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Tim.E. Tumurk vs COM (250+posts to vote)
iight lets do this...good luck...heres the rules
Maximum Lines:12 Minimum Lines:1 No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Dickryder Votes No Swaying Votes NO POSTING UNLESS YOUR GONNA VOTE SPIT WITHIN 1 HOUR OF CHECK-INS No Freeposting No Usising Anything That Will Make Parts Of Your Verse Stick Out (example bolding or use of ~ or -) this will be my check in.... OH AND IF YOU AINT GONNA POST THEN DONT FUCKING VOTE BECAUSE SOME FAGS WILL TRY TO SWAY VOTES FOR SOMEONE SO IF YOU AINT GONNA VOTE THEN DONT POST |
COM...check in then start keying i will wait for your check in then i will begin keying my verse....so check in soon
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CH-CH-CH-CH-CHECKIN IN
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ok rdy to spit.....good luck...
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I Told Him I Would Murk Him But He Still Wanted To Battle..Oh Well
So Ima Spit These Punches Right To Him And Make Sure I Deliver The L Well Guess Your Gonna Lose Cause Like Survivor Only The "Strongest Survive" Damn Kidd Why You Gotta Cry?, In This Battle Your The Weakest Link So I Gotta Say "GoodBye!" Hope Your Ready To Die, Damn This Verse Took A Matter Of Minutes Your Name Will Be Diplinished..But It Took You Forever To Write Something That Was Whack From Start To Finish I Crunched His Brain And Turned Him Insane I Even Twisted His Structure COM Came Out Ugly Cause His Parents Were Alien Abductors You Came To Me Crying That You Were Whack Well Heres Some Things To Do Hang Yourself Then Jump Off A Cliff Cause Ill Always Be Better Then You! COM Was Denied Entry To The LLL, Now He's Facing One Of Their Best This Kidd Failed The Test, He Made A Vital Mistake And For That Ive Sent Him To Rest |
“COM sighs at the fact Purple has started his multiple personality shit on RB after being caught on LIF.com”
How many personalities have you got??? Born Two Face, It Made Your Name A Split Decision Performing Lyrical Surgery, I’m Gonna Make A Quick Incision You need Tips In Division, Coz You Can’t Share This Win Get Washed, You Smell Like Vodka, While I’m Compared To Jin I Tear Your Skin Off Your Skeleton, I Can See You Got A Nerve You Only Come To The Site, To Look At Members Pics And Perv So Swerve When You See Me, You Herb, Don’t Come Near Me I Could Battle In A Dress, And You’d Still Fucking Fear Me Sincerely I Think Your Rhyme Flows Just Like A Slow Poem It Ain’t Time To Murk… It’s Time For Tumurk To Go Home So Pack Up Your Stuff, Don’t Return, You’ve Been Spurned I Send Tumurk Round The Bend… At Every Fuckin Turn |
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iight lets get some votes.... 250+ POSTS TO VOTES AND DONT POST UNLESS UR VOTING AND NO SWAYING VOTES.... |
uppin for votes.....cmon dont sleep on this shit..........
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well good battle...props to both sides...umm some of time's shit sounded kinda played to me.. the nursery shit was just terrible no hate man but i wasnt feelin mostly nythin u sed. com came pretty hard the vodka jin part was hard and the go home shit was hott to no dr no hate i just felt com's verse better
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Close battle, but I think that Com took this one...I'll break it down...
FLOW=BOTH PUNCHES=COM PERSONALS=COM WORDPLAY=BOTH METAS=BOTH MULTIS=NONE OVERALL=COM VOTE=COM |
^^no muiltis?
I Crunched His Brain And Turned Him Insane I Even Twisted His Structure COM Came Out Ugly Cause His Parents Were Alien Abductors ^^then wtf do u think that is? god...i swear....i hate wen newbs vote...lets get some vets over here... |
yo man dont cry that line was wack and whos a newb???????????????????????????????????????????? iight man i sed no hate fdont come at me wit some shit liek that
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Yea...I Sure Am A Newb...That Must Explain The 1187 Posts...The 41 Battles...Those Multis Sucked Anyway...
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^^dont freepost in here i aint gonna bitch about it...2-0 so far...uppin
VOTES MUST BE BROKEN DOWN |
Ha tim ya broke ya own rule...aint supposed to make ya shit stand out..."" is the same as ~, - or anythin else dogg...
COM took this shit wit punches..metas...flow and structure...and pretty much everythin else was even...so vote = COM 250 POST TO VOTE. . .READ! THIS VOTE DOESNT COUNT |
ok lets see
Tim-ok verse, I've seen you battle before, didn't like this too much, punches didn't really hit hard, multi's were there but seemed forced. Com-also not a great verse, but better structure, harder punches, flowed smoothly. Punches-com Flow-com Wordplay-tim Multi's-tim Creativity-com Vote=Com no hate |
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iight..no hate too any of y'all...this is juss how i saw it...
FLOW = COM PUNCHES=COM PERSONALS=COM WORDPLAY= TIM METAS= COM MULTIS= COM (Tim...U Had A Lot But They Weren't Needed) OVERALL=COM TIM..u shoulda attacked COM more in this battle...alotta filler lines...alotta self-hype shit...nd wen u did thro a "punch" it din't hit hard...COM's shit wuz ok...alot of that gory shit..cut down on that..focuse more on ur opponent..pretty good battle.. VOTE - COM VOTE=COM |
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overall i have to say dis verse was weak, nothin stood out flow fell off for about 2 lines, then da forced wordplay n weak personals so ratin: 4/10 Quote:
i have to say dis had a good flow but dats not what da breakdown is about so here: it had more punches dan Tim.E. Tumurk, more humor n i think it stood out more but with limited wordplay ratin:6/10 so my vote is to>COM |
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