point, joka ive seen some of your shit, its good, but now its kinda get repetive, punches were pretty thourgouh threw this battle, 666 put ya explanation at the end, it flows better that way

vote: com

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=80512

peep vs. dope wax