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Bionicle VS ~Young~
yea... ok... were doin
8-10 usual vote rules he spit first 45 min time limit afta check in |
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intricate with infinite shit, it's ridiculous tryin to burn me |
distinguished with linguists, kids're callin me Oxytrol the way i serve P(ee) | observe me beat this pervert geek, u stay losin n battlin beginners, u aint takin this vet | i'll stab a stake in ur chest..u a fraud convincin u ill, u got a better chance fakin ur death | ur shits cheap, hit me n u won't answer when tomorrow calls | any bitch freak cud swallow u cause u spit weak when u've got hollow balls | u're a child..please! though guys thinkin ur sick cus u got offered a trial sneeze | i'm versatile with ease, u ruff ride is the reason no one feels ur Styles P!! | u're the boy at the beach tryin to kill seagles, my bars always in a workout, their built diesel | now P wanna K talk, when u J walked is the only thing u did Ill-legal! | |
sorry a lil late... my compuer kept freezing... anyway, here it goes
Are you ready for MERK TIME!? ... ready... yo, yo, ayo... It's like I'm in a garden da way I pick out herbs and quickly treat dem ta wut dey deserve// Put dis niggaz face ta da curb, give em da Kensington kiss, except dis is murda wit werds// Inverted wit verbs, I recklessly kill niggaz just ta live'n da hype// Wit a verse like hypnotism, cuz I paralyze ya eyes and sodomize ya life// Dis bitch just artificial replacement of body parts so I serve him da-feet// I could smash ya face in da black top an you still wouldn’t make an impression on da street// I’m pressin da heat, he's stressin da beef, da game's just started pussy, it's all in play-boy// I implacate dis rag, ta implivate dis fag, cuz who else would name demself afta a childs play toy?// [b.:walks over to bionicle, signs the mic, and hands it to him:.[/b] aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME... REFERENCE: 2nd line: Kensington Kiss: put his head on da curb and stomp... it kills dem instantly 5th: bionic is defined as an artificial body part... da feet/defeat... get it? 6th: make a dent in da street with ur face 7th: pussy in playboy, all in play.... get it? 8th: ya know dem bionicle jawns ya lil brother plays with... |
I'll break it down
Punches-YP Multie-YP Flow-Bionicle Persoanl-none OVERALL YP for a better overall verse |
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Punches...Biionicle "intricate with infinite shit, it's ridiculous tryin to burn me | distinguished with linguists, kids're callin me Oxytrol the way i serve P(ee)" Wordplay...Tie vocab...Tie Flow...Bionicle Multis....Young VOTE__BIONICLE |
YOUNG, YOU HADE THIS ONE GOOD PUNCH:
INVERTED WIT VERBS, I RECKLESSLY KILL NIGGAZ JUST TA LIVE'N DA HYPE// WIT A VERSE LIKE HYPNOTISM, CUZ I PARALYZE YA EYES AND SODOMIZE YA LIFE// BUT BI0 HAD A BETTER ONE: U'RE A CHILD..PLEASE! THOUGH GUYS THINKIN UR SICK CUS U GOT OFFERED A TRIAL SNEEZE | I'M VERSATILE WITH EASE, U RUFF RIDE IS THE REASON NO ONE FEELS UR STYLES P!! | SO IN MY OPINION BIONICAL JUST CAME BETTER IN EVERY ASPECT OF THE BATTLE. . .MORE CONSISTENT WITH PUNCHES. . .A FLOW. . .MULTI'S, HOT WORDPLAY & SLICK PERSONALS. . .YOU WAS GOOD YOUNG BUT DA FEET LINES ARE PLAYED, BESIDES THAT YOU DID HAVE A COUPLE OF NICE LINES LIKE: I’M PRESSIN DA HEAT, HE'S STRESSIN DA BEEF, DA GAME'S JUST STARTED PUSSY, IT'S ALL IN PLAY-BOY// BUT ONCE I READ THIS I THOUGHT BI0 DEFINATELY HAD IT: DISTINGUISHED WITH LINGUISTS, KIDS'RE CALLIN ME OXYTROL THE WAY I SERVE P(EE) | . . .SO MY VOTE=BI0 |
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Close Battle, Fire From Both...Lets Break This Down...
.:BREAKDOWN:. FLOW=Young P PUNCHES=Tie WORDPLAY=Bionicle METAS=Young P OVERALL=Young P VOTE=~YOUNG P~ |
If I had one-hundread post I would vote for P. Both of yous had some nice shit, equally good punches and i lovd the rhymes... but the thing in bionicles sig was gay... whenever i put the curser ova it a error box poped up... thats some gay shit. But it dont matta i dont have 100 post yet... well this is my first one.
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from now on none of dese herbs votin... less den 250 posts no votin...
fuckin wack ass bitches... uppin... no d/r it says bionicle.. folow da rules... |
Punches-Young P
Flo-Bionicle Wordplay-Young P Vocab-Young P Overall-Young P iight ima give this one to young p cuz his verse was the overall best in this battle |
how come all da vets voted for me (except brooklyn) and da newbs are votin for bionicle?? hmm... idk ... anyone have a guess?
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this was actually pretty close, young p had a few of direct punch lines but i didnt really see much creativity in them like that da feet line is played as fuck, i used it a while ago, bionicle you almost lost this shit, i thought u did at the beginning but the creativity in your verse got you this win
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Vote - bionicle |
this battle wqasnt explained well,...im deletin alll the non explained votes from both sides. then seein how many are left.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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I THOUGHT THE SAME THING, THIS WAS UNFAIR BECAUSE I GOT IM'D TO VOTE. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
young p= 3...
bionicle= 3... dont bitch, or i may just close this. maybe not, you decide. all non explained votes removed. |
yea and may i add dat da bitches votes dat were not well explained do not have a second chance to try and vote again... d/r will be suspected...
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breakin it down
Punches=Young P Flow=Both Wordplay=Young P Vocab=Both Personals= None Overall=Young P |
yo imma say this is bionicle all the way
P~...you had some good multis but your flow wasnt as consistent overall your rhyme could've been a lot betta and came a lot harder..i thought you were betta bionicle..good battle..you had tight lines that put P~ ta sleep ya multi use was iight but could've been betta..but i think you jus had harder hits overall and came with a betta flow Vote.bionicle |
if anyone else votes, would ya mind doin dat... i know i didnt explain it in da rules but i like dat way betta... betta explained...
BTW... DNA aint a crew anymore.... just wanted ta let ya know |
i mean break it down like Zany did.................
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damn close battle, very very close, so lemme break it down, cause thats what Young wants
Flow-Young Punches-Both Personals-None Metas-Young Wordplay-Both Multis-None Overall-Young Vote-~Young P~ |
BROOKLYNBOYBOY: YOUNG P IM'D YOU TO VOTE ON HIS BATTLE?
ZanySkillz: :-\ ZanySkillz: yeh dont ban me FOR THE LAST TIME THIS WILL BE REOPENED, NO D/R VOTES! |
This Was Tough ...
Bionicle Had That Wordplay Definitely ... And Tha Complexity, but Young P Came Harder Punchwise ... But I Was Really Feelin Bionicle's Verse Wit Tha Wordplay ... It Got Me Hooked, Young P Jus Had Punches and Wasnt as Creative as Bionicle ... Vote: Bionicle |
no fuckin way
...... fuck dat brooklyn.... dats called askin someone ta vote............................. |
ALL VOTES MUST BE RECEIVED BY VOTING ON ANOTHER BATTLE & DROPPING THE LINK TO YOURS
ANYTHING ELSE THAT IS ADMITTED TO WHICH INCLUDES PM OR IM WILL BE REMOVED BECAUSE THE PERSON WHO YOU ASKED IS BOUND TO VOTE YOU IF YOUR COOL WITH THEM OR IF YOU STATE TO VOTE FAIRLY THATS UNACCEPTABLE -BROOKLYN |
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