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Spiro 09-23-03 01:39 AM

Spiro VS Lyrikally-Insane
 
iight lets do this man
normal rules, 10-20 lines
no bullshit, or w/e
lets battle

Lyrikally-Insane 09-23-03 01:44 AM

checkl in aite sounds good we both drop ind anext 25 minutes
check innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

so u droppin rite im almost done ..kid
pc

Spiro 09-23-03 01:45 AM

iight lets battle man,

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Spiro 09-23-03 01:51 AM

wont let me edit, so i gotta double post, =/

but you spit first Lyrikally-Insane

im checked in, gogogogogoogo

Lyrikally-Insane 09-23-03 01:59 AM

naw i dont spit first im almost done u better post ya shit homie..im about odne..i dont liek no shows an i no ull no show when i drop cuz im that ill..so drop///

Spiro 09-23-03 02:00 AM

dude i set this shit up, and i say your spit first, now spit first, unless your forfeiting?? is that it??

Spiro 09-23-03 02:16 AM

gonna have to wait till tommorow bro, i been waitin forever now, and i got school tommorow, so ill post my shit tommorow

Lyrikally-Insane 09-23-03 01:43 PM

uhh your gay u never said in ya rules who spits first/....homie...second naw i dont forfeit im at school...so u wanna battle or wut....mnan ...damn lets just do this already it dat hard just type a verse an submit reply

Spiro 09-23-03 05:48 PM

lyrikally-insane, when im done you'll walk with a cane//
your not even lyrikally fit, you cant stand up to this shit//
your scared to go first, cause you rap as bad as fred durst//
everything you say ends wit 3 periods, cause you suck, period.//
too poor to buy your own home computer, i bet ya mom goes to work on her own person scooter//
you say how hard is to write ya verse, if its not hard why didnt you go first?//
not the average newb, is it cuz your the one who rubs in the lube?//
from your competitors you take it in the butt, you take dicks so long they swishing up you gut//
you suck man, cant you take a hint?//
maybe you can start a group wit 50 cent//
you claim to sell hoes, and say your pimp//
now show me what ya got, you motha fuckin gimp//
oh wait, gotta get to school, so you can go from there and look like a fool//
so ill be waiting for your rhyme, maybe you'll go by the rules next time//

Spiro 09-24-03 06:58 PM

bump, dude your checked in to like 10 battles, and you still havent even reply'd here man, cmon, you better hope a mod doesnt notice how many battles your checked into

Lyrikally-Insane 09-24-03 10:50 PM

took me 5 seconds to write

u ucdnt beat me if u put ya name on my punhces//
this kid cant even stand up rite so he needs to use crutches//
i no from previous battles i pak heat u pak bagged lunches/
i got a huch this kid only raps nice when christmas is around//
u bouta get dropped by a mc wit a underground sound//
wut bitch it smells like fish u need shut it ..those pussy lips//
stop tryna spit, witout a mik u aint ill kid u just a ousie bitch//
how u gunna say u an established emcee when im da one seelin u mikes//
u cudnt come phat if ya mom gave u half of her fat an cell u lite//
damn ya aint worth my time ya raps are jsut silly///
u cudnt cum phat if u ejaculated to free willyyyy//lmao
an im done

TBirdRaw 09-24-03 11:08 PM

yeah bitch that shit look like it took u five secs to write it u herbish, alliterate fuck, u checked into my battle now post u dumb fuck, oh i think spiro won it with better punches and was more furious in his too, sorry but im not aloud to vote anytime soon but just wanted to speack my feelings peace spiro

Spiro 09-24-03 11:20 PM

thx tbird, damn no wonder it took you 5 seconds, i can barely read it, man learn to spell for one, and like 4-5 of your lines didnt rhyme at all...

Spiro 09-25-03 12:10 AM

bump - - can we please get some votes??? cmon guys wont take ya long, just vote please. thanx



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Lyrikaly~Straped 09-25-03 12:20 AM

^^ u took it in all da categories..really did think the otehr kid came outin 5 second for that time limit it was clean but spyro beat u quick stlye..pc
hit my shit up CP

Spiro 09-25-03 12:33 AM

now if i could only get some people with 100 or more posts to actually vote on us for the poll, they should lower the post limit man =/ hard to get votes

SummonedTitan 09-25-03 12:40 AM

in all honesty

punches - (ATLEAST ATTEMPTED) Lyrikally
multis - Spiro
Flow - Spiro
Metas - Lyri
Rhymescheme - Lyri
similies - Lyri
Creativity - Spiro
Topic - Lyri

Spiro man, you lacked everything in the battle man, you didn't step hard enough and actually attack your oppenet... your punches didn't land cuz they weren't thrown man, work on ya similies and ya rhymescheme to hook up the flow... work on it dawg

Lyrikally - Work on your punches cuz they were weak and wack as hell... but they were still there... your flow was major off, but your rhyme schem bounced, work on it.

vote - lyrikally

Lyrikally Is Banned... Spiro Wins By Dq
-Axe


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