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J-man Vs Gills
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i dont know how to start this off, but i start it with a diss
i aint got a girl, but ya momma gave me a kiss i once had a bitch then you kissed her little did i know, that the bitch was your sister there is nothin to fear in this world but fear itself you say you got skillz, but why was u askin me for help? nothin is ever guaranteed in this world, cuz all it is is lies gills aint a rapper, jus another kid in the corner that cries i got you breathin for more, cuz this shit isn't even fair the diss was so bad, that this bitch gills was gaspin for air i'll make your dream come true, but with only a verse but this aint a dream, u only ask for that in church never criticized but its jus because i have too many flaws gay fagget, u were already in position when u were learning to crawl i spit lyrical acid, that tears thru your skin you better tape an emcee battle, cuz that's the last u recorded a win |
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Yo my verbal linguistics are kinda ill
Garenteed to kill, I smoke fools like teepees and erase shitty verses like T.P. Cook up twisted verses like linguini And serve fools like chef's who wanna battle me... Yall don't really cook nothing, just small talk like Emeril Lagasse My lyrics are hot but my demeanor stays frosty Givin cats the icey deltoid Hot sound or frigid noise, all spectrums so either or With an anatomy constructed of pure metaphors So you can call me Metaphist Cats who introduced themselve can tell you how they met-a-fist Tryin to mess with this I'm gifted like spoiled only-children Cats get flipped like a fat bitch jumpin on the see-saw of and annerexic |
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cmon yall, lets get some votes, i want to get this shit over wit.
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well personally I prefered J-man. Gills had a vocabulary I admit. But I gotta go for J-man. I don't detect any punches its just J-man's is funnier. But both need to elevate. J-man's verse reminds me of a freestyle battle.
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cmon yall, dont sleep, need votes for this battle,
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Vote=Gills
Thought he had a better verse ill break it down Punches=Gills Metas=Gills Flow= Straight up J-Man Vocab=Gills Structure=J-man I think gills took it, jus cuz of his punchlines, weak battle tho Yo boys please hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81929 |
Hmm,
Both verses were pretty basic and newbie like....But my vote goes to gills....no exsplaition needed..J-Man please don't talk about his mom that so fucking gay it means you can't come up with creative punches.Please J grow up 1 |
hey if yall vote can yall please vote on the poll to no just in a reply two people voted for me but only one is in the poll..Uppin for votes...............
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i definitely think gills took this one, not only was his verse a lot more complex than J-Mans he actually had some punches, i liked the Emeril punch.. anyways vote: gills
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hehe thanks but i aint no man :-p
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gills- 2 votes
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Punches=Gills Personal=J-man Multis=Gills Creativity=Gills Structure=J-man Complexity=Gills Wordplay=Gills Vocab=Gills Overall=Gills >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82143
hit this up.........even if jus feedbk this was an aight battle but heres the three main cats i base my vote on punches=gills sustainment of punches=both originality=gills vote=gills |
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im voting for gills.. better wordplay, vocab and punches.. j-man s flow that sister line was wack.....
vote=gills slept on like whoa~hit this UUUPPP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
uppin.............thanx, i need to switch up my shit, i aint text battled in like a long ass time, so say what you want about my verse, i know its whack as fuck,
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics
Punches=Gills Metas=Gills Flow= J-Man Structure=J-man Vocab=Gills overall gills thats my vote hit up my link ya herd |
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