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~ProPaiN~ 09-17-03 10:59 PM

PROpaIN vs Meks
 
Yea

Dawg 8 lines max

no prewrittens
no crew votes
no dyckrydin votes

lets do this quick

Due: 10 min Max

Drop it.................

Meks 09-17-03 11:00 PM

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Meks 09-17-03 11:09 PM

quick keystyle.................

I gotta cut off ya hed for you to lay your flow on this thread/
Shut off your Meds then you play sick but show doe but bread/1
Close your Casket Ded, Expose you laughter on'a picture spread/
Sick in the hed clips next ta ma bed, meks quick ta put text ta ya hed/2
Ya Sola-plexes is bled not skin i see robo-techs insted/
Now my objective is redirected you fake and i aint gotta say it cuz it's projected/3
You From:_______, So I Guess you Just a Bum On The Run/
Cardboard Sheilds can't have you protected, Meks will leva ya Meals Infected/4

Meks 09-17-03 11:12 PM

*******READ THIS ONE********fucked up th last one
quick keystyle.................

I gotta cut off ya hed for you to lay your flow on this thread/
Shut off your Meds then you play sick but show doe but bread/1
Close your Casket Ded, Expose you laughter on'a picture spread/
Sick in the hed clips next ta ma bed, meks quick ta put text ta ya hed/2
Ya Sola-plexes is bled not skin i see robo-techs insted/
Now my objective is redirected you fake and i aint gotta say it cuz it's projected/3
You From:_______, So I Guess you Just a Bum On The Run Neglected/
Cardboard Sheilds can't have you protected, Meks will leva ya Meals Infected/4

~ProPaiN~ 09-17-03 11:17 PM

Am confused Homey...lol

Which one to read??????

anywayz u dont have personals that what u lackin...lol

Aight

Meks Bitch I'm devastating...I blow more people away then detonations/
If practice of defeatin people is what u need, then i'll use u as a demonstration/
Kid strike you with savage blows to ya brain, and ur losin it/
Dumb Jersey bitch had to eat his own verses, before he knew he had a verse full of shit/
I don't have to worry..I've been had ur lives folded in my hand/
"It's not that we dont like you, we hate you,
PERIOD!" on yo Sig ???Stop asking why cats don't like u..ur whack! whats so hard to unnderstand/
28-31 More loses dan wins?Faggot I scorch ya corpse in flames...shit my heat is to much for fruitcake like you to handle/
hop off dicks, This Bleed Burgandy & Gold blow us yearly like birthday candles/ (cocksucker..lol)
I'm laughin now, Never knew someone could be so whack,battlin the pain is like a train on broken railroads, Cuz am sendin u off track..

~ProPaiN~ 09-17-03 11:19 PM

AIGHT VOTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS


DO THE DAMN THANG AND VOTE HONEST

And yea Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz POLL VOTE!!!!!......................................... ......................

Meks 09-18-03 10:32 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~ProPaiN~
AIGHT VOTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS


DO THE DAMN THANG AND VOTE HONEST

And yea Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz POLL VOTE!!!!!......................................... ......................

~ProPaiN~ 09-18-03 11:19 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~ProPaiN~
AIGHT VOTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS


DO THE DAMN THANG AND VOTE HONEST

And yea Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz POLL VOTE!!!!!......................................... ......................

A.T. 09-18-03 12:46 PM

aiyo...

meks- I was havin trouble readin your flow, your rhyme scheme was kinda off, but I eventually caught it...
you had some metties that I liked and your vocab was ok.
your word play was decent too... overall I rate you a 6

propain- your flow was a lil easier to read, i suggest you add some structure, it will help you in future battles... you vocab was good, and was usin some decent personals that I liked.
overall it was a decent spit... I rate you at an 8

vote- propain...

aiyo, vote on my battle "thesun V.S. A.T."
we only had like one vote and its a pretty tight battle,
hit me back wit da favor yall.

Feeble Minded. 09-18-03 12:47 PM

i cant vote too close..the verse were average....

but propain..dont sway like that "u had no personals" plz.
u had none either...well u had one but it sucked.....


tie.!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Meks 09-18-03 12:50 PM

thanx for sum votes let see sum more voters up in this bitch!thanx for sum votes let see sum more voters up in this bitch!thanx for sum votes let see sum more voters up in this bitch!thanx for sum votes let see sum more voters up in this bitch!

~ProPaiN~ 09-18-03 12:50 PM

I told em Like i felt and thats not swayin.....................


Like AT he read both verses and came out with decision..............

But c'mon atleast vote for someone cuz It cant be tie....

Capcom 09-18-03 12:53 PM

This was a str8 battle, nothin really hit that hard....But I give it to Meks, Propain bit a line from Eminem in his verse...

"Its not that we dont like you, we hate you PERIOD!"

EM said that same shit on "Nail in the Coffin" when he was snappin on Benzino.

vote = Meks

C_Drama 09-18-03 12:53 PM

Okay, both emcees were okay

but Propain hit harder, harder punches

so my vote goes to = Propain

~ProPaiN~ 09-18-03 12:55 PM

"Its not that we dont like you, we hate you PERIOD!"

^^^CapCOm??????????


Thats IN His SIG it was a personal U dumbFUCk!!!!

Meks 09-19-03 12:57 AM

ucupnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn i dont care if theres a hurricane or not.............VOTEcupnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn i dont care if theres a hurricane or not.............VOTEpnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn i dont care if theres a hurricane or not.............VOTE

Condom_King 09-19-03 01:04 AM

Meks wins for the less whack verse..........this wasnt that good a battle....both's punches hit weak and everything was even pretty much

punches - meks
flow - tie
meta - tie
structure - meks
personals - tie (1 a piece)
multies - meks

overall - meks

Parallex 09-19-03 01:10 AM

I agree, this wasn't the best battle I seen, but i would have given the flow catagory to meks as well. No hate, strictly peace
vote=Meks


Hit this battle up 4 me plz

Otherwordz 09-19-03 03:56 AM

ok the break down:

punchez: tie
personalz:Propain for the one he had
flow: Meks
Multi'z:Meks
structure: Meks
overall: Meks

I can't poll so i just thought I'd drop my opinion...

~ProPaiN~ 09-19-03 04:24 AM

WOW!!! Alot of Dickryders abvious..........

Punchesi beat em
Personals i beat em....wut else is in a battle.....???..lol


Anyhow this just a preview of Rb dyckryders......


Vote honest ppl

MethodZ 09-19-03 04:26 AM

very tight battle lemme break it for ya
******************************
punches - Pro
flow - tie
meta - None
structure - Meks
personals - Pro
multies - None really
Creativity- Pro

overall - Pro

Kredit 09-19-03 04:58 AM

Alright. . this wasn't the best battle I've seen, but oh well. .

Neither one of you had dope punches or anything. . making this battle very close. Meks had the better flow, making it easier to follow, but I feel that the one/two personals that Pro had, along with his harder hitting punches, won him this battle.

votepropain

COM 09-19-03 05:02 AM

I'll BREAK IT DOWN

flow-MEKS
punches-MEKS
Multies-NONE
Personals-PROPAIN
Metties-NONE

OVERALL: i think meks took this with better punchlines and flow and punches are what win battles, PROPS TO BOTH,

wogzta 09-19-03 05:36 AM

meks took this with slightly better flow and punches............................... both were tight, props :D

vote = meks

WORD~PERFECT 09-19-03 06:10 AM

ROPAIN TOOK THIS BATTLE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH WORDPLAY BUT ABOUTE DISSING ITS OBVIOUS PRO ATTACKED HIM BETTER WHILE MEK HID BEHIND WONDERFUL WORDPLAY PRO GOT THIS

~ProPaiN~ 09-19-03 06:41 AM

Yo this battle is deffinitly SICK BATTLe


MEks props to you.......man fo being so consistent


Well is 3-4 1 more and its OVER


Vote honest

RĂ¥ 09-19-03 03:54 PM

Quote:
28-31 More loses dan wins?Faggot I scorch ya corpse in flames...shit my heat is to much for fruitcake like you to handle/
hop off dicks, This Bleed Burgandy & Gold blow us yearly like birthday candles/

Nice Personal..

Thats what took it for me but both came well nice job fellas..1

My VoTe - Propain..

Taktik 09-19-03 05:53 PM

Vote Propain...................

he had the better verse.................you took punches and personals..............but you need to fix up your structure even it out........fav line:

Kid strike you with savage blows to ya brain, and ur losin it/
Dumb Jersey bitch had to eat his own verses, before he knew he had a verse full of shit/


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