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Funda-mentalz 09-21-03 09:02 PM

Fundz V$ White-Virus
 
10 lines
usual rules
blind spits due in 30 mins
no quoted votes

Funda-mentalz 09-21-03 09:17 PM

My style is like highway signs, you need to 'slow down to read it'
Then you get 'hit from behind' before I show you the 'exit' (off ramp lol)
So Virus, you bettah bring 'trojans' cause you gettin fucked-now
Ill fold your fuckin face in half just to unite your eyebrows
I'll bust through ya screen, leave shards of glass in ya mouth
Look, now this kid can finally 'spit sharp'-disses brought 'up' from the south!
Like my sig says, i fuckin own you... like hookers for 30 minutes
You could drown me with poor flows, but my boat...you still wouldnt sink-it
Ill finish this now, like bill clintons chances of becoming president
Ill leave this jew 'here'....so he can finally be 'present'

White-Virus 09-21-03 09:21 PM

You aint "chingy" but, acceptin this, you know ya "gettin it"//
I'm "around tha globe" tear out ya "roots" so you spittin shit//
From Toronto?, call me a assassin, cuz down goes a Raptor//
Always Lyrically charged when you need an adaptor//
Well adapt to this, 12-7, there aint no use to spit//
Neither use of fist, i'll just take ya out wit my lyrical whip//
i'll steal ya "Fundz" and leave ya with just ya "mentals"//
Ya "heads" not "smart" betta hope you can get some rentals//
This cat gonna need some "ruby red slippers", betta call "Oz tha "Wizard"//
Or maybe you need a "Jordan", or poisionous invisible lizard//


aight lmao..waitin on you to spit

Funda-mentalz 09-21-03 09:27 PM

nice verse....upping this dont sleep....explain your votes and drop a link well get back at yah..............................................

Funda-mentalz 09-21-03 10:37 PM

2nd uppin..........dont sleep bitches........................................... ...........................

Funda-mentalz 09-21-03 10:56 PM

3rd up......FUCKIN VOTE!!.................................................. ..................

Genesis_two 09-21-03 11:57 PM

iight let me break this down because this was a tight battle
personals:Funda
Punches:Funda tha opener was sick
flow:white virus
Enjoyability:funda
Multis:not many cant say
Overall:fundamentals
good battle to both of you nice verse white virus and funda no hate no dick ridin good battle hit it up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80991

Funda-mentalz 09-22-03 03:58 PM

forth uppin ^^poll vote please............................................ .............................

C_Drama 09-22-03 04:03 PM

a decent battle

here's a break down

Flow = Both
Punches = Fund
Multis = None
Metas = Fund
Wordplay = White Virus
Creativity = White Virus

hmmm pretty close there, let's get more detailed to see the winner

Opener = Fund
Finisher = None
Enjoyability = Fund

close battle tho

nice shit from both

Vote = Fund

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81079

Funda-mentalz 09-22-03 04:48 PM

upping again........1 fucking vote.....horseshit.....dont sleep....drop a link.............................................. ..........................

Aisle Phive 09-22-03 04:54 PM

vote- funds



very close battle actually, but a few of fundz's were okay. but white virus came very played. especially playing off fundz's alias, that is played. the quotations were very unnesecary as well.

close but fundz takes this one.

hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80962

Headphonez 09-22-03 05:05 PM

i can't vote..........sorry

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brainsurgeon 09-22-03 05:39 PM

i was feeling white-virus more for originality and harder diss.... ending made me laugh....

punches: tie
personals: white-virus
multi's: virus
rhyme sheme: white virus
flow: virus
metas: virus
wordplay: fund... but a number were played... minus first bar
originality: virus
creativity: virus

vote: virus

Rappad 09-22-03 06:34 PM

Vote=Funda

Ill fold your fuckin face in half just to unite your eyebrows

^^lol.

I think funda won this by a long shot. No offense white, butyour verse didn't really have any punches, especially the finisher, I thought that was wack, no offense.

Both of you gotta work on your flow though, it was very choppy here.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80649

^^hit this

Capcom 09-22-03 11:05 PM

Vote = Fund

It was a tie up until like half way when WV just started spittin random wack shit....That closer stunk, but the rest of his (WV) was pretty good....Fundamental, thats exactly what u beat him wit Battle rap fundamentals, just kept the punches comin & kept ya flow consistent...

Hit up my battle against Mentally Kursed would ya'll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81145

DiverseSyndicate 09-22-03 11:18 PM

this was a tight battle,both verse had good vocab,good punches,i was feelin white-viruss punches more,i felt he came harder wit his verse,all in all this was a good battle.my favorite line---

Quote:
This cat gonna need some "ruby red slippers", betta call "Oz tha "Wizard"//
Or maybe you need a "Jordan", or poisionous invisible lizard//

nice battle my vote---white-virus
could yall hit my battles up.thnx.~1~ http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80560

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81010

Tonya~Montana 09-22-03 11:55 PM

FUNDA came harder on the punches...had some ill creative disses...felt the wordplay..

white virus had decent set up for his punches but they just did'nt connect well..especially towards the end...think he was just sayin shit to rhyme... he had a good diss on funda's name but thats just bout it!

vote funda!


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