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CarsonJet - v - White-Virus
10 lines.....5 barz
30 minute max Blind Spit-jus drop in 30 no hate no dik no crew no recycle no bite no feed |
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ahhahahah carson man ...your abck huh wut ahpen to battlyn like 100 odd battles an uwanted to retir your back huh..well i wanna get a shot at u..an so does my buddy...wehn u doen ill set a clena abttle.up if udown
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Imma bout to de"jet" this "Carson" and leave him before his "time"// (before 2k4)
You a "cop", hell betta call ya Sheriff tha way ya "steal" tha "rhymes"// Committin these "crimes", hell you aint dinner you only a lunch// Even if you trained wit "Tyson" you still wouldn't pack a "punch// Bitch livin "Daily", so you behind, betta "speed" up "Car"son// Imma rap salesman, leavin you 2 votes ahead, just for tha bargain// Betta say ya "sorry mr. virus", before i make ya a "outkast"// Ya flow stays slow, ya rhymes couldn't be "phat" if they wuz on "slimfast"// I'll leave ya in Reincarnation, you in World War 3 wit outta jet// You in shape?, i'm not, but this battle for me, no need to break a swet// lmao....aight letz roll |
White-Virus
Yo chek it... He's a White'Virus/ Watch Out... His Lines'Put peeps ta sleep like Linus-(charlie brown) Can't Figure Why u even Cheked'IN aint even gon'moistn my pallet- I disable Dis Germ wit Childrens'advil tablets' Look...He thinks he's adlibb- please.... Im too hot'Can't mess wit me'wanna feel?lemme Drop a few Degrees'- lets burn em knees'cus das'the only way u front wit C's- lil 15 yearold junior mint'aint even got a whip ta tint' i leave ya like vick..de'feet'd an strung up in splint- bitch get the hint, dis cats Pre'writs are more like lint' wasted cash flow spent'my time has been wasted'on a hopless baby shady' more like boby brady gettin played' by his sis miss Marsha ...daily- |
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Punches:Carson
Flow:White Personals:White Structure:Both Vocab:Carson Opener:Carson Closer:Carson Wordplay:Both Overal:Carson This was a pretty good battle. I liked both MC's verses and they both hit pretty hard. I was feelin carson mroe though, his shit was good. White nice stuff, keep it up and keep elevating. Props to both MC's.:) Hit this up for me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80975 |
i dunno about dis one man.............its a hard one..............i think imma have ta go wit...............white virus...........dunno man.........i was just feelin his one more than the other kats one
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a yo any of yall wanna battle n shit.......................if any yall wanna jus pm me first man............then we can set some shit up and get it goin.......holla at ya boi
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Good battle...
Nice rhymes on both sides. Still kinda one sided. I believe Virus came ok, just didn't bring the complexity, the wordplay, or the punches that Carson did. Plus, one thing I really like is imagery. Carson outdid him there too. I laughed imagining a "baby shady" and "bobby gettin jumped by marsha"... That shit was funny. I'll give Virus the flow, but Carson took the rest quite handily. Holla Born vs. Sauce |
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I belive that both emcees came wit it but carson wuz on another level wit his junk. Virus you did good man you just went up against someone else thats really good also. Vote Carson because of complexity and wordplay. |
aight let me break this shit down right quick
multi's carson wordplay virus punchs carson complexity carson structure tie flow tie vote carson |
CarsonJet is DQ'd for having more than two active battles...
Next time follow the rules... That is all... |
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^ THIS IS TRUE & TECHNICALLY WONT ACCOUNT FOR THE "2 BATTLES ONLY" RULE RE-OPENED -BROOKLYN |
nice battle but somehow carson had senseless punches no offense some didn't make sense but nice verse n white's verse was wierd but somehow i felt it more overall he came harder cause his shit was orignial and carsons shit was hard to understand and read
Vote=WV hollaz |
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Close Battle.. But Carson Edged It Out By An Inch. I Was Feelin Both But Damn Carson Had A Few Killer Lines, Like the c's line.. White Had A Better Flow And Thats About It.
Vote-Carson Hit This Up.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...53&pagenumber=4 |
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Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z Oh My Bad : Breakdown Punches=White Virus Personals=Carson Flow=Carson Multis=Carson Structure=Carson , Virus's Verse Was Sloppy Complexity=White Virus Overall= Carson "I diasbled this germ with Children's Advil tablets". That Was Some Tight Ass Shit. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z Oh My Bad : Breakdown Punches=White Virus Personals=Carson Flow=Carson Multis=Carson Structure=Carson , Virus's Verse Was Sloppy Complexity=White Virus Overall= Carson "I diasbled this germ with Children's Advil tablets". That Was Some Tight Ass Shit. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< This was how it was suppose to lok |
yea i think carsoin got this.....heres how ima put it....
flow-Car structure-WV punches-Car personals-Car wordplay-WV creativity-Car complexity-Car comedy-both enjoyment-both overall vote- Car not a bad battle...stay up yep.. pz... ->Je@!<- |
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