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Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 02:53 PM

Tonya~Montana > vs < Steelfist
 
Explain votes only...!! nonna that oneline bullshit!!

5-10 lines.......we both check in and drop!!

Steelfist 09-18-03 02:55 PM

aiight.. so what you want to drop first or you want me to drop first?............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 02:56 PM

right chea!!
 
post in here steel............hahahah shit trippin!!

check check!!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>........

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 02:57 PM

WE BOTH DROP NOW............................................... .................................................. ..............CHECK

Steelfist 09-18-03 02:58 PM

aiight, lol... you typin?............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ..............................

Steelfist 09-18-03 03:06 PM

LYRICALLY THESE DISSES ARE RECEIVED LETHAL
YOUR PRECEIVED FEEBLE,
you coulndt PEN SICK LYRICS WRITTING WITH A DISEASED NEEDLE
LYRICALLY.. YOUR SKILLS LEVELS "PASSED AWAY"~ LIKE DECEASED PEOPLE~
AS AN MC YOUR WACK, your flows LOOSER than your WEAVE TRACKS
your rhymes leave niggas HUNGRY thats why you get no FEEDback


I GOT NO LOVE FOR HOE FAGGOTS,
CUZ BITCH THE WHOLE FACT IS,
you could make your CD out of GOLD, but you still wouldnt reach GOLD STATUS

Steelfist 09-18-03 03:23 PM

DAG.. YOU STILL HAVENT POSTED YET..LOL.......................................... .................................................. ...........................

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 03:30 PM

nothin personal....
 
Dam a VET battlin a NEWB..Do this really make sense**
takin on a kid with a RECORD like COLLEGE B-Ball DEFENSE**{3-2}

A Steel Fist but tell me..do you really Rhyme Tight**
ya Style 'FRUITY' dats why you love the 'LIME' Light**

you can't BOX-WIT-ME..my name Carries Own**
PUNCHES CONNECTIN from your House to Larry
'HOMES'**{get it}

ya rhymes OLD & PLAYED labeled MR. 'ANTIQUE**
you da CENTER-OF-ATTENTION when Packed by
Man Meat**

you won this battle..lemme Smack you outta that
DAYDREAM**
cause against me you ain't READY-FOR-WAR like
you was under 18//{get it}:eek:




Au Revoir :p

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 03:32 PM

nothin personal....
 
Dam a VET battlin a NEWB..Do this really make sense**
takin on a kid with a RECORD like COLLEGE B-Ball DEFENSE**{3-2}

A Steel Fist but tell me..do you really Rhyme Tight**
ya Style 'FRUITY' dats why you love the 'LIME' Light**

you can't BOX-WIT-ME..my name Carries Own**
PUNCHES CONNECTIN from your House to Larry
'HOMES'**{get it}

ya rhymes OLD & PLAYED labeled MR. 'ANTIQUE**
you da CENTER-OF-ATTENTION when Packed by
Man Meat**

you won this battle..lemme Smack you outta that
DAYDREAM**
cause against me you ain't READY-FOR-WAR like
you was under 18//{get it}




Au Revoir :p

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 03:33 PM

dam my shit slow for some reason and keeps fuckin up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Steelfist 09-18-03 03:33 PM

LYRICALLY THESE DISSES ARE RECEIVED LETHAL
YOUR PRECEIVED FEEBLE,
you coulndt PEN SICK LYRICS WRITTING WITH A DISEASED NEEDLE
LYRICALLY.. YOUR SKILLS LEVELS "PASSED AWAY"~ LIKE DECEASED PEOPLE~
AS AN MC YOUR WACK, your flows LOOSER than your WEAVE TRACKS
your rhymes leave niggas HUNGRY thats why you get no FEEDback


I GOT NO LOVE FOR HOE FAGGOTS,
CUZ BITCH THE WHOLE FACT IS,
you could make your CD out of GOLD, but you still wouldnt reach GOLD STATUS

Yu Bin SunD 09-18-03 03:35 PM

ha no doubt you Tonya got these shit it's was funny and stronger punnchlines Steelifist had nothing compared to her
Vote=TM

MR. Spits 09-18-03 03:38 PM

i think tonya took this only wit her punchs and multis and wordplay all around tight ass battle but im gonna give it to tonya

Illynice 09-18-03 03:41 PM

good shit both rhymes were ill.. but i think that steelfist had the better more creative punchlines

"you coulndt PEN SICK LYRICS WRITTING WITH A DISEASED NEEDLE
LYRICALLY.. YOUR SKILLS LEVELS "PASSED AWAY"~ LIKE DECEASED PEOPLE~
AS AN MC YOUR WACK, your flows LOOSER than your WEAVE TRACKS
your rhymes leave niggas HUNGRY thats why you get no FEEDback"

Steelfist 09-18-03 03:50 PM

aiight... uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ...................

Yu Bin SunD 09-18-03 03:54 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80423

vote for my battle peeps

Steelfist 09-18-03 04:14 PM

again uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .....................

MR. Spits 09-18-03 04:15 PM

yo sence i hit ya'lls up wit an honest vote could ya'll hit mine up wit an honest vote here is da link aight holla



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80426

Funda-mentalz 09-18-03 04:20 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Illynice
good shit both rhymes were ill.. but i think that steelfist had the better more creative punchlines

"you coulndt PEN SICK LYRICS WRITTING WITH A DISEASED NEEDLE
LYRICALLY.. YOUR SKILLS LEVELS "PASSED AWAY"~ LIKE DECEASED PEOPLE~
AS AN MC YOUR WACK, your flows LOOSER than your WEAVE TRACKS
your rhymes leave niggas HUNGRY thats why you get no FEEDback"


^^BIggest d/r on rb, voted for steelfist in my battle against him also, where i won 5-1

tonya took this with punches and wordplay...nuff said
vote=tonya

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 04:22 PM

iight yall thanks for showin luv.....uppin..................................... ...................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Funda-mentalz 09-18-03 04:23 PM

Sorry BREAKDOWN
Punches-tonya
metas-tonya
wordplay-tonya
flow-even
structure-tonya
complexity-tonya
creativity-tonya

Steelfist 09-18-03 04:27 PM

DUNN AIIGHT MAN.. QUIT LICKING PUSSY... UP THIS.............................................. ..........................................

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 05:01 PM

up up an up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !hollaaa yall.............................................. ......................

Born To Kill 09-18-03 05:19 PM

I think Tonya took this battle on wordplay.

Honestly, it was close.

Both hit hard, had decent personals, and both flowed well.

Not that Steel didn't bring wordplay, I just thought Tonya's got the better of him this time.

Very close.

Props to both.

Holla back...
Born vs. Rappad

Tonya~Montana 09-18-03 07:07 PM

uppin for last couple votes yall....................show some love.............................................. ........................

J.Dubya 09-18-03 07:22 PM

Metaphores - tie
Vocabulary - SF
Punchlines - TM
Wordplay - SF
Creativity - tie
Personals - neither
Structure - TM
Opener - SF
Finisher - TM
Multies - tie
Flow - tie
Overall - SF (3-3)
^This battle is too close for me to vote. I feel that it was evenly matched, therefore I came to the conclusion of a TIE.

Strategies 09-18-03 08:06 PM

This was a tight ass battle , punches were going everywhere.
But honestly Tonya got it , her punches were hitting' harder
than Steelfist's.Bigg up to you both.

Vote:Tonya Montana , good shit ma ;)

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