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Artik-Q~Lit vs. Steelfist (straight up illness!)
holla at ya boy.. no crew votes no dickriddign votes.. ten barz.. and you spit first
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NOT TEN BARS...ND I'M NOT SPITTIN 1ST..
WE BOTH SPIT WITHIN 30 MINUTES!!.. 15 LINES AT MOST!!!!!!! |
aiight whatever.. start typign now though............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........
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yea i am...i already started...
make sure ur spit is in by 4:30 est time... nd i'm not kiddin...if u spit more than 10 Lines imma have u DQed... make tha deadline..PEACE..i'll be sure to.. |
lo.. man mothfucka you dun.. i made the call out post therefore i make the rules.. and i said 10 barz or more.. take it or leave it dunn
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prolly prewrite some shit...
well it's 15 Lines at most... if not i'm not battlin u.. i'm almost done wit my verse... cot damn... |
LIKE I SAID MOTHAFUCA I MADE THE CALL OUT POST.. THEREFORS I MAKE THE RULES AND I SAID TEN BARZ OR MORE.. NOW TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT WHICH ONE WILL IT BE?
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fine i'll take it...
20 lines man.. i have 8 lines already.. i'm make anotha 12 more... post by 4:30.. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: i will too.. no more freepostin |
MY CLIPS SPARKIN.. YOU NEED TO QUIT YOUR SHIT- TALKIN
HAVE YOU JUMPED LIKE A "CRIP" IN A BLOOD NEIGHBORHOOD, CRIP- WALKIN FUCK YOUR PHYSICAL HEALTH, MY LRYICAL WEALTH IS RICH.. YOU SPIT BUM RAPS YOUR VERBAL FITNESS IS LIKE THE ENDURANCE OF FAT BITCHES WHO RUN LAPS SONS WACK- EVEN RETARDS CALL HIM A DUMBASS all you ever receive is BOOS the only favorable response you've gotten is when my gun CLAPS ****************RUN THAT************ LISTEN SON.. MAD NIGGAS REPLIED TO YOU ON BITCH SLAPPED BUT YOU AINT RESPOND CUZ YOU AITN WANNA GET MERKED YOU'VE BEEN DOIN THE MONICA LEWISKY SO MUCH THAT YOUR NECK - HURT YOUR TEXT'S WORTH THE PICS OF FAT BITCHES ON EBAY WITH WET SHIRTS GET YOUR FACE SMASHED LIKE SUICIDE DIVERS JUMPIN OF CLIFFS CHEST FISRT THE ONLY THING YOU SICK FROM IS AND OVERDOSE OF WACK PILLS IF THEY HAD COMMERCIALS OF "DONT DO DRUGS" YOU'D BE THE POSTERBOY FOR CRACK KILLS |
LOL. I KNEW IT.. YOUD PULL THIS SHIT.. SON ITS PASSED 4:30.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........
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wtf tha fuck..i thot u sed 20 lines..
i have 20 now..fuck it i'll match u.. imma post it now... :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::: |
Yo Dogg what about our Battle?
Are You Gonna Post? ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****** |
MY VERSE (HE ASKED FOR IT)
NOTE...CAPITALS JUSS MEAN I'M SAYIN THAT MORE WERD WIT MORE EMPHASIS ill make sure your ass payz... like a thong price/ Steel is the only rapper dumb enough to spell the same word wrong twice/* this bitch is a NO-NAMER... so jus keep YA NAME HIDDEN/ This battle is gonna be one-sided, like sum LESBIAN WOMEN/ i intimadate steel till he shivers in fear,and hes definitely head strong/ and are u gonna beat ARTIK??? its the question of ur life and your DEAD WRONG/ I'm Puttin steel outta his misery, and he'll surely thank-me/ HE couldn't "rhyme 4 shit" if he GHOSTWROTE for Mr. Hanky/ I Don't Need lyrics to win, So Yo, I'LL make this more fair/ Beat CHA mathematically, Cuz A=MC SQUARED/ (A = Me) Slice u with machetes from neck to na-val…its about to get-fatal/ You’ll think its CANE hating on his brother the way I DISS-ABLE/(disable) Give the voters Novacane they’d still be Feelin-me…quit stealin-G/ I’ll make ya change names like KERR…cuz ya bit yours from a real-MC/ you claim to be at your best now... and I ain't keen to be hatin/ but like ya mom on an escalator... i don't see this MC elevatin/ *LoL HE CAN'T SPELL..plus he can't even pronounce my name... iight... |
LOL.. AIIGHT GOOD DROP.. NOW TO THE VOTERES.. READ BOTH VERSES TWICE BEFORE YOU VOTE.............................................. .................................................. ........
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Man That's Bullshit...
Quit bein a Lil Bitch and Drop Nigga... ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****** |
damn.. very good battle by both.. im a vote for steelfist on this one.. nigga just has ill shit.. nice wordplay and all vote steelfist
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This was a dope battle, better than waht I expected..Breakdown
Punches: Art (that Mr Hanky line killed it) Personals: Art Multi's: Steel Wordplay: Art Metas: Tie Vote = Art Good battle from both but in the end Art just edged u out stEEL Hit my battle up against Brain Surgeon http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81236 |
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AIIGHT MAKE SURE TO READ BOTH VERSES TWICE THOUGH............................................ .................................................. ................
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iight yo art def took this shit...steel had sum nice worplday...but all them caps killed it...plust those lines didnt hit as hard as arts...also art had much betta flow so overall he took the win
Vote = Artik |
DANG NOW THIS IS WHY MOTHAFUCKAS POST THEIR SHIT LAST.............................................. .................................................. .............
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artik=punches,flow,jus harder all round.................i thought steelfists verse was aight but it jus wasn't hard enuf.........
overalll vote=artik |
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Yo Mann This battle was aiight I really wasn't Feelin Steel's that much...But it was aiight
My Vote would have to go to Artik all around better Vote = Artik Yo man are you gonna duck tha damn battle nigga if so man You a bitch |
MAN FUCK THIS NIGGAS.. QUIT FREEPOSTING IN MY SHIT.. AND NAH YOUR WACK ASS VOTE DOESNT COUNT ITS OBVIOUS THAT YOU AINT EVEN READ THE SHITS.. YOU JUST VOTED FOR THE OTHER DUDE CUZ I WOULDNT REPLY TO YOUR WACKNESS
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Man whatever nigga I read the Battle 3 times and I just had to go wit Artik and If I would have voted for you yo ass wouldn't have said nothing
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ITS COOL YOU FAGGOT.. I ALREADY REPORTED YOU IN INVESTIGATIVE REPORTS.. YOU SOULD BE BANNED.. YOU FUCKIN HERB
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lol..u bitch to much steel..fa real..
stop postin here BE BRAVE.. uppin for last vote... :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::: |
steelfist.......shut up. you lost. next time you know to either go first or take more time on a verse.......
now for a breakdown....... steel, your verse wasnt all that bad, flow was pretty good. But what you lacked was some good quality punches. You had em in there, no doubt, its just that they werent all that good. Nothing original or clever or anything, just plain punches. Art, your verse was nice. Flow wasnt as good as steels, but ur punches...yeah. They were good, and thats what won u this battle. Punches will battles, people. Thats the bottom line. vote= art. peace................. |
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