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Bash 09-27-03 03:50 PM

....Shatter 'Em....( Fgee Diss )
 
This diss is for Fgee............He asked for it , so here it is nigga.....

[ Chorus ]
Fgee My Brain Has Maintain To spit Flames
That Will Demenish Your Whole Name
Put you Through a Full Source Of Pain
Destroy your Frame.......I'm a Keep doing it
Till I Completely Break Your Brain........
Your Rhymes are Lame....Everyone Watch as I Shatter 'Em..
( 2 Times )

[ Verse One ]
Fgee , After this Diss Is Over you wont be Liven...
You're The One who Contacted Me and Started Bitchin....
Calling me Asshole and Shit for No Reason..........
Well Nigga Checkout these Lyrical Statements I'm Spitting...
I'm a Crack , Stabb , Inject and Disect Your Legiments.....
Drain Your Spleen and Use it as a Mr.Clean....(Squeezy)
Shatter Your Jaw Wit My Punches......
Cut Out Your Body Parts and Put It Up In Bunches..
Take Notes.......I'm Basically Above Your Lines Just like Ur Quotes...
Break Your Back....Flip Your Spine Wit My Fatal Punchlines..
You Cant Stand My Sickness Like Weak Patients In Hospital Lines..
leave ya crew Ripped-n-Charred , as i stay Equipped to leave you with a Limp-n-Scars......
I'm a Tear off your Off-Key.. like Stringless Guitars
Mix Fgee's "Body" Parts Just Like a "Blender"/
He Claims He's Gangsta But The Only "Drugs" that he Buy is over tha "Counter............
U cant Carry Me on Your Bait.....Nigga You Gotta understand That You Can't Clash With The Greats............

[ Chorus ]
Fgee My Brain Has Maintain To spit Flames
That Will Demenish Your Whole Name
Put you Through a Full Source Of Pain
Destroy your Frame.......I'm a Keep doing it
Till I Completely Break Your Brain........
Your Rhymes are Lame....Everyone Watch as I Shatter 'Em..
( 2 Times )

[ Verse Two ]
U wanna Battle me? Bitch That Aint Clever...
Ya 'Mouth' is like 13th Disciple's 'Momma's Legs' because it's 'Open-Forever.....
Murder this Lame..12 gauges Fluently Blast and Rot Ya Glands
Fgee Couldnt Shock A Ryhthem Even If he Swallowed A Power Line.....
U Winning NAH.....That's why i'm a Rip Out Ya Brain Just so u can Change Ya Mind...
Like Jennifer Lopez's Ass In The Shadow , Your Rhymes all Fall Behind.....
Put A Couple Of Bullets Through Your Chest and Let The Bullet Powder Circulate Through Your Body Parts Nest....
Your Rhymes Are Weak , I'm a Leave You Shading Blood all Over The Hospital Bed Just Like Your Crew Mate Omega Genesis.....
And For God Sakes , Who The Fuck Is OpeY?
Meta 5 is an ugly-Slut, Face It, Your Stylez Suck Like "Airducts..
I'm a Have Haiku 'Throwin In The Towel' Faster Than 'Hindu's B4 a Haircut............
Who The Fuck is TheWholeTruth???....
Well hell , I'm a Still Fuck Up The Whole Regime Crew..
I'm A Murder Chrit........And Leave Em To Rot in The Sun Like Hot Meat....
Sureal , Your Head Is What I'm A Split.........
And Y.G. Swoop you're so Whack That U aint even Worth A Diss..
BribeOne1 sometimez Has "Nice-Words" But Watch as This Nigga
Crumble right By "My-Verse.............
I know I'm Drivin Fgee Mad, So If I Strike-First"He Just "Might-Swerve.............Fuck ya All

[ Chorus ]
Fgee My Brain Has Maintain To spit Flames
That Will Demenish Your Whole Name
Put you Through a Full Source Of Pain
Destroy your Frame.......I'm a Keep doing it
Till I Completely Break Your Brain........
Your Rhymes are Lame....Everyone Watch as I Shatter 'Em..
( 2 Times )

Yeah..............Fgee Bitch!!!!!!!!!............................

Sweet Sauce 09-27-03 03:56 PM

lmfao i was laughin mad hard threw this nice diss nigga

2 fav lines:
Im a Crack , Stabb , Inject and Disect Your Legiments.....
Drain Your Spleen and Use it as a Mr.Clean....(Squeezy)

U wanna Battle me? Bitch That Aint Clever...
Ya 'Mouth' is like 13th Disciple's 'Momma's Legs' because it's 'Open-Forever.....

pot1ent 09-27-03 04:05 PM

I only read half of this...Cuz you don't reply your pm's!! : )

Why Do aNb have to diss each other on open mics...settle it out man, it's pointless...well maybe you shoulda said why he fucked you off...fgee said he was sorry...Happy Familys

L-o-L

Pz...O yeah reply your pm or holla on this

gotaloveforrap 09-27-03 04:10 PM

i was laughin the whole time at that man. that was fuckin nuts. the wordplay and vocab were good, and the content and topic were original. i got a good laugh readin that. good post, and cant wait for more to come.

peace.....

tRiPliCiTy 09-27-03 04:40 PM

Your Rhymes are Lame....Everyone Watch as I Shatter 'Em..
lame...em doesnt rhyme

I'm a Crack , Stabb , Inject and Disect Your Legiments.....
Drain Your Spleen and Use it as a Mr.Clean....(Squeezy) lame

Take Notes.......I'm Basically Above Your Lines Just like Ur Quotes...
lame

Break Your Back....Flip Your Spine Wit My Fatal Punchlines..
You Cant Stand My Sickness Like Weak Patients In Hospital Lines..
punchline hospital lines doesnt rhyme........LAME

leave ya crew Ripped-n-Charred , as i stay Equipped to leave you with a Limp-n-Scars......
ripped and limp doesnt rhyme

I'm a Tear off your Off-Key.. like Stringless Guitars
alrite punchline

Mix Fgee's "Body" Parts Just Like a "Blender"/
He Claims He's Gangsta But The Only "Drugs" that he Buy is over tha "Counter
blender counter doesnt rhyme

U wanna Battle me? Bitch That Aint Clever...
Ya 'Mouth' is like 13th Disciple's 'Momma's Legs' because it's 'Open-Forever.....
lame

Like Jennifer Lopez's Ass In The Shadow , Your Rhymes all Fall Behind.....
Put A Couple Of Bullets Through Your Chest and Let The Bullet Powder Circulate Through Your Body Parts Nest....
lame..........bullet powder???????????????????????

Your Rhymes Are Weak , I'm a Leave You Shading Blood all Over The Hospital Bed Just Like Your Crew Mate Omega Genesis.....????????????nest genesis doesnt rhyme

Meta 5 is an ugly-Slut, Face It, Your Stylez Suck Like "Airducts..
I'm a Have Haiku 'Throwin In The Towel' Faster Than 'Hindu's B4 a Haircut............
lame

Who The Fuck is TheWholeTruth???....
Well hell , I'm a Still Fuck Up The Whole Regime Crew..
rhyming word??? truth and crew doesnt rhyme, maybe true and crew

I'm A Murder Chrit........And Leave Em To Rot in The Sun Like Hot Meat....
Sureal , Your Head Is What I'm A Split.........???????chrit and meat doesnt rhyme, unless u say MIT

I know I'm Drivin Fgee Mad, So If I Strike-First"He Just "Might-Swerve.......3.4/10

umm over all i give this a -9.9/10

LAMEST PUNCHLINES EVER
hell played out u are wack
that had no flow, that was
ummmm WACKKKKKKKKK
wack wack, lame lame you
suck, corniest punchlines
ever, biggest waste of eye
muscle movement, fuck u
suck, ummm what elseee,
u suck have i told u that u
suck, u wouldnt know what's
a punchline if u were a writing
boxer <<<--- thats how lame
ur punches where, u suck....
no flow/garbage concept, u
suck, ummm lets see what else
u suck, ur punches are lame
lame u suck nuts, piss off u wanker
that was just LAMEEEEEEEEEEEE
hey i got 1 question?????
GOT SKILLZ????????????

redragon12 09-27-03 05:06 PM

Hmmm,
Yeah^^This was a whack piece.To put it bluntly i've seen way better from you Bash,you should of just posted a diss not a diss in song formatt.
Overall:
5/10
1,it's harsh but i don't sugercode stuff i give it to you straight

Chrit 09-27-03 05:11 PM

You fucked up kiddo...

Never diss me...

And you bit the hindu/ air duct lines...

Moron...

Ray Zor 09-27-03 05:14 PM

how is this a diss. more of a bash diss than anything.

tRiPliCiTy 09-27-03 05:21 PM

more of a BANN him for biting

Mystik Mind 09-27-03 06:10 PM

Hmmm...WTF Was That Shit...

That Was Poor...Very Poor...

Flow Was Off...Disses Were Where?...Keep Trying.

13th Disciple 09-27-03 06:17 PM

notice how flyweights only give him props....but any vet could see
this was a cry for attention....then tightest thing about this whole
so called diss....is when he mentioned Regime's name. Bash ur
pure garbage.....don't get merked or get ur whole crew merked
cuz Fgee is better than u. And thats real talk. And next time...post
ur open mics in Wackness Emergency Center...so the newbies
can see what a diss is NOT suppose to look like...and word.

redragon 09-27-03 06:38 PM

Bannn the herb.............
*Not to self*
Never read Bash's open mics again...
But if he bit a line in that 'diss'.Then that raises the qestion."Were all his other open mics bitten too?"
Think about it
1

Bash 09-27-03 09:24 PM

Who did I bit the line from???................just answer....I didnt bite shit ..........Keep the feedbacks comming , and 13th , Fgee Was the one who contacted me and started calling me bitch........So he started this net beef............................I want more cats to read this , so they can give me negative or postive feedback , you know what I'm saying??.......And just think about this , If Chrit knew that I bit the line , why he aint report it to I.R yet??...........Just think about that my friends......And Triplicity shut the fuck up........U got banned for Biting on RnR........U bit from Aesop Rock..........Damn nigga , so U shouldnt even be talking.....................Peace Out............One...........Holla

rule 09-27-03 09:36 PM

i thought this was a good piece..i think you could have came better though from wut i have read in the past..your flow was good punchlines were good, but i liked the wordplay, an structure....i aint involved wit this beef but i think it was a good piece of writting...an can you check the roa..west told me to come try out so i sent something i wrote awhile ago to you'z in the forum for a try out thread an i was wondering if you could see if im in or not..thanks man peace

OutWrite 09-27-03 09:56 PM

Bash..You Fucked Up...

fgee 09-28-03 09:29 AM

i cant believe how wack this was....and Bash u just disrespected Regime as a whole...be gone u fag
whoever sed it was good needs their head examined
chek this comedy for further insight.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82101

WORD~PERFECT 09-28-03 10:21 AM

i have to agree pop you have souch a higher stature and expectancy of delivery from vets we have t be harsh with critiques and this was horrid.your above this by so much ,it seams ghst written by an amatuer....sorry pop but you know im a far man and you know damn well you better then this.

tRiPliCiTy 09-28-03 10:40 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Bash
And Triplicity shut the fuck up........U got banned for Biting on RnR........U bit from Aesop Rock..........Damn nigga



lmao lmao lmao i aint banned mutha fucka

hey i bite? wow ask CAMARAC lmao lololololololololololololol

just cause i'm dope doesnt mean i bite fuck wit

well ur the exact opposite to me, ur wack and u bite

Bash 09-28-03 02:18 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by tRiPliCiTy



lmao lmao lmao i aint banned mutha fucka

hey i bite? wow ask CAMARAC lmao lololololololololololololol

just cause i'm dope doesnt mean i bite fuck wit

well ur the exact opposite to me, ur wack and u bite


Triplicity tell me who did I bite from????????.........U keep saying I bite............What did I bite , and who did I bite from...........Holla

Chrit 09-28-03 02:21 PM

I'll post the link.....

You bit from me actually....

Bash 09-28-03 02:22 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Chrit
I'll post the link.....

You bit from me actually....


Ok..............I'm so Scared...Lol

Chrit 09-28-03 02:28 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=chrit

yep... the hindu line...

this is now going to IR and you will be banned

Bash 09-28-03 02:30 PM

Hmmm.......................You're the mod of Front Lines , and I see u edited your verse...........................I know U edited your verse and u put the hindu line in there.........

13th Disciple 09-28-03 02:31 PM

Bash....u bite more than a 15 year old whore wit braces

Bash 09-28-03 02:33 PM

Chrit edited his verse and he put the hindu line in there..................Aight Chrit , do what you gotta do , I know u edited your verse but if I get banned , it's all good dawg.........

Chrit 09-28-03 02:33 PM

Check the date moron...

My verse was edited on 04/02
Thats 5 months ago...

You're going to be banned...
Say your goodbyes

Bash 09-28-03 02:36 PM

Chrit considering you're a mod of front lines..................U can change the date..........................

Chrit 09-28-03 02:39 PM

No actually I cant change the date in edits...

Also... people quoted that line in votes...

Stop trying to act like you didnt bite...

That is all

KoNcEpT 09-28-03 02:41 PM

LMMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

He should be banned for droping this open mic.
but all in all i'm glad he's beign banned cuz he
is wack. Chrit's my hero :)

Chrit 09-28-03 02:52 PM

Notice how quiet he gets when I expose him...

Fucking herb

....Shab.... 09-28-03 03:20 PM

This was the weakest diss ever............Whack.........He got banned anyways

fgee 09-28-03 07:33 PM

notice how this is his most read piece ever....cos my names in it
lol

....Shab.... 09-28-03 08:13 PM

I've seen lots of people use that Hindu line though.......

menolin 09-28-03 08:15 PM

i thought the wordplay was nice
but the flow structure an rhyme wernt lol


yo an if y'all wud vote on these wack ass battles off mine so they can be closed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81877
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4023#post804023
and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245
thanks y'all

Speek.E.Z. 09-28-03 08:31 PM

Thats so ironic, he uses chrits own diss to diss chrit.. it's like me doing an open mic diss on bash and quoting this.. ;) bitch

....Shab.... 10-01-03 01:42 PM

Rest In Internet Peace Bash..........


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