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BE BRAVE vs Mentally Kursed
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u first i set up no c h dr votes ill spit tom or asap |
aiight I'll spit either tomorrow or asap ~1`
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***Pics up Tha Mic***
Yo Battle wit Mentally Kursed das a (W)rap Gladly (Glad wrap), you all burned out Im energized like a battery// You baffle me sadly, rhyming so badly, thinking you got a chance, If you had “STYLES” like “JULIA” I still wouldn’t Save You The Last Dance// This is ya last chance throw in da towel, I will verbally plant seeds in ya ass, And let them grow in ya bowels// Wit me you not a contender, you pretender, I put ya rhymes in da blinder, hit u wit da Whip leave bloodstains all ova my fender, stab you and bribe da public defender, Lyrically castrate you and claim you lied about ya gender// Im mean wit my lyrics dey say im a jerk or a menace, Im tying you down Makin others witness dis “MERK” till’ im finished// You couldn’t fuck wit me if ya name was “LIFESTYLE” or “TROJAN”, I spit so hot I close and make ya respiratory system re-open, my words is potent, Cloud up ya lungs as if you jus began smoking// ***Throws tha mic to Kursed*** |
Aight check it
Ill leave you brain deceased from repeatedly gettin stabbed in the head// Tearin you to shreds, leave you washed up like sand on shore, drowned then dead// Im disconnectin your life like bankrupted people wit unpaid phone bills// Get into your brain and molest your dreams like I was "Kelly Krugar" so your dreams are "fulfilled"// Gat leave you deep underground "readin dirt" so youll be a "book worm"// Punches leave you unconscious on ground knocked out wit contorted squirm// Pastin money on those who did you wrong spines is the only time you "pay them back"// Im leavin your skull cracked, like a gay quarterback player you wanna get a sack// You defeatin me in this battle is incorrect, ima use F7 for a spell check// Bullets hittin your deck, leavin a slit under you throat from your ear to your neck// You beatin me aint happenin like a black man found innocent from a racist jury// Your not focused enough better adjust your eyes because its comin in blurry// |
look...........i would love to comment on each line, but im too much in a pissed mood to do that so ill do it this way
Flow = MK Multis = None Punches = MK Metas = MK Wordplay = MK Creativity = MK dis was one sided straight merking in my opinion hit dis junk up........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559 |
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vote-MK
way better verse, better structure and punches, be brave u need to work on that structure a little bit.. it was messy at time. elevate ur thought process a lil bit, and ull get better. but my vote goes to MK. ayo hit this up and poll your honest vote here.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81763 |
yo mentally kurseed ripped that shit everything was tight basically one sided be brave had some hot shit but couldnt match it good battle though no hate no d/r hit it up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
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mentally merked this kid his shit was crazy tight.......... he had flow and punches.........anyway hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81772 |
^^yea ill peep yall battles in a minute
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MK hands down BIATCH's lol but MK won this easy
BREAKDOWN Mulitz....None really Punches.....MK Creativity....MK Flow....TIE...leanin towards MK a lil more... Wordplay....MK.... MK...start battlin vets...<wordness> errbody hit dis battle up plz.....FAIR AND HONEST VOTE...NO D/R...NO HATE!!!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559 |
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=81757
^Hit that up^ and i'll return the favor here 1.... |
yea i agree with everyone else..i think MK took this one...
he just had a overall better verse....better flow... punches...wordplay...he just took it in every catagory..... overall vote- Mk yep... pz..... |
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