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Feeble Minded vs. Com
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what fun, begin. Nthusiasm^ Purple Haze cant vote. Young P cant vote. you cant vote. lol. i go first. |
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im coming to get you, fuck the omens - cuz im through with..
notice who they picked as leader?.. it wasn't you bitch! I lost? but as i part the minions in this narc's dominions all the smart opinions say i beat you from start to finish! i start to win this. . my slate will rip em, i hate his dictum but this battle means less to me than his latest victim! traits are liftin - fate is driftin, polls make me grip him if com's deliverin illness then ima take his shipment! 22 wins & you think ur sumthin i'll sink ya functions and stop ya flow and illness at the brink of junction junction means a meeting point. |
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I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya
Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future I’ll Abuse-Ya Rip Threw-Ya, This Is War So Stop Ya Feuding I’m Your Old School Bully You Didn’t Want At The Reunion You’re Losing This Battle With Weak Lines That I’m Soon-To-Dent I Cause Friction And Heat Like Fucking Ass With No Lubricant As Soon-As-I-Vent My Anger Your Skill Is Soon-To-Be-Subsided You’d Think Your Ass Was 50’s Fame The Way Newbies-Wanna-Ride-It I Can’t Abide-It, Your Style Is Forged From Other MC’s Spare-Components Use The Sig I Made Below…..You Might Actually Scare-Opponents |
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so dont do it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! |
lmmfao @ com...
aight- here it is- feeble- nice flow, and very extensive vocab... your wordplay was decent and you had a few hard punches... overall I rate your shit at an 8. Com- killer flow, good vocab and great wordplay... one or two punches actually stuck out but you had some good metties... you cracked me up with you last two lines... I rate your shit at a 9. MAD PROPS TO BOTH... vote- COM |
Pretty good battle from both Emcees....But personally I think Feeble Minded took it, His verse was a lil bit more personal. Com U had some funny punchlines but You kinda grossed me out on that line talkin bout Fuckin ass wit no lubricants...That just sounded kinda gay to me in my opinion....Good battle though, well fought by both Emcees.
Vote = Feeble minded Hey can ya'll hit up my battle against Unknown..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80244 |
yo i think feeble won this wit his wordplay multi's and he came harder wit da punchs its gonna be a close battle but i think feeble took this he came harder props vote feeble
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i think feeble wins, no hate......props to both...good battle
breakdown punches - feeble personals - feeble fow - tie i guess multies - feeble overall - feeble hit this up in return fellas wit an honest one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80305 |
^mr. spits, stfu.
no one line votes allowed.. uppin...and... no more voters from the omens. ill leave a.t.'s vote there cuz he votes fair... |
yea, it is nice, some fag deleted a lot of my posts and my post count dropped a few hundred anyway so im just gonna............................................. ....
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I think Feeble took the personals and the flow...
Com took the punches, the metas, the wordplay, definately vocab, and the complexity. Great verses by both... But Com's wordplay and metas had me rolling. The high school bully and the lube lines were funny as shit. And I know it isn't rappin... But that sig closer and the pic were hilarious. Holla back Born vs. Rappad |
i just deleted about 30 freeposts. .
it was great fun, lets stop freeposting so much. lol, hard to delete all of a sudden. uppin downin uppin downin uppin. |
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I like both verses nice battle i think Com had the harder punchlines but i looked at it as overall whose verse was better and i liked Feeble Minded he had no metas in my opinion but his flow was sicker still
Vote=Feeb ~1 |
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Both of you dropped sum ill shit but my vote has to go to feeble minded for those hard hitting punch lines 'notice who they picked as a leader? it wasn't you bitch' i think that line about summed it up.
no hate for either side peep this 'Liba Dee vs Pale Horse' |
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Born To Kill
[B]I think Feeble took the personals and the flow... Com took the punches, the metas, the wordplay, definately vocab, and the complexity. Great verses by both... But Com's wordplay and metas had me rolling. The high school bully and the lube lines were funny as shit. And I know it isn't rappin... But that sig closer and the pic were hilarious. ^^^^fuh sHo, anoTher one of coms Good LINES weRe..... I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future i Give iT to COm foR punches,woRdplay and vocaB, the compLExiTy of the versE wuzz better Than feebles too |
LMAO AT COM'S FINISHER!!
::BREAKDOWN:: punches-com metas-even wordplay-even structure-even creativity-com complexity-even vocab-even multies-feeble flow-tie vote=com...thought he came better overall...good battle props to both |
i liked both verses but i think com's was better both of you had mad good punchlines ahttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=79550&perpage=15&pagenumber=1nd good flow good battle!!!! hit me back
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aight battle.... sorta tha same styles.... in a way.... this how i saw it
punches= com flow= feeble multies= com vocab= feeble personals= feeble creativity= com enjoyment= com overall= .com nice battle.... liked both of ur ending lines |
Verse by Verse breakdown 3/5 is winner ...
Feeble 1st Bar im coming to get you, fuck the omens - cuz im through with.. notice who they picked as leader?.. it wasn't you bitch! (Good personal , not to complex though , pretty simple as an opener , but to the point) Com 1st bar I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future (I liked this line , funny and a good punch , in one ... foreshadowing the battle perhaps ...we'll see ) BAR 1 vote COM (1-0) Feebleminded Bar 2 I lost? but as i part the minions in this narc's dominions all the smart opinions say i beat you from start to finish! ( I would have went for a heavy punch here instead of admitting to a past defeat , basically , you saying , yea you beat me , but people thought I won , well guess what you didn't , why bring it up ?) Com bar 2 I’ll Abuse-Ya Rip Threw-Ya, This Is War So Stop Ya Feuding I’m Your Old School Bully You Didn’t Want At The Reunion ( Good wordplay here , nice flow , good followup to opener , funny shit too , bully references are always good , good visual ) bar 2 vote - COM 2-0 overall Feeble bar 3 i start to win this. . my slate will rip em, i hate his dictum but this battle means less to me than his latest victim! ( I really dug yur flow on dis one , but thats about it , no real heavy punchs , although it flowed great ) Com Bar3 You’re Losing This Battle With Weak Lines That I’m Soon-To-Dent I Cause Friction And Heat Like Fucking Ass With No Lubricant ( Funny line , heavy punch ) Bar3 - Tie , Com leads 2-0-1 Feeble Bar 4 traits are liftin - fate is driftin, polls make me grip him if com's deliverin illness then ima take his shipment! ( once again , your flow is on the money , your shits fun to read , but yu aint saying much of a dish on him , just spraying shit , its cool though ) Coms bar 4 As Soon-As-I-Vent My Anger Your Skill Is Soon-To-Be-Subsided You’d Think Your Ass Was 50’s Fame The Way Newbies-Wanna-Ride-It (Nice punch , lines a little stretched , but funny as shit , and a good personal to boot ) BaR 4 - cOM ...........lEADS 3-0-1 fEEbles closer .......... 22 wins & you think ur sumthin i'll sink ya functions and stop ya flow and illness at the brink of junction ( Aigght shit , but other than good flow and vocab , no punches , no personals ... no dice ) Coms Closer I Can’t Abide-It, Your Style Is Forged From Other MC’s Spare-Components Use The Sig I Made Below…..You Might Actually Scare-Opponents (Cheap tactic with the homemade sig , however Highly effective as I laughed my balls offs ) Great Battle by 2 great Veterans .......... I think Com won it fair and sqaure and gave my reasoning as to why , NO BEEF to either MC , props to both PeACE crazy E http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77171 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80297 |
damn tough battle..... my breakdown is....
Punches: Feeble Flow: Com Vocab: Feeble Wordplay: Com Multis: Feeble Metas: Com Funny: Com Enjoyable: TIE Overall Com Tight ass battle though i have a LOT of respect for you Feeble hit me up on aim |
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