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C_Drama Vs. Capcom
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No Crew Votes No D/R Votes No Hate Votes You Spit 1st |
kk, make this ma check in
you did it wrong tho dunny, remake it with so it supports poll vote and ill get at this when i get back but ya, make this ma check in |
It does support the poll.......What U talkin Bout LoL..................
............................I set it up right spit ya verse, so we can make this quick.............. |
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When I first peeped it, I didnt see any poll shit, maybe it was my comp
but I see it now neways, im back and here's ma verse I bruise your nerves when I loosely curse contusive verbs// You's been merked~thrown away like a fuse that's burnt// When I use the bird you [fall] like it was [deuce the third]//(First day of Autumn->23rd) The news was heard~his mom's crying when this dude's in urns// This useless turd's more PLAYED OUT than the ORIGIN OF YOUR NAME// He gon switch KEN for his name when I leave his clothes like the FLUID IN YA VEIN// .......are you insane? ~ I'm the sickest of em all// And we all sick of ya mom ~ posting "IN MEMORY OF" PICTURES ON THE WALL// ....It's a sad world....but everybody's gotta go// ....and by the way....tell ya pops I said hello (haha)// i start writing dis early but ma mom jes knocked me for the computer...neways, strike yer shit |
damn that start off was pretty sick cdrama but the endin wasnt that strong good spit tho upin 4 capcoms verse
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not to say anything but I hope you dont come back wit some pre-written shit
cuz you agreed in the Bitch slap when I told I have to go on da road for 10 mins I went for 10, came back took 20 something mins on the verse, posted it, (and usually battles like these due in half an hour) and u went offline...... neways man, im not tryna start something, uppin this till you come back (#2) |
man, and this dude's still not here, dis is da shit i cant take man, a 10 bar battle and it has to be strecthed out this long....
uppin (#3) |
My bad Pimp juice I've been Gone all day man.......Just got back from a dope ass house party, as you can see this post took place 2:07am Eastern Standard time (USA)......anyway Lemme key somethin up right quick to merk this verse...
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C-Drama, lil dirty bitch if I.C.U. you will See Drama
I'm tear your brain out ya skull & fed ex it to ya mama Like a Thugged out teacher, He wanna test my gangsta So I'ma Turn my test in wit Mack 11's & serve this wanksta GoT Beef? And I'll shank ya, I dont give a fuck about You If I put ya Life on a scale from 1-10...Bitch u'd rank about 2. C_Drama? If U'd of kept ya mouth shut, I'd a left u alone Like ya girlfriend did when You bought ya Fag Boyfriend Home Dawg its over, the crowd is still laughin at u cuz of my verse Just remember when you people poll I'm in the 2nd slot, Not 1st |
hmm both verses had good points
c-drama...good punches and good flow cap- i think you flow was just as good your punches were better but fewer.. close one but ima have to go cap... harder hits... pretty much it p.s. DONT EVER USE GANGSTER-WANKSTER.... |
Yeah...
Not sure why Cap came with the most played out rhyme on that line...(gangsta/wanksta)... That alone should be reason enough to give this battle to C... And, the fact that Cap just didn't show up for this... Been peepin his shit since he got here and this was the first time he basically ignored personals and wordplay... Yeah, there was some, but they were weak as hell. C-Drama started out really nice and ended so-so... But he brought enough in my opinion. Good multi's, nice imagery, decent wordplay, effective punches. Win this battle for C-Drama |
cap wins, harder all round
punches betta, hard to read C - murda's hit up my battles Dark Cursiv |
my vote goes to see drama same thing born said he came wit way to many played lines yo cap ya must had bein high or drunk nigga cause i no use way betta then dat nigga but my vote goes to c he came wit it on dis battle
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thnx ya'll for peeping da battle....
upping this battle (#4) .................................................. ...... |
Its a lot of wordplay in my verse, but I forgot that I was in the frontlines....I guess I should of "quoted" it or put it in bold print.....Cuz I know that the only way people notice it.....LoL
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Ok Im gonna break this down
C-drama, you first I bruise your nerves when I loosely curse contusive verbs// You's been merked~thrown away like a fuse that's burnt// ^^nice opener, good use of multi's, didn't hit too hard but a nice way to open. When I use the bird you [fall] like it was [deuce the third]//(First day of Autumn->23rd) The news was heard~his mom's crying when this dude's in urns// ^^not bad....decent punch This useless turd's more PLAYED OUT than the ORIGIN OF YOUR NAME// He gon switch KEN for his name when I leave his clothes like the FLUID IN YA VEIN// ^^blah, didnt like this, maybe it was cuz you repeated name twice. .......are you insane? ~ I'm the sickest of em all// And we all sick of ya mom ~ posting "IN MEMORY OF" PICTURES ON THE WALL// ^^ok, poor structure, decent bar. ....It's a sad world....but everybody's gotta go// ....and by the way....tell ya pops I said hello (haha)// ^^blah. Overall-ok verse, ok wordplay, ok punches, ok flow. Lol, pretty average verse not too good not too bad. 5/10 Capcom- C-Drama, lil dirty bitch if I.C.U. you will See Drama I'm tear your brain out ya skull & fed ex it to ya mama ^^bad opener, where's the creativity? Like a Thugged out teacher, He wanna test my gangsta So I'ma Turn my test in wit Mack 11's & serve this wanksta ^^might as well have rhymed pussy and wussy, once again not hard-hitting, no creativity. GoT Beef? And I'll shank ya, I dont give a fuck about You If I put ya Life on a scale from 1-10...Bitch u'd rank about 2. ^^wack, not hard hittinh, bad punch, blah. C_Drama? If U'd of kept ya mouth shut, I'd a left u alone Like ya girlfriend did when You bought ya Fag Boyfriend Home ^^best bar in your verse, still weak though, blah. Dawg its over, the crowd is still laughin at u cuz of my verse Just remember when you people poll I'm in the 2nd slot, Not 1st ^^um...where is the punch exactly? Overall-man what the hell was that? I though that verse was wack, honestly. Maybe it was cuz you didn't have much time to type it up. If that's so, then next time don't let anyone rush you, just take your time and use some creativity.1/10 Vote=C-drama |
im voting for cdrama.. his verse had more punchlines and better wordplay.. vote cdrama............................................ .................................................. ..............................
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Wheres the Creativity? LoL I guess no one see's tha I.C.U. Wordplay in there....if U people dont know ICU stands for Intensive Care Unit...LoL I bet a lot of people be missin that.
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C_Drama Verse Was Week And Your Structure Was Everywhere... Capcom Hit Harder He Had Play'd Lines But He Hit Harder Than Him^ Vt-Capcom Return The Favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80946 |
i'll break it down
flow- capcom punches - both wordplay - capcom personals - capcom enjoyablity - capcom vocab - c drama multies c drama overall capcom took this with a better allround verse |
Punchlines: Cap
Wordplay: cap (i understood his metas) Flow: C-Drama Metas: Cap Multis: Neither close battle but cap took it in my eyes keep elevatin |
well...Drama had a nice verse...i like the 23rd line...very creative...Cap came wit the gangsta/wanksta....wow....what were you thinkin..that alone should speak for itslef, but he had a few coo lines in there...but C Drama gets my vote, he coulda finished it off better, but he got it by a little...
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ok herez the breakdown:
drama's ending just sucked and that wanksta line capcom used was wack so here we go children flow:aint really a flow in text wordplay:drama punches:both personals:neither humor:drama... complexity:capcom creativity:drama structure:capcom multiples:capcom overall:capcom yit da dee |
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