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WORD~PERFECT 09-20-03 01:15 PM

yo fuck a hook and fuck you (collab)WORD~P,BLAC HAZE,SYNTEX,PROPAIN,SHEPNEY-
 
ALL HAIL AS CENTZ APPROACHES……………..

Im the judge and jury- of complex context since CANIBUS is already steady on active duty-
Fuck the club fuck the bluberry PLUS platinum jewelry-
that foolery is for tv and chuck woolery.
I aint got 50 CENTZ in my pocket or a mil on debit…..
I AINT PULLING HOES CAUSE I GOT DOE ON WELFARE CREDIT-CASH MONEY!!!!!!!!!!!! forget it!!!!!!!
LIL WAYNE’S LAST CD regret it.
I thought PLATINUM meant the finer things.
they still wear the same bling with the same size rim rings.
22 k~g’s- don’t mean nothing if you cant sell 22 c~d’s-
yall nigguz sound like fem hype mens for EMINEM and you call your self m.c.’s
you just feminen with some testies-
replacing your ovaries-and your flow as how as polar degree.
Then there’s MURDER INC-JA callen out 50-
saying he can see son but cant see his career ending.
Befrieneding DMX –sending his mind into the X vortex-
sounding like a bitch doing R&B cause now he getting gay sex.
Plus he got the PAC complex but not concepts cause he cant flow-
still talken shit to the west he aboute to serve on DEATH ROW.
And im old and new school…i ever dropped out-but graduated to ripping m.c.’s mouths.
So what ima do is take 7 consinents-and you them constent to rip you through 7 continents.
Utilizing the BLUEPRINT for STILLMATTIC-
and wage beafs with the number 2 led skillcraft automatic.
Remember BIG AND PACS beaf now we on the streets where it gets tragic.


shEpNeY_zAnY

Fuckin Insdusrty Rappers..Faker Than Plastic..Shits Drastic..
Get 50’s Life And Crash It..And Ja Fool..U Tha Oppostite To Cool..
U Fake Thug Prolly Drowns In A Hollow Pool..Or In His Own Drool..
Tie A Rope Around Ur Neck And Kick The Stool…
When People Ask Me If You Wack I Don’t Even Needa Think..
Cause Shady Records Is Way Better Than MURDER PINK..
You Absurd If U Think That Yall Rappers Is Real..
Snoop And His Stoners Voice Is Somin Fans Don’t Feel..
Pac Aint No Thug He Smells Beef And Starts Runnin Back..
I’m Makin Sure That Ur Dead..And Aint Comin Back..
No Cuttin Slack..And That White Boy Wigga..
And Those People Who With Him Givin A Bad Name To Nigga..
Im A Little Curios..Is Luda Fast Or Ss He Furious..NONE!
When He Said He Was A Thug I Was Like IS HE SERIOUS..

BLAC HAZE]
5 Of The Most Dangerous Emcees Up In This Mother Fucker
Took Your Girl And Stuck Her Then Loaded Up And Bucked Her
Throwing Shots At Fake Gangstas Like Ja Rule
Must Be A Fucking Fool To Think Rapping Wit Bitches Will Make U Cool
Now On To That Snitch 50 Who Talks About Ducking 9 Shots And Able To Survive
Fuck It I’d Need Just One Shot At That Ugly Ass Mug To Make Sure He Ain’t Alive
How Does Suge Even Survive, Can’t Release New Pac Albums Forever Can You?
Already Someone To Pump It Up But Whose The Emcee That Can Slam You
Cuz I Dare You To Give Me A Chance In The Spotlight
Or Is Marshall Afraid I Might Just Steal His Spot Cuz I’m White

PROPAIN
Lil’ Wayne needs a break, Mannie fresh lose some weight, and Baby, the “Birdman”, needs go on and migrate/
my hate, is for what I call the hip hop disgrace, putting people in their place, giving Nelly a real reason to wear those Ban-Aids on his face/
I respect some shit, but that shit still deserves a diss/
like "slim shady" wouldn’t be shit, cuz I started eating "M&M’s" when I was like 6/
shit, I seriously had enough, it’s tough to watch music go up/
Master P, is even getting f*cked, and I guess that’s why he says “UGHHHH” so much/
On the real, its gonna be revealed, how this little poet feels, JD’s label has to be So So Def(deaf), to give him a deal/
back in his “life in 1472”, he was fronting like he something/
nowadays,JD save your “Instructions” cuz I’m not interested in "dick suckInG/

SYNTEX

My words perfect my vision of killin you soft kats...
fuck ya pimp juice i stagger rappers like alcoholics on relapse//
tactics grap the gats attack NELLY that fake fag...
Jarule wants it in his mouth like "I WANNA TASTE YOUUUUU Badd"~/~
Ya commercial queers hears the ender you cats fear the streets...
Birdman Yeah right i'll let PRO set a flame to ya wings~/~
Fuck Dupri i leave this cat addicted wanting to sign a fiend...
but i'm twenty you only hang with kids thats like 13teen~/~

PROPAIN
there’s no other, another stutter and your bitch is going under
Give DMX some rubbers/
cuz the truth is, they’re all “Ruff Rydin” each other/
sending shots, to hip hops, most notorious spots, wether you like it or not/
get a "key or combination" and easily decode “The Lox”, (locks)/
Losing my cool, when these fools get schooled, take it back to the top, and break all of Ja’s Rules/
where it’s at, Puffy, face the facts, make all the “I Need A Girl’s” you want, but Jennifer ain’t coming back/
Rhymes are a bore, 50, you aint worth shit to hip hop, I cant even spend you in the “DOLLAR STORE”/
music aintlife, and music is a disgrace, so am I a disgrace/
or just in a place, where you cant speak if you’re a certain race/
it’s disgusting, I’m busting and fronting, making all these rappers think of something/
reading their bars untill their thought of winning deminishes/
Clamping their appendages and latch headings with their own appendixes/

SYNTEX
industry hurting now cause words of diverse rhymes collide..
shit BIRDMAN i'm death your numbers up no need to try to hide~/~
and Fuck lil wayne lil zane you fugly bastards ya rap sucks....
trying hard to strap up only your too young to get
to drive and get GASED up~/~
we bomb trucks your not escaping and ebadding this rapping...
i see the fatal FOURtakein over the SOLDIERS and tainting they pastreys~/~
you lil half bit thugs you get torn up from the Knees up...
squeeze lemons on this fag to give GUNIT a Final cut~/~

**~SynText~** 09-20-03 01:49 PM

YO STRAIGHT ILLNESS SURE TO BE IN THE HALL OF FAME HERE

WORD~PERFECT 09-20-03 02:35 PM

I HOPE PEOPLE LIKE

~ProPaiN~ 09-20-03 03:23 PM

GANGSTUHzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz this shit is Blazin No doubt....................Fuck the feedbacks.....This just too HArdcore....lol

Geologists 09-20-03 03:27 PM

HOLY FUCK THIS SHIT IZ OFF THE MOTHER FUCKIN HOOK.... DAWG THIS SHIT IS LIKE THE BEST SHIT RIGHT HERE. Dawg all I can saw was this shit right here will get you record deals from fuckin america to like CHINA dawg.. This shit was mos def off the HOOK.

~ProPaiN~ 09-20-03 04:13 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Geologists
HOLY FUCK THIS SHIT IZ OFF THE MOTHER FUCKIN HOOK.... DAWG THIS SHIT IS LIKE THE BEST SHIT RIGHT HERE. Dawg all I can saw was this shit right here will get you record deals from fuckin america to like CHINA dawg.. This shit was mos def off the HOOK.


^^^YEA YA"LL FEEL THE RUSH!!!.....hahahahahaha

UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

DiverseSyndicate 09-20-03 04:33 PM

damn this piece was BANGIN!! there isnt anything about this that was wack,everything was on point,erybody rhymed well together, good topic,sure to be a classic in tha hall of fame,keep spittin the illness.11 out of 10.~1~

Speek.E.Z. 09-20-03 11:35 PM

This Thread Is Like... Word

**~SynText~** 09-21-03 12:45 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHA SHIT IS THE HOOK AND GANGSTAHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you we need to think about an AUDIO version of this shit.............................................. .......

MethodZ 09-21-03 03:57 AM

yo i am likin this collab dawg...

tell us what you think....state the name give the reply about it....

Pz..nice work peeps..we should do another one

MethodZ 09-21-03 06:38 AM

UPPIN FOR SOME FEEDBAK ON THIS SHIT YALL
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Otherwordz 09-21-03 06:39 AM

damn it kidz...how come nobody tried to holla at me to get up in this?????? :( ...but anywayz...this collab was straight fire...

Gene Pool 09-21-03 01:34 PM

damn dis shit is HOT! not really much I can say cept that this was bangin. if u guys are ever thinkin of makin an audio. this is the shit right here. sittin on a fuckin goldmine bro's.

and if u got the spare time check out mine and masta C's collab called "life is what we hate (ft masta C)" and I'll be posting another collab by us called "high times" sometime today so plz leave some feedback as it would be much appreciated. thanx in advance. peace.

WORD~PERFECT 09-21-03 04:23 PM

uppin this peace im glad people enjoyed it and i would love to do more collab work with everyone if king of thieves can be included in..............

Bio*Chemist 09-21-03 07:36 PM

This was a good collab...

SYNTEXT and PROPAIN......

Nice collab fam,..

Over good collab with all the emcees...Nice flow the flow was definitly on key...

~ProPaiN~ 09-21-03 10:36 PM

EY EY EY THIS AINT OVA YET YOUNGSTAZ


AHAHAHAHHAAH FUCKERS READ AND GIVE SOME FEED

Saint Shizzle 09-21-03 10:36 PM

holy shit LoL so many names in this LoL an yet it didnt come out fucked up like i woulda expected.....dam hotness good lookin ta fam man nice shit

**~SynText~** 09-21-03 10:55 PM

hahahahahaha uppin this hotness vote for us for the hall of fame yeahyeah

WORD~PERFECT 09-22-03 02:17 AM

uppin this also for my omen fam

Mr.Christensen 09-22-03 02:23 AM

off the hook....let me know when u doing the next big collab like this...hopefully i wont suck and actually drop something ill

upping for IJL
we insane, we joke, we write... oh yeah... we GANGSTAH!!!!

**~SynText~** 09-22-03 02:50 AM

DAMN RIGHT WE GANGSTAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Carmen 09-22-03 03:26 AM

That was off the Deep End!!! That was sick, you guys are straight spit in your face...you guys heated it up with that one. I was feeling that. Keep it up. One+

**~SynText~** 09-22-03 05:32 AM

yeah yeah gangstahhh!!!!!!!!! lets get a Hall of fame vote come on............

Otherwordz 09-22-03 08:03 AM

I wanna be in the damn hall of fame...lol...YO KIDZ...CHECK OUT MY SS BATTLE WITH EVOLVE...IT'S DOPE AS FUCK...I can't believe I'm actually winning that shit...

**~SynText~** 09-22-03 08:56 AM

um ok uppin

Edicius 09-22-03 09:02 AM

Beefin pac and ja rule ,.....nah didnt like the concept :),...had some iite lines, but a fuckt up concept.

**~SynText~** 09-22-03 09:04 AM

UM you can take ya lame ass comment and drop out the escape hatch before i merk you hahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha onez

Sweet Sauce 09-22-03 08:06 PM

everything was sick as fuck cept for the diss of pac and em ;) fuck 50 fuck ja fuck em all But even wit da disses it was still sick..
nice shit all..
Word Havent talk to u in a minute 1 nigga

Axiom 09-22-03 09:49 PM

~ProPaiN~ Absolutely Killed It... His Disses Were Hilarious... Just Messed Up With His Last Four Lines Are So When He Was Talkin Bout Himself... But The Disses Bout P. Diddy And J. Lo, And The JD Diss And The Ruff Ryders Disses... ~ProPaiN~ Had Me Rollin On The Floor Laughin... Well Not Literally But Yea... Good Shit From Him... The Other Verses Were Mediocore.

Bash 09-22-03 10:09 PM

Tight collab..........Let me break this shit down

WORD~PERFECT your verse was iLL.............U had some nice lines......You wordplay was untop of it's game...........Vocabulary was kinda weak but you still Rip this shit up nonetheless.........Multies were tight , your rhyme scheme was blazing.............and your structure was tight.........Overall I give ur verse an 8/10

shEpNeY_zAnY your verse was aight , you didnt come out as strong as I wanted you too..............Your Disses were simple , some of them were aight though.............But u didnt come as hard as the other cats.......You played wit ur words good , your structure was tight , Nice rhyme scheme , but your disses held you down........Overall I give your verse a 7/10...

BLAC HAZE's verse was Nice , it would sound tight in audio.....But like Shepney your disses were weak , Your punches didnt hit hard enough.......Your verse sounded like you just keyed something up quickly..............Your wordplay was Great........Multies were Aight.......U Lacked Vocab , your structure was blazing and your rhyme scheme was On Fire.....................Overall I give your verse a 7/10.......

Personally I think that Propain had the best disses in this piece...........His shit had me laughing all the way through....It was just halirious....He cameout funny.................He's Lines were tight...........where it’s at, Puffy, face the facts, make all the “I Need A Girl’s” you want, but Jennifer ain’t coming back/
hahahahahaha^^^^^^^^^^.............iLL shit man...........Overall I give your verses a 9/10...

Now Syntext , even though u made a diss open mic towards aNb......I will still give you feedback........First of all , STOP talking about Hall Of Fame because this piece will never be nominated to R-B Legend.............Anyways dawg both your verses were Nice.........U had sum funny shit in there too.....................Your verses were more hardcore than funny.........U had sum nice multies and wordplay...........I also liked your rhyme scheme.... ,..........Overall I give your verses a 7.5/10.....................................And Overall I give this collab an 7.9/10.....Hell 7.9 is one point behind an 8 , so I might aswell give ya all the 8..............So overall this collab get an 8/10.......It had a tight concept too it..........Nice shit cuzznz..........And one more thing...............THIS IS NOT R-B LEGENDS MATERIAL..........Now return the favour on both of these pieces http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80453 and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&highlight=Bash

Ctownzfinest21 09-22-03 10:56 PM

this is da best peice ive read u kept it real da whole time got luv and respect 4 ya keep droppin dat shit u is rippin dawg wit no doubt.u got mad skillz.holla

C-TownsFinest5 09-22-03 10:59 PM

ill ass shit mane.yo shit set it off.keep it up dawg.holla


CTF(represent)

MethodZ 09-22-03 11:32 PM

uppin for feeedbakk
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**~SynText~** 09-23-03 02:38 AM

upppin for votes

N.D.eva 09-23-03 02:58 PM

this was good shit, nice colab

thought it was good all round 8/10

peace.........................

~ProPaiN~ 09-23-03 03:02 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Ambiguous
~ProPaiN~ Absolutely Killed It... His Disses Were Hilarious... Just Messed Up With His Last Four Lines Are So When He Was Talkin Bout Himself... But The Disses Bout P. Diddy And J. Lo, And The JD Diss And The Ruff Ryders Disses... ~ProPaiN~ Had Me Rollin On The Floor Laughin... Well Not Literally But Yea... Good Shit From Him... The Other Verses Were Mediocore.



^^^thanks but i didnt do this solo Give props to My dawgs Word and Shep and Black

And cant forget about my GangstUh Homey SYntex

UPPUN PPL who didnt read this

**~SynText~** 09-24-03 12:31 AM

lmfao yeah yeah **bows gracifully and falls**


ayo peeps if its alright i wanna put this in audio lol

MethodZ 09-24-03 01:41 AM

iight fa sheezy....how we gonna do it...?????

i can record jus my voice on my thing den send it to u ???

get at me on aim ZanySkillz

~ProPaiN~ 09-25-03 02:01 AM

LOL YEA I WANNA DO THIS ON AUDIO STYLE


Hahahaahaa

Speek.E.Z. 09-25-03 02:26 AM

That Would Be Tight Hit Me Up At SpeekEeeZee


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