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No Sleep=Lyrical Cyanide vs kaos theory
Aight listen biatch…follow these and its all good, defers all wak rappers away from our battle and brings the true lyricists!
Requirements: --------------------------- 10 Lines Maximum!!! Deadline is within 30 mins after you or I drop. If you don't drop or show within those 30 mins it'll be considered a win…NO EXTENSIONS! Rules: --------------------------- No Bitin No Feedin No Editing No Bitching No Building No Recycling No Countering No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Freeposting No Vote Swaying People Who Cant Vote: ------------------------------ Deaths pistol where Eva he is…… Capcom coz i dissed him......jus dont trust him Other: --------------------------- 5 Consecutive Votes Is A KO 5 Total Vote Is A Defeat OH YEAH, TAKE IT EASY WITH STRETCHIN YOUR LINES…MAKES THE BATTLE SHIT IF LINES ARE TOO LONG…AROUND UP TO 15 WORDS PER LINE…GOOD LUCK SON! IF YOU ACCEPT THEN I’LL SET IT UP JUS ANSWER WITH ACCEPT AN D CHECK IN THE THREAD IN FRONTLINES |
accept!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
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'lyrical cyanide'.. ur "skill levels" been 'vertically denied'
here i go i wanted a "challenge".. bitch ur tha 'wrong type', afta this battles done.. ur face will look like a 'bomb site', ur 'moms a dyke'..fuck "virginity".. ur bout lose "lyrically" like on 'prom night'// shuve 'toxin down ya lungs'.. fighting backs like 'boxing wit no arms', put "explosives" in ur "thoat".. till u 'caughing up bombs'// "stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win', "melt ya organs".. so ya chest will 'sink to ya skin'.. rip ya "eyelids" out so u cant 'blink again'// "crush" u wit 'over powering palms'.. then hit ya "ass harder" than 'showering cons' and 'tower bongs'// coming wit 'hot nines'.. when ur coming wit 'stock ryhmes', u could "sneaze" while "sniffing coke".. and still wouldnt 'drop lines'// dont got any sites.... not allowed to vote on battles |
ur turn.........................30 minutes remember!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good luck.... dont hurt too much brain cells |
Instead of this inbred Theory, I’ll be tha one causing unprecedented Kaos,
You’re Homo that’s lame and Dreary, so stay the fuck back and lay Off. Couldn’t get a insane, oblique, psycho feeling addictive and Aggressive, My rhymes got you bouncin off walls, so the feeders left Possessive. And now you’re pissed off, that I’ve been pissing on your Grave, Ya imitating each of my lines, coz shallow feedings wot you Crave. Well if it’s my material that you want, then I’ll serve it on a Platter, Here, take each one of my lines, you won’t win, so it doesn’t Matter. These last two lines will make you crumble and give me Gravity, Coz each one of my words dismantles, then rips at your chest Cavity. aight uppin for votes..............boooooobeeeeee bart simpson likes cheese............. |
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wut can i say bout this battle........... newb like............... yall both need to up ya game but ma vote goes to kaos...simply because he had better punches... even tho they were simple this one was decent "stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win', "melt ya organs".. so ya chest will 'sink to ya skin'.. rip ya "eyelids" out so u cant 'blink again'// vote- kaos. |
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yo i gotta give this ta Lyrical Cyanide jus cuz i think it was more personal an had better flow. vote = Lyrical Cyanide
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fuck sorry still wont let me poll vote, always says i need an explanation even if i already posted 1 so i guess my vote doesnt count, peace.
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Punces:Ly
Flow:Ly Mulit:Both Structure:Ly Vocab:Kaos Enoyability:Kaos Overal-Ly Not a bad battle at all, it was pretty good, had some nice disses and both MC's came pretty hard, good, props to both. Drop and explained vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80975 |
lol, this was bullshit man, these votes are wacked kaos... you better watch whos votin' man...
check it... kaos - Your punches were there, but only TWO of them made sense, your flow was there and your rhymescheme kept up, but it was newbish, no multis to count, no metas, no name play, nor wordplay, you worked a lil on similies... but they didn't add up right, your creativity lacked alot, and stayed on point... at least some... Lyrical - You lacked in everything man, you didn't throw one punch that came recognized, it was all flow for you and you didn't even come hard on that, you were too newbish all in all dawg... your flow n rhymscheme followed up well, no sims, metas, multis... blah blah blah... you need to work on it dawg... kaos - put "explosives" in ur "thoat".. till u 'caughing up bombs'// "stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win' those were the only lines that weren't played, even tho the first had been used quiet abit... work on that because that was the only thing that i could point out in ya verse... vote - Kaos |
I'm giving this to Cyanide because of originality...
Lyrical really didn't hit all that hard. Could have been alot more effective with his punches. But at least they were his. Kaos came with, it seemed, every played line in the book. Boxing with no arms - Real, real played Explosives in throat - Real, real, played Sneeze on coke - Played to death He had some nice flow, but I can't vote for a verse with THAT MANY played lines. One or two maybe, but his shit was stocked with em. Sorry, Kaos. Vote: Lyrical |
aight i got two real votes of quite respectful peeps.......this fag be chopping riders...........aight uppin 33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 333
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ur bout lose "lyrically" like on 'prom night'//
^^ how do u lose lyrically on prom night?..... didnt make much sense to me-rest of the verse wasnt much better either.......Koas-Elevate Cyanide....your lines were streched to much-which thru the flow off and your punches weren't that hard either.....also-Elevate overall this battle was very newbyish......and overall i would have to say koas took this simoply cus he was alot meaner wit his verse.... vote-koas.....Both Improve...No Hate...Pc*1* |
demosthenes vote dont count........... dick riding
his explaination Punces:Ly Flow:Ly Mulit:Both Structure:Ly Vocab:Kaos Enoyability:Kaos Overal-Ly for 1 lyrical had way more vocab 2nd of all... i had more punches 3rd... lyrical had no multies..... thats a wack vote actually read tha battle faggot |
Instead of this inbred Theory, I’ll be tha one causing unprecedented Kaos,
You’re Homo that’s lame and Dreary, so stay the fuck back and lay Off. theory and dreary,............kaos and lay off, maybe shit lines but they are multi's ya thik shit............... now uppin uppin uppin |
thats still a bullshit vote besides tha multies......... do u think i had betta vocab???????????
even summontitan new it was dick riding |
right it needs to be fukin left now coz we jus be fillin g this thread with bullshit...........how can he d/r tho.......i got no fukin idea who this kid is and b2k has been here for ages and he voted for me.....think about wot ya saying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bllllllaaaaaahhhh hhhhhhhhhhh
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What can i say about this battle...Both of you need some improvement. MY vote definatley goes to Kaos. Only because Lyrical had the style and rhymes, but Kaos had that and good use of his skills.
Vote: Kaos |
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^^If someone told me that i had better vocab-I'd see that as a plus, don't know what you're so pissed about. anyways........ Vote=Lc Instead of this inbred Theory, I’ll be tha one causing unprecedented Kaos, You’re Homo that’s lame and Dreary, so stay the fuck back and lay Off. ^^best bar of the battle in my opinion. Lc won this with better punches and flow....structure too....but both of ya used very played lines...seriously gotta work on that, but I guess this was an ok battle. |
Yo This is how it's goin down
Punces:Ly Flow:Ly Mulit:Both Structure:Ly Vocab:Kaos Enoyability:Kaos Overal-Ly Demo took the words right out my mouth |
Ight breakdown is:
Flow: Lyrical Cyanide Punches: Lyrical Cyanide Wordplay: Kaos Metas: Kaos Multis: Neither really Overall: LC Tip: Kaos..... don't use "s they are really annoying and throws off the flow check my battle and while u are check the structure it's nice and simple from both of us http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80448 |
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