J.Dubya vs. the real MC
 

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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

.:.GOOD LUCK.:.

I may not be a jew, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a foo', cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/
and just remember that I don't frown, when the beat pound//
you know i hate you, and that i can't stand that foo'/
every time you try to do, you just suck like a jew//
now you should know that i rule, but you suck like a fool/
you know better then to challenge me to a duel, so lets just play pool//
mabye you should go back to were ur from, and beat on ur drum/
wile i set her and drink a quart of rum, and you can go kiss a bum//
I know that you don't know shit about me, cuz ur just another slut to me/
so why don't you just pay the fee, then you can be//
another little pussy whipped BITCH!

aight, checkin in...
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Look at this bitch throwin' stones, only way he could rock a mic,
All you're doin is holdin' me up, like a fat man on a group hike/
It's like I'm experiencing death, 'cause I already seen the light,
just crown me king now, 'cause this bitch already lost the fight/
Ur verse was filler-no killer-u aint got what it takes to be a spiller,
the FAKE mc is gettin hit wit' a thriller, now tell this fag who's iller/
I don't even have to write rhymes to end this guy's battle lines,
he's faker than them promises wrote on marketing billboard signs/
This fucker could be an artist but couldn't paint a clear picture,
wit' lines so old and unread, they were copped from a bible scripture/

anyways hit this whack shit up y'all...
uppin...(1)
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aight my vote goes to j.Dubya because he had a hotter flow beat him in every section and yo didnt he use this rap in my battle but anywas let i go cause i bett him and so did u j.dubya

MY 'VoTe' J.Dubya

NEED I EXPLAIN?? the real emcee is more 'wack' then marilyn manson....
vote=j.dubya
hit this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80253

i have a UZI and it's fully loaded and your gonna get it/
so just incase you don't already know that it's gonna be in a bit//
you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
god even i can do this, cuz i don't like ur fuckin diss/
even when i hear a cat hiss, i say fuck it and go take a piss//
I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/
and just remember that I don't frown, when the beat pound//
as the beats get harder, it pounds and pounds/
my balls grow alot larger, as i'm doing this round
you know i hate you, and that i can't stand a few/
every time you try to do, you just suck like a jew//
now you should know that i rule, but you suck like a fool/
you know better then to challenge me to a duel, so lets just play pool//
mabye you should go back to were ur from, and beat on ur drum/
while i set her and drink a quart of rum, and you can go fuck another bum//
I know that you don't know shit about me, cuz ur just another whore to me/
so why don't you just pay the fee, then you can be//
another little whipped BITCH!/
so just incase u wanna leave the street go and find i ditch//
just remember that you can't fuck with the_real_MC

THAT REAL EMCEE SHOULD CHANGE IS NAME TO WACK EMCEE

what are u ???/ 9 yrs old????????

I will not back down, because your a fucking clown/

wtf is that? is this ur first rap ever in your life?????????

you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
(eat some poo???? wtf is this bullshit????)

fuck rap man, go listen to some good charlotte or something

this aint for you


no further xplanations

Vote = JDUBYA

yea actually it's my first time on here you nigger whipped bitch so cut a guy some fucking slack............................................. .............
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yea bicth i don't really care what you think of me/
us all bitches to me and plus j.dubya is my friend cuz he//
the only one that can take you on and i knw that i suck/
but hey fuck it because i don't give a fuck//
i know that i'll never take him/
and i know that i'll never win//
but fuck it, it's all to help a friend/
that i know and he will depend//
on another good friend and that can be a good thing/
and you never know mabye someday i'll give the guy a (phone call)ring//

Come on y'all, let's get this closed.
UPPIN (2)
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J.Dubya vs. the real MC

this battle was nasty

lol the real MC! no hating - but ya shit garbage !
U RAP LIKE JUELZ SANTANA

breakdown


lol
you know that i may not rule, so don't try and sue/
so don't be a fool, cuz i'll make you eat some poo//
god even i can do this, cuz i don't like ur fuckin diss/

Some good shit
Look at this bitch throwin' stones, only way he could rock a mic,
All you're doin is holdin' me up, like a fat man on a group hike/
It's like I'm experiencing death, 'cause I already seen the light,


wordplay: j
punches:j
creativity:j
multis:j
effort:j
overall:j

LOL , thanx for the laugh Real MC , a little practice and yul be alright , no hating here , but Dubya got you on all angles and cylinders , punches , flow ,structure , personals , it was landslide , but like I said , practice , and keep elevating , yu be aigght.

Peace CE

this has been my whackest battle ever! lol... anyways i just wanna get this shit closed...UPPIN (3)
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real MC, what the hell was that? That was the gayest thing i ever heard.(good job) lol
that frickn hillarious, fo real.

UPPIN, LET'S GET THIS CLOSED ALREADY.
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can't vote but here's some feedbak............j'dubya merked this chumo....no offence but his versewas awk...

whole thing inc' flow,lyrics,wordplay etc=j

One sided beating...

MC never landed a punch.

Wordplay: J
Punches: J
Metas: J
Flow: J
Complexity: J

Very newbie and herbish style by MC, but he's new so that's kind of to be expected.

Peace

Holla back...
Vote, please

j dub straight tore dis battle up niggas he had good punchs multis wordplay and it all flow'd nicely da real mc needs some serious elevation cause dat shit was wack as fuck vote j dub