Dark Cursiv V DiverseSyndicate
 

10-16 lines
minimal feedin allowed
no crew votes
no dickridin votes
spit ya verse son, I'll be spittin in awhile

peace

why ain't this faggot posted his verse, I'll merk this bitch before he can even breathe his verse............................................. .................................................. ..

dark cursiv...........i know you my mums angela and my step dads kenny hahaha........can't refer to other shit...........r u comin mine tonite biatch

Yeah, my boy lyrical cyanide, what up blood, Lyrical Cyanide is my dawg from way back, we're from the same place and shit.............................................. .............................

damn son good to here from ya.....................i'll take this outa ya thread check ya pm's....................word.................

waitin for you to post
u make tha thread u post first
,still waitin~1~***************************************** *************************************************

aiight im tired of these no-shows.

dark cursiv you aint bold-n-italic, if u talkin shit better watch ya neck cause im holdin-metallic//

u need some check-spellin, u done talked shit now u holdin ya neck-yellin, my shells dissect-felons//

u think your an emcee, u think you got flows, u aint got shit but slipped into a dark cold, now ya froze//

i spit to glorify myself to a lower-race, but in tha midst my rhymes turn u from cursive to lower-case//

now u writin in simple-print, call me tha nimble-pimp who wont lend-you-rent, break ya legs,come to tha hospital and bend-ya-splints//

my vo-cabulary ,slows-adversarys, down to point-blank, ya flaky, when i finish ill roll you up in a joint-wit-dank//

i hit harder than heavy weight boxin, draped your cape in toxins, your dead and i left you wit no options//

u lit my fuse, it gives me an excuse to bruise, leave you bathed in blacks-n-blues, cause you got attacked-n-used//

stack-tha-clues of your iminent-death, i have an infinite-guess, and i sense-it-was-stress//

but thats what ill tell tha medic personale, thought youd get-it that this is worse-than-hell.

uppin for this kat to post^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I'll post now, sorry for the wait blood, couldn't get on a pc:

Check:

This guy tryin to up his cred by talkin bout street felony, this boy gonna fail/
Cos I've got this cat confused like a dog chasin it's tail/

The darkness will prevail in this battle of ten to sixteen lines/
I'll kill this faggot in combat, he couldn't win if he bit everyone of my rhymes/

Cos cursiv will leave this faggot dead up in a hearse, mom cryin at the church/
Why's this bitch moanin to fuck cos I wouldn't go first/

But for real this guy re-spits his verse like he about to regurgitate/
he couldn't buss a lyrics if he wrote rhymes on his dick and began to masterbate/

He's a fake rapper lookin for newbie MC's to abuse 'em/
How can this cat be good at pittin', straight fro the suburbs of houston/

I can't be bothered no more, merkin this faggot like my name was Charles Manson/
Faggot go and cross dress and put on ya fake breasts like Marylin Manson

Ya can sut up moanin now!

uppin for some votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^

DS had a nice opener...nice wordplay...diss hit well..punches landed good... nice multi's

dark was iight...he had a terrible opener...some of his barz were elementary and punches did'nt hit so good...

vote DS

Vote=Diverse

He had better flow and multis and I was feelin
his flow more than Dark's.But Diverse need to
use some punches in his verses.Dark was way off
and that masturbatin' line is played.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

thanks for tha votes,still uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I disagree, my punches were stronger, in my opinion because I felt that his were indirect and could be aimed at anyone, as if it was, dare I say "pre-written".........and that masterbation line isn't played, how can it be cause I reworked the masterbation line and rewrote the rule book.

Let me break that line down......."bust" means ejaculate but also bust a rhyme, get it now, "couldn't "bust" a lyric if he wrote rhymes on his dick and began to masterbate" that lines hot no-matter wot y'all say cos I know if in an audio battle or on the mic "1 to 1" that line would've swayed the vote.

well my verse wasnt pre written, it took you like 13 hours to post after i wrote my verse, no offense but we know what tha punches mean, u dont have to break it down for anybody,but its played as in tha concept of tha punch is played ,not exactly what u said, dont hate, just elevate......oh yea uppin^^

u chattin shit, I didn't have access to a pc so I couldn't post my verse...........................................

hey playa,i aint got beef im jus sayin.******************************************** ******************************

ds took this wit better flow and punchs ds had a pritty tight flow darks was kinda wak this battle but ds came wit it vote ds and please return da favor


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81085

I kno, I came a little weaker than usual, but I'll rematch this guy and beat him fo'real........................................... ...........................

uppin this battle just two more votes,yall dont sleep.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^

uppin for more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Dark Cursiv had this with beta and harder hits.....I liked his structure better aswell.....the other cat came hard but he didnt really have the edge, too much irelevent vocab which he could of done without?

just freeposting so I can vote yo!!!............................................. .........................ive set our battle dark cursiv so go spit.............................................

thanks for the votes,dont free post.~1~Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin this battle for two more votes come on yall dont sleep.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin one last time for some votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^

both came nice but devise came alil more on point with multi and punches


punches=diverse
flow=DC
multis=diverse
wordplay=diverse
vocab=diverse

in most aspects diverse murdered this youngin..

vote diverse

i gotta holla at ds on this one man his flow was pretty sick.............................the otha kat had some mean punches on him tooo but imma drop the vote on ds

DiverseSyndicate IS DQ'D, NEXT TIME FOLLOW THE RULES