Rookie wna battle?
 

k.u spit 1st normal rulez.
8 linez.1

hey you'll im rookie im new on rap battles,
im gunna wipe da floor wid u cos ur like a baby wid its rattle,
hey oli_dogg stop smokin dat grass,
that shit wont gt u a g.c.s.e. pass,
man who da fuck do u think u r tryin 2 battle me,
ur 1 of those dumb shits that cant even count to 3,
hears a bit of a lesson 4 u that i will make u c,
im rookie u dnt wanna fuck wid me,
i hear bout ur mum givin head to a horse,
so her and ur mum dad gt a divorce,
then after that she ended up marryin u,
her own son the only fuckin jew,
fuck off gt off of my back,
and realise 1 day wen uve gt ur head out of ur crack.
im rookie

Ok bitch,
listen 1st of you expecting to win with rookie as your *name*?
go back to dance school, cus your playing in the wrong *game*,
the rulez say 8 linez, and you say i cnt count to *3*,
you looking in a mirror and mistakeing yourself for *me*(reflection of a twat),
the closest your gettin to a shag, is a wank on your *bed*,
a girl slapped you round the face, and you bragged she gave you *head*,
so listen bitch your saying i got my head up my *crack?*(his rap),
well your a mother fuckin faggot who pays to get it from the *back*.
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start voteing honest vote plz............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .pz

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OLI_DOGG got this better overall had nice disses, punches, and flow.

Rookie u flow came up short u disses,flow,vocab was very weak elevate.


Uppin 4 thees emcees

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

yo lets get sme shit on da poll.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................................1

This was honestly the worst shit ive ever heard but if i had to give it to someone oli but not by much.............................................. ......

^^^ exactly what dat guy said

dis shit was....................................

but i have to give it somebody
so I'd give it to Oli for harder disses basically

elevation is needed on both, big time!

that was about 3 min of my time I will never get back. I hate the both of ya.

I dont even know how to rate this other than just giving this crap to oli

dogg got this one........................ it was elementary from both sides man.....weak battle.........fucken shit u can find a nursery rhyme..

yo dnt let dis shit die man.uppin 4 votes............................................. ...........................................pz

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yo if i had to vote n e 1 in this battel
i wud vote oli his flow was everything rookies wasnt
but it still wernt tight



yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82352
and this 1 especially
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245

uppin 4 votes yall.............................................. ..............................................pz

oli got this one. he had alot better punches. and why is everyone hatin we all started somewhere and we all were basic they are just trying to elevate by getting practice

oli good battle sorry my vote doesnt count

thx dawg.dats wat im tlkin bout.4real........................uppin........... .................................................. .......pz

dnt let dis die...........................................uppi n................................................. ......pz

a yo im pretty sure oli dogg took this one.......his beats were better......and his flow was better than the other dog

thx man................uppin.......................... .................................................. .lets get sme votes up...............pz

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stupid battle wack and no punches that was like whoa
Vote=Od his verse was nicer overall

uppin. lets get sme shit on da poll.............................................. .................................................. .........pz