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Artikqlit 09-26-03 10:28 PM

ArtikQlit VS audible
 
Diamond Mindz VS Omens

TEXT MATCH-UP TWO
*10 Lines - no more, no less.
*No-Shows count in automatic DQ .
*No crew votes .
*Over 300 posts to vote - comprehensive breakdown preferred .
*No quoting previous votes .
Verse By: Sunday, 9/28 11:59 PM EST.

G'Luck . .


Special Thanks To G. Hod For Set Of Rules

Artikqlit 09-26-03 10:38 PM

chekk

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chekk..

Artikqlit 09-28-03 02:10 PM

uppin

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audible 09-28-03 04:11 PM

..::tosses in the nike to check in::..
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audible 09-28-03 04:50 PM

You can call me 'Einstein' cuz i'll give him empty-stairs and make this MC-square/
an if ya ill is the 'naked truth my envy's-bare its like ya skill is the 5th wheel the way your in-D-spair// (in dispare)
like 'not knowing the time' i'll have ya rap second guessin n tappin~knuckles-to-wood/ (knock on wood)
like this battle's a'belt' i'll have you feelin the pressure and buckle-for-good//
i give a fuck-if-ya-hood just be true to ya man only time 'all eyez on you' is when ya box-with-a-champ/
I bring 'death to this bitch'yo i'm chalkin-a-tramp i'll have ya 'scared to step' like a gangsta who walks-with-a-cramp//
Talkin-is-damned like a disqualifying card in monopoly i'll give you a loss-at-a-chance all-in-advance/
cause audi n' the pak is serious but we battle DM-for fun/
like porn stars goin for govenor the chances of you winnin are slim-to none/
FINISHER
I spit to kill your lucky to~bruise-or-welt with lyrics like horrible 80's rock sendin U2-hell*/
You aint felt~ Kid must be emniem cuz I didnt have to script to WIN, I knew you'd ~LOSE-yourself//


( square - pusssy)(E=mc square)

(U2 was a 80's rock band)

Artikqlit 09-28-03 05:09 PM

Str8 Heat - Whole Way
...Fuck Personals... (OLD STYLE)

ya wins increasin? whats the reason u come agaisnt me with bleedin treason..
audibles only loading clips'll will leave u screamin, videos streamin..
my flows are thunderous, my blows are fun to him?na shit u speak in abundance.. (shutup!!)
ur soul is hunted kid!, and i'll cut off both ur legs so u can ROLL with punches..
u wack for real!,u couldn't control the route of this shit if u held onto tha fuckin steerin wheel!..
slaped 2 steal,clapped this queer,and like cleareances at footlocker ur souls for deal!..
This kid's defyin, stretched bars nd shit, god stop rhymin, ya mouth goin but noody vibe'n..
but there u lay cryin,i leave u gaspin through a tube like ashamtic scuba dive'n!!!

haha..u dead..

*EDIT FOR SPELLIN

Audo 09-28-03 05:15 PM

I think that artikqlit came hard and spit nuttin but fire...he had better flow, punches, wordplay...audible wasn't that bad either, but his punches just weren't that hard...

VOTE=ARTIKQLIT

Mentally Kursed 09-28-03 05:28 PM

in my opinion i thought ArtikQLit took it wit

punches
flow
consitancy
word play
metas
multies
and funniness

audibles was tight but it was stretched

Artikqlit 09-28-03 05:39 PM

2-0 me...
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Good battle Audible..
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Jack Mehoff 09-29-03 11:09 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Artikqlit
Str8 Heat - Whole Way
...Fuck Personals... (OLD STYLE)

ya wins increasin? whats the reason u come agaisnt me with bleedin treason..
audibles only loading clips'll will leave u screamin, videos streamin..
my flows are thunderous, my blows are fun to him?na shit u speak in abundance.. (shutup!!)
ur soul is hunted kid!, and i'll cut off both ur legs so u can ROLL with punches..
u wack for real!,u couldn't control the route of this shit if u held onto tha fuckin steerin wheel!..
slaped 2 steal,clapped this queer,and like cleareances at footlocker ur souls for deal!..
This kid's defyin, stretched bars nd shit, god stop rhymin, ya mouth goin but noody vibe'n..
but there u lay cryin,i leave u gaspin through a tube like ashamtic scuba dive'n!!!

haha..u dead..

*EDIT FOR SPELLIN


in my town, that goes out on monday night...


















with the garbage.

audible 09-29-03 11:38 AM

^^^^^^fa reals^^^^^^^^this cat has d/r just cause hes well known....and AUDI just came.....and the second voter said the same shit the first voter said...like they didnt even read the verse

Aisle Phive 09-29-03 04:05 PM

Don't Bitch^^^


It Was Close.. Coulda Gone Either Way.

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Artikqlit 09-29-03 07:09 PM

lol u wrong...
ur shit wuz wakk..stretch bars nd shit..
oh well..

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-ElocuShun- 09-29-03 07:23 PM

this was a nice battle............both rappers came tight and the verses werent boring either which i like also.....my three main categories to voting come down to punches,origanality and sustainment of the punches......but i'll also do the full breakdown jus for you cats......
punches=art
origanality=both....tight
sustainment of punches=aud......
wordplay=both
metas=art
flow=both

i saw this battle as an ill bt close battle......and for that i always go with punches....thats wot battles are for.....so...
vote=art

hit this up...........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82143

-ElocuShun- 09-29-03 07:25 PM

fuk ma bad...............alldig said he had registered me but i'll have to poll wen he does.............soz guys.........peace

Chrit 09-29-03 08:36 PM

Aight...

Not that great of battle here...
If Art woulda came with a few perosnals this would have been an eisier decision...

Either way...
ArtikQlit takes it with better flow... wordplay etc...

Punches were close but were edged by Art...
Personals was all audible took...

Vote ArtikQlit

youngblood 09-29-03 10:41 PM

i think art got this one..heres how ima break it down.....

flow-art
structure-art
punches-art
wordplay-audible
personals-both
complexity-audible
creativity-art
multi's-art
meta's-audible
comedy-both
enjoyment-both

overall vote- ART

good battle u guys....stay up...

yep..
pz...

Artikqlit 09-29-03 10:44 PM

4-0 me..

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uppin for finisher..

Symilee 09-29-03 11:17 PM

ok this was a pretty easy battle to decide on................

Audible, your verse wasnt awful. But damn man...u streched shit like stretch armstrong. Or something like that. I know that sounded retarded, but that really hurt ur flow.....even though u had some nice wordplay in there. Punches were ok...but nothing great.

Art had just the better overall verse, what can you say. Better flow, better punches, not as good wordplay but he didnt stretch like u did........easy decision. Vote = Art.

peace......................................


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