Tonya~Montana vs Mentally Kursed
 

5 bars
you spit first
i set up
no c h dr votes

same time maan same time!!! we drop together.......:guy: ...............................................

Hey Ya!
 

.....Unlike SANTANA, Mentally Kursed DIPin out-on-his
SET//
.....he STUTTERS-on-the-Mic, his VOICE SKIPPIN Bout-in-his-
NECK//

when it comes to Wackness, my Skills can't save you Boy//
you tried PEDDLIN Dope but get THROWED-off-da-BLOCK
like a PAPERBOY//

Word to De-Ja-Vu you get Capped// cause I'll BITCHSLAP
you to FRONTLINES back to BITCHSLAPPED{get it}//ha ha

...yea you MENTALLY Challenge, I said Fuck you now you
SHOWIN-ME-LOVE//
He says he SMOKE to tha last ROACH, Naw he's just BLOWIN-
A-BUG// {get it}:eek:

yea it's ashame bout your skills, now you wishin you had'nt been Born//
cause Battlin me is as Dumb as playin LEAP FROG with
a Unicorn//{OUCH!!}

ain t this a bitch!!
 

mentally kursed is a prime example why you should'nt spit first!!! this nucca done logged off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mad: :p

wordness kurse that damn slut

i kno wha u mean

checkin in spittin in a lil bit

*may take awhile gotta spit 10 bars*

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^^I dont think he's gonna no show
but, if he does show, he's got hell of a verse to compete with.

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where tha hell is mentally kursed!?? dam kid don't bust ya brains!!! and don't go bitin shit esle where!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight check it

Ill leave you "dead in your tracks" like gun down professional runners//
You "shoot to cock" then swallow like pistols used by prostitute gunners//

Your tongue stick to dicks more than toilet paper does to assholes //
Punchin your voice controls, gettin inside your head like exorcist does souls//

Im endin your life short like disconnected babies on life support//
Cave your chest then make your lungs distort, send your rhymes "out country" like bein deport//

Punches quick to the point like "agility" doctors wit scalpels stabbin patients//
Sendin bullets through your stomach leavin you in the I.C.U. awaitin organ donations//

Its a fact, your chest is like a proboard counter, "open to hits"//
Leavin your head split, your heart is failin to work like bein on strike, or it jus quit//

:( my own crew member voted on a battle wtf

lol anyway uppin

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dam mentally in ya rules you shoulda stated no prewrittens...but then you woulda been talkin bout yourself!!!!haha well anywayz

uppin for some honest votes!!!!man o man!!!

Vote goes to Tonya

Mentally used the word "like" to much which made it too monotonous

and his punches didnt hit hard enuff

Tonya's verse was okay but the "bitchslap" line basically ended it

Vote = Tonya
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81079

i liked this battle,both verses had good punches,good multis,good vocab,good wordplay,but honestly i was feelin tonyas verse more,her punches were harder,her rhyme scheme was tighter, and all in all she won this battle.clean verse from both of ya.~1~

my vote-tonya~montana

if youd check my battles out id appreciate it fa real.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80560

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81010

The LEAP FROG line and the SANTANA line killed it.
Good shit ma.Tonya even had it in multis , but
Mentally's punches were'nt hitting hard at all.No
hate though.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Ill leave you "dead in your tracks" like gun down professional runners//
You "shoot to cock" then swallow like pistols used by prostitute gunners//

i THOUGHT THAT KILLED IT BUT.... PEOPLE ARE VOTING.... TONYA.... I HAVE A HATE FOR PLAYED PUNCHLINES SO WHEN i see unicorn and frogs or leprechaun.... so sorry i'm voting mentally i just felt that first line hit pretty damn hard

mentally kursed took this, all of montanas lines were more played than his sister,MK had better flow, vocab AND punches making him the easy winner

it's obvious you don't know what tha fuk you talkin bout!! my lines are not played.......maybe one but my shit was creative off tha top playa!! hollaaa!!!!!!

seriously i thought tonya took dis shit to kursed i no use better than that cuzz but i thought it was even but tonya just came a little bit harder wit da punchs dats bout it but i cant vote it would be a crew vote and i aint haten kursed to tellin it like it is aight nigga holla at ya boy and peeps hit this shit up honestly aight niggas here is da link


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81085

Ok breakdown-

Mentally-
Ill leave you "dead in your tracks" like gun down professional runners//
You "shoot to cock" then swallow like pistols used by prostitute gunners

^^ok opener...not bad...


Your tongue stick to dicks more than toilet paper does to assholes //
Punchin your voice controls, gettin inside your head like exorcist does souls//

^^good multi's-punch didn't hit too hard though.

Im endin your life short like disconnected babies on life support//
Cave your chest then make your lungs distort, send your rhymes "out country" like bein deport//

blah...forced multi's man....

Punches quick to the point like "agility" doctors wit scalpels stabbin patients//
Sendin bullets through your stomach leavin you in the I.C.U. awaitin organ donations//

^^setup bad, nice punch, good multi's...

Its a fact, your chest is like a proboard counter, "open to hits"//
Leavin your head split, your heart is failin to work like bein on strike, or it jus quit//

^^lol nice finisher.

Overall-pretty good verse, som forced multi's here and there....but pretty decent for the most part I suppose......8/10

Tonya-

.....Unlike SANTANA, Mentally Kursed DIPin out-on-his
SET//
.....he STUTTERS-on-the-Mic, his VOICE SKIPPIN Bout-in-his-
NECK//

^DAMN!!!!Nice opener...

when it comes to Wackness, my Skills can't save you Boy//
you tried PEDDLIN Dope but get THROWED-off-da-BLOCK
like a PAPERBOY//

^^Shit, nice punch, setup was good too.....

Word to De-Ja-Vu you get Capped// cause I'll BITCHSLAP
you to FRONTLINES back to BITCHSLAPPED{get it}//ha ha

^^OMG..........That was fuckin nice,


yea you MENTALLY Challenge, I said Fuck you now you
SHOWIN-ME-LOVE//
He says he SMOKE to tha last ROACH, Naw he's just BLOWIN-
A-BUG//

^^fireworks continue....unbelievable....

yea it's ashame bout your skills, now you wishin you had'nt been Born//
cause Battlin me is as Dumb as playin LEAP FROG with
a Unicorn

^^Wow....what a finisher..

Overall-Haven't seen a better verse in a long long time.....wow......10/10

Sorry mentally, she handed it to ya here.

VOte=tonya

My vote goes to Mentally, better punches and his verse was easier to get, more simple to read etc

Vote=Mentally Kursed

No beef though Tonya cos You are sick too...................................

the ultimate ender......doin a leap frog ova a unicorn....
^^^
characterises tonya's whole verse-full of creativity.....
and hard knockin punches......

mentally dropped the same old butstin cap's in ya shit-
all that was missin was the word bling bling....
^^^
majorly played-be more creative......
vote- tonya montana

thanks for showin luv and votin yall......preciate all the good explanations....................................ho lla on last couple votes!!

ayo tonya sence i dropped my opinion on this battle would ya please go vote on mine here is da link so im uppin this fo tonya


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81085

yo i think tonya was harder she came with them strong punches and killed his ass mental verse was aite but not overall
Vote=Tonya