OpTiX ~VS~ L S
 

10-15 lines aite we both got like 40 minutes let do this quick dawg
honestly tho no recylin no crew votes
no herb votes
jsut a clean out battle
u down
check in
u do the smae so i no u down
an i got no other battles open..they all no shoed..
aite so lets do this

checkin in.......go head and spit and ill reply.........................................and hopefully you arent that danbnas guy......:-/

wut naw man second the rules wa u drop first k dont funi tell em to drop the nud reply y rules fuk face so lets both drop k..start da verse who ever drops first drops first
we both got 40 mintues

aight......this is gonna be easy anyway..........we will both drop whenever you are ready. ajksdhfjkalhsdfakjsdhgkljahsdgjkalhsg (100 characters)

This cat im battlin doesnt even know how to spell his own name/
He wants to drop within 40 minutes, im his only ticket to fame/
Its a shame that he even questions the game/
Im defining illness with the realest words for your brain/
Im wondering if you even understand the text/
When I signed up for the battle, I got a lot less then what I expect/
Its kind of sad to see myself battling NooBs/
I dont mean to be rude, but be honest, whose lyrics are you gonna use?/
If you win this battle, Ill probably shoot myself in the leg/
Cause it would be the same if I lost to a kid stuck in 2nd grade/
Seriously, I dont even know what you are gonna post/
You tried to rush me dawg, but this battle is really a joke/



Hurry up and post

dont tell em to hurry an post nugga i got a time limit u aitn da time bitch stfu an sit tie..
dont get ya panties in a bunch kid..
^^ that was ya spit...came ahrd but fell apart at da end..god shit shud be a good battle

Dog.....just fucking post. You suck at rapping so just get your loss over with. 40 minutes are almost up.......so HURRY UP and post. You were the one who agreed to MY terms.

Aite d beat drops..quicker then this herb...

I drop hot-scripts,im to rhymes as a clip is to a gun-bitch//
this kid Optix ,wit his played punches an lines thinks he won-this//
dumb bitch. im gunna take this battle in a seconds flat,you rap hopelessly//
this kids doenst even wait for me to drop hes already yellin, give da votes to me//Lmao
Im dope u see, well i guess not but ill be da one to lyrikaly advance//(HIs Sig)
cuz u cant witstand da spits comin out my salivary glands//
U dont get it.ya punches are played ,watch my metaphors meta-morph//
into sumthin great,cuz im spittin flames at this herb as he-gets torched//
for wut its worth, IF ILL was food ud be one straving kid//

^^ it sent by mistake i iant done...

I drop hot-scripts,im to rhymes as a clip is to a gun-bitch//
this kid Optix ,wit his played punches an lines thinks he won-this//
dumb bitch. im gunna take this battle in a seconds flat,you rap hopelessly//
this kids doenst even wait for me to drop hes already yellin, give da votes to me//Lmao
Im dope u see, well i guess not but ill be da one to lyrikaly advance//(HIs Sig)
cuz u cant witstand da spits comin out my salivary glands//
U dont get it.ya punches are played ,watch my metaphors meta-morph//
into sumthin great,cuz im spittin flames at this herb as he-gets torched//
for wut its worth, IF ILL was food ud be one straving kid//
ill dismantle u limb from limb an feed u to rb voters an partying gifts//
it hardly fits,how u gunna call me a noob when u bouta get tossed//
out this battle out this site,but before he leaves lets add up his loss........

MAde da last three lines quick...anxious for sum voters an comments

DAMn i shud of fix dem typos//.
LIne 9 it suppsoie to say starving kinds not straving kids or wuteva
uppni for votes......honest ones..pc

i think you ripped someones verse but oh well.....let voting begin............................................. .......................

^^^ WUT THE fuk fool everyline was a personal..about uahahhahahah
LIKE HOW U VOTE SWAY>>>AHAHHAH HERB
first u thought i was weak i came ahrd an now u think i bit..wow

your dumb everyline is about u..hahahaha wow

I put it like this......you come on and sign up for the battle and can barely write english. All of sudden when we post our battles, you even use wordplay......to me its just funny. We will see what the judges thinks and may the best man win.....

write english.hmmm let me see u ever here of typos second kid..let da juges vote an well see who wins
i bet u if da voters dont ride diks u gunna loose 5-0
PC

Good battle but Lyrikaly~Straped took this one i thought, he had better punches, more multies, better flow too i thought, OpTiX verse was good but Lyrikaly's verse was better, so my vote goes to Lyrikaly

DUDEZ

IGHT BATTLE ILL BREAK IT

flow..lyrikal
punches...lyrikal
metas...lyrikal
multies..tie
structure..tie
enjoyability...tie
personalz...lyrikal
overall..lyrikal.

^^PLAIN AND SIMPLE LYRIKAL CAME HARDER WIT DA SHIT HE NEED 2 BRING..

i mean...optix...swayin votez is bad sportmanship..so that lost it 4 u ne wayz...

if u lost..u lost due accept it..

keep elavatin...and good luck in the future u 2

uppin for sum more voters
tolD U OPTIX U WERE GUNNA GET koD SLUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVTTT

both need to stop talkin shit an let people vote....use pm's...

as far as votin goes i got to go wit L S.....his flow betta wit moe hard an complex punches....other kat was droppin a ryhme scheme like motha goose style...both elevate....

vote- LS

^^ yea But u RIDE HORSES ^^ FOR A LIVIVNG FAG>
an u need da elevate..cuz i have already
uppin fdor honest votes thats for da vote tho Car

car aint a fag...butr imstill tryna get my first win cn sumone end this for me..today..sumtime..if possible...uppinnnnnnnnnn

My vote goes to Lryikally Strapped

He basically killed dis ish

EVEN THO I SAID, his disses arent killers

he got this with his multis and shit

choppy flow, bars were one word too many (just need a lil re-wording thats all)

neways

Vote = LS

Ok Here it is.


flow..lyrikal
punches...lyrikal
metas...lyrikal
multies..tie
structure...lyrikal
Personals...lyrikal
overall..lyrikal.


but it was like 30 lines to 10 so what do you ezpect