WhiteNightMare
 

10 lines/5 bars
no feeding
no biting
no hate
no crew
no d.r.
both spit within 20 mins

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R.B., send me someone with double his skill who's double as ill/
Someone who can fulfill the words they spill who's realer than a $3 bill//
This bitch just checked in to the merk hotel so bid him farewell/
His verse coulda been wrote by a demon and still wouldn't be hot as hell//
I'm equivalent to a radar gun but my lyrical speed can't be clocked/
You can't enter this staged because I have this level locked//
His style's wack, like an egg it'll crack, his rhyme's couldn't hold up if pinned with a tack/
Don't ever forget who brought this attack who snatched you from the front and put you in back//
Your flow is simplistic but mine is mystic and my mind is sadistic/
Don't fuck with someone who idealistic that's how you become just another statistic//

this kid thinks hes exelent? hes barly "mediocer"punk ass bitch wouldnt be an ace is he was playin "poker"/
sow his mouth closed so hes unable to "spit"had a bucket a tabasco sauce then X-lax just to say he droped hot "shit"/
why u even start shit,watch me bruise this dick head like a rock hard clit,when u hear this gun blast u know where u "headed" mutha fucka the only way u elevatin is if u gettin lifted by a "paramedic"/
now watch me take all the bitches and string em up like "lanters"this little bitch holds more nuts then a bucket of "planters"/(planters are a brand of peanut)

yeah i know pretty weak but w/e.....................

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alright, since this a battle between pros, ima lay off da "played out line" shit, cuz i guess i fail to realize that new ppl will use alot of stuff ppl already heard before


neways

x-sulent had the multis going but wasnt focusing on his punches

White nightmare was hitting harder wit his punches......

no hating on dis vote
Vote = Whitenightmare..

Aight...that's 1-0 for WhiteNightMare
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some of x's lines were played ie. $3 bill, tack back shit like that
x's best lines:This bitch just checked in to the merk hotel so bid him farewell/
His verse coulda been wrote by a demon and still wouldn't be hot as hell
Your flow is simplistic but mine is mystic and my mind is sadistic/
Don't fuck with someone who idealistic that's how you become just another statistic//

white you need to fix ur structure and shorten your lines
whites best: why u even start shit,watch me bruise this dick head like a rock hard clit,when u hear this gun blast u know where u "headed" mutha fucka the only way u elevatin is if u gettin lifted by a "paramedic"/
now watch me take all the bitches and string em up like "lanters"this little bitch holds more nuts then a bucket of "planters"/ <<hit real hard towards the end
vote=white nightmare for an overall better verse and harder hitting punches, keep elevating...good battle

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STOP SLEEPIN ON THIS Y'ALL!
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Yo Aiight this was aiight I really liked both they made me laugh

But My vote has to to whitenightmare cuz his last line ko'd everythang

Vote = Nightmare

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B-B-B-B-B-Break down

Multis=Niether
Structure=Tie
Flow=Whitenightmare
Punches=Whitenightmare
Vocab=X-Sulent
Personals=Whitenightmare

Overall=Whitenightmare

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white took this he came way harder than x his punchs hit well he had wordplay he had some multi's all da good shit the other kid had blah nuff said vote white and hit this shit up wit an honest vote aight holla


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