AprenticeKid~VS~C-Drama
 

10 lines max
no crew or d/r votes
no biting or feeding

verses due half an hour after check in

ight, coo


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iight dogg so u spittin first or what. no bullshit iightdogg lets do this@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

umm you spit first, ima be on da road for ten mins to pick up something

ight?


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ill spit after u come back from the road slick one...... waitin on ur shit but ima start in like 5 mins ............................

Yo ill hit this up lata dont think im duckin neither iight spit ur shit nd i wont duck iight no hate peace

yea yea, i wouldnt think that cuz i jes got back, and ma moms knocked me for the comp neways

if u here, spit, (i just spit first on anotha battle)

WTF man w.e im spittin im start like now iight!!!!!!! IIGHT LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

IIGHT FAGGOT UR DONE!!!!

Just like your mom, your style- is hurtin eyes, internalized, master raps cuz my spit can fertalize/ (WOW lets go)
I detected ur gay wishes of prowlin gay clubs and turnin eyez/
(DONT TEST ME)

Me or my style is like Stevie WOnder, cuz they not seein ya/
Spittin more acidic sickness than bul-EM-IA/

1-1 no one remembers ur wack wholesome wins, remembered as nursery shit, like THE OLSEN TWINS!!!/
so take my bulemia shit and binge!!(bitin), Your not competition ur debris left in my path/
like a atomic blasts, dont wry cuz the mind blocks out the painful past/(mind blocks out painful memories)
Like how APrentice kid lyrically,..... just raped ur ass/
My corruptin cords just left this faggot heated, WHO THE FUCK UPPINS FIVE TIMES/
means UR FAGGOT SHITS NOT EVEN WORTH READIN!!/



He lost his other battle cuz he uppined 6 times.... what does this tell u??

haha wow, nice drop,
writing ma shit now



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MY VERSE
 

I'm feelin grimey now~how you want it~your ears or your knees?//
I send CONVICTED queers to the CHAIR like CHRISTOPHER REEVES//
Best if you leave ~ cuz you'll either be ~ tied up in trunks//
Or [back on the job]....wearing [black thongs and red pumps]//(lol think about it)
I carry no symptoms but I'm sicker than your mom's cervix//
STRETCHED OUT more than YOUR VERSES~result of her daily service//
So learn this.....going against me~ain't logical//
..Your wins will come out more SHORTER than ATHLETES in a hospital//(really, think about it)
Stopping your [flow] like [clots] and [artery valves] or [water turning cold]//
Deliver ya ass to the whole RB Staff SLICED IN HALF like HOT DOG ROLLS//

send CONVICTED queers to the CHAIR like CHRISTOPHER REEVES
that ^ didnt make sense at all.. not too bad of a spit good multis but ur wordplay and punches lacked nyway nice drop 1

ha actually i meant to say "on the chair", i fucked up on that one



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nice drop from both so i'll break it down

flow-apprentice
punches-apprentice
Multies-drama
Wordplay-drama
enjoyment-apprentice

overall- apprentice for a better overall verse

IIght thx for the honest vote iight yall UPPIN ON THIS BATTLE SHIt UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNMMM

my vote aprentice....more original.....
however-its not cool how after his verse was done u start talkin bouot it in posts.....let us read it...that what we are here for.....non the less u recieve my vote....

ps...advice..mix up ur verse a lil bit next time..u used that bulimia line twice-an kill the "!!! & ()".....we can figure stuff out ourselves...were not idiot...pc*1*

Vote=aprentice
In my opinion, he won this in every aspec. FLow punches wordplay, the other cat used played punches.
Structure was the only thing i didn't like in aprentice's verse.
there ya go....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80649

^^peep this

dont know......close shit but i felt c-drama's verse more.......i think apprentice had good origanality and a hard punch in the bulemia section but the rest of the verse wasn't hard...........cold've produced more....jus think overall c-drama verse was hard hitting and better flowing

vote=c-drama.................

that was a hot battle pretty tight to but punches and flow defintely apprentice drama had a couple of hot lines nottin to amazing but good battle my vote-APRENTICE

uppin this battle

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Alright so its 3-1 for me come on yall dont sleep on this battle lets get a few more votes on this battl....UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

c drama yo gotta poll vote on my battle heres the link but i cant vote because i dont have 100 posts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...78&pagenumber=2

???? da fuck u talking about i poll voted on ur battle duke, check dat shit again, i wouldnt see why i didnt poll when i placed a vote for someone........neways

last of my uppins, aint looknig to get Dq for this shit.......

gotta go w/ apprentice.. better flow, wordplay n personals were better.. nice drop tho drama.. close battle..
vote=apprentice
hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80985

IIght yall 1 more vote if u can hit this up plz........ANYWAY UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN 4 hopefully the last time

IIght yall 1 more vote if u can hit this up plz........ANYWAY UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN 4 hopefully the last time

aprenticekid took it wit
punches
flow
metas
personals
wordplaay and
consistancy

good battle tho im out holla

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