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BiZzUrK 09-23-03 02:47 PM

CRYP'][' vs. Bizzurk
 
10 Lines
Normal Voting Procedures
He's spitt'n first

CRYP'][' 09-23-03 07:37 PM

Checkin in................................................ .............................................I"ll spit later tonite peace

CRYP'][' 09-23-03 09:21 PM

Yo B i aint in the mood toit tonite im fuckin real tired dog, tomorrow for sure so while u waitin please hit this up


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80905

BiZzUrK 09-23-03 09:23 PM

^lmao
when you make a callout say'n you'd spit first 7 hours ago
how long does it take to do 10 lines?
just drop a keystyle and Ill do the same right afterwards

CRYP'][' 09-23-03 10:31 PM

Fuck 10 lines Ill spit otmorrow



Who do u think ur battlin........................................... ..................?

Best a luck to u...........hah

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 07:28 PM

My compexity will split ur mind, spillin blood like a novel by Stephen king........When you 'Drop' ya verse it'll hit Rock Bottom like Birds wit 'Broken Wings'/
Call me death star.. cuz I'm vaporizin ya ghetto.......Throw ya mouth off a cliff.. an make this toy yoda echo"/
Piss me off n' I'll snap worse than Joe pesci bein called a Shoe Shiner........Ill put three holes in this bitch bizzurk like 3 ringed back 2 school Binders/
I'll spit shit right in ya eyes landin 'More Shots' than 'Heroin Junkies'.........Wit the odds against you if u were 'Irish', You still couldnt 'Get Lucky'/
R skills arn't levelled, Im on the 'Next Stage' like 'Rain to Hail'.......Implailin u wit blasts spinin you fast, quicker than Sonics Sydkicks Tail/ (tales, tail spins fast)
Fuckin dummy exceptin ta me I dont think u know wut
It-Meant........I always give it 100, ur a 'slacker' thats why ur name Was 2-Percent/ (old name)
Ur nervous ready to studder, and udder like GIrls bein Shnooked.....U aint 'Hot' if u were a wife in World War 2, U still wouldnt be able to 'Cook'/
Ur Skills are like 50% average IQs ya capabilies Is-Low......... Just No Show u little Hoe Cuz like the Movie ur Lines-Blow/

Bitch you "Cant Step to this" Im a House wit out Its "Stairs".......BIzzurks Battle Threads are like "History Class", "Slepped on cuz No1 Cares"/


There is Spit dawg
Yo hit up my other battle wit apprentice aight man

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 08:54 PM

^Each one of your lines was practically a bar and it took you forever to spit, but heres my keystyle:


"runn'n miles round ya" like tracks, I'm "the bomb" like Iraq
I'll Beat dis wack cat's ass with hands tied behind my back

5-2, well I've got "ESP", I can see your losses growing
"don't give a fuck?" Then why did you bother showing?

Ya flo mo' "slower" than my grandma riding a tortoise
If your so dope, whyd it take you 29 hours to spit?

I Rhyme fantastic ya gett'n "crunched" like dat captain guy
Im Battlin MC elastic, neva seen so many stretched lines

you merk me? ya must of thought I was sum 1 else
now Crypt's an egotist, all "wrapped up in himself"

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 09:02 PM

U had 2 ill fuckin personals
Nice Shit

Uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 09:18 PM

^upp'n
fo'
votes

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 09:25 PM

thanks fo' da compliments crypt
you had sum decent lines, but
you gotta change ya style though
stretched lines throws off ya flo

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 09:29 PM

I know it was stretched i dont usually do that, fucked up

START VOTING

Killers

I Rhyme fantastic ya gett'n "crunched" like dat captain guy
Im Battlin MC elastic, neva seen so many stretched lines

5-2, well I've got "ESP", I can see your losses growing
"don't give a fuck?" Then why did you bother showing?

C_Drama 09-24-03 09:38 PM

Look man, I hope either of you dont think of this as a hate vote

honestly, BOTH YA'll CAME NICE

so lemme break down what i think

DA DOWNFALLS:
Cryp, ya bars were way too lengthy, ur "one" bar is da size of 2 bars

DA UPS
Cryp's punches were very creative to speak, no doubt, nice shit

Bizz shit was basic ya ya but it was NICE especially with the fact that he countered him well (with spitting the other day and lengthy bars)

both did a good job

idk i find it hard to vote

cryp's punches were nice, both were

so lemem break dis down

Flow = Bizz
Punches = Cryp (Bizz wasnt consistent)
Multis = None (Cryp only had a few, not enuff to state)
Metas = Cryp
Wordplay = Cryp
Creativity = Cryp

Even if Cryp took 29 hours to spit (that line was funny tho)
not every line from Bizz was hot, he wasnt consistent

"runn'n miles round ya" like tracks, I'm "the bomb" like Iraq
I'll Beat dis wack cat's ass with hands tied behind my back
(first line was soft, 2nd line was decent)

Ya flo mo' "slower" than my grandma riding a tortoise
(okay line)

Vote = Cryp

Fo da Creative lines and consistency

hit this battle up with an HONEST VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 09:49 PM

yea, normally when one cat spits 18 and the other spits 10 he has the advantage for better punches, wordplay and creativity

8-off 09-24-03 10:13 PM

ok, lemme break this down:

crypt, i thought this would have been easier to judge on the count of the size difference beetween your verses

When you 'Drop' ya verse it'll hit Rock Bottom like Birds wit 'Broken Wings'/

Call me death star.. cuz I'm vaporizin ya ghetto.......Throw ya mouth off a cliff.. an make this toy yoda echo"/

Bitch you "Cant Step to this" Im a House wit out Its "Stairs".......BIzzurks Battle Threads are like "History Class", "Slepped on cuz No1 Cares"/


^the only lines worth quoting from your verse, the rest were all bullshit fillers and played out lines and punches

bizzurk, i thought u were gonna also get destroyed because of size/structure, but you had your lines in there also
5-2, well I've got "ESP", I can see your losses growing
"don't give a fuck?" Then why did you bother showing?

you merk me? ya must of thought I was sum 1 else
now Crypt's an egotist, all "wrapped up in himself"

I Rhyme fantastic ya gett'n "crunched" like dat captain guy
Im Battlin MC elastic, neva seen so many stretched lines

^those were your only quote worthy ryhmes, the rest were kinda played concept like the tied behind the back thingy lol good shit though

but im gonna go wit bizzurk, his verse was all around better the way it flowed, and that is because cryps structure was all tore up and separated, maybe if your bars wasnt so strected, the flow would be on point

peace

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 10:20 PM

Battles arent all about flow

dummy............................................. .................................................. ......

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 10:22 PM

^and they aren't all about doing twice as much material as your supposed to either, fo' real dawg ure lucky you werent DQ'd

C_Drama 09-24-03 10:39 PM

yo, can u guys really hit dis up man?

I didnt sleep on dis battle, so dont ignore mine dukes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 11:00 PM

I made the call out and i didnt say 10 lines kid


PEACE............................................. .................................................. .............................................

C_Drama 09-24-03 11:07 PM

(in response to what Cryp said to my battle thread)

I already voted on dis battle, check page 1


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BiZzUrK 09-24-03 11:09 PM

Crypt you had 29 hours to disagree with the 10 lines that were set for the rules at the top of the thread
C Drama, pm's exist for a reason, stop freeposting here

Capcom 09-24-03 11:11 PM

Good battle here....Crypt You Got some nice punches but u need to fix ya structure & shorten them Lines.....One of your lines equals about 2 of anyone elses LoL....Anyway Breakdown

Punches: Bizz
personals: Crypt
Multi's: Bizz
Wordplay: Tie
Meta's: Tie
Flow; Biz

Vote = Biz

Good shit here from the both of u....Hit up my battle against ArtiQlit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81561

And Bizz if u can vote in Elite Hit up the battle in my sigg
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CRYP'][' 09-24-03 11:21 PM

Yo B when u see this please hit this up


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79811

its like a month old i just found out it was still runnin, thanks

Derive 09-24-03 11:21 PM

iight ima give this one to bizzurk

he had a better structure better punches and personals....and he had the overall better verse....crypt your verse wasnt bad but it was mad stretched...

vote-bizzurk

BiZzUrK 09-24-03 11:45 PM

lets get sum more votes in this!

CRYP'][' 09-24-03 11:47 PM

WTF B vote on my link above man while were waitin

................................................ca nt u do that favour

Artikqlit 09-25-03 12:19 AM

uppin for ya'll

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~JacK ThA RippA~ 09-25-03 01:00 PM

dope battle
would of been much doper is crypt didn't stretch his lines
punches=B
flo=B
wordplay=crypt
personals=B
vote=B

EMCEE Cannibal 09-25-03 01:17 PM

B

cryp was stretched


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