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royalsickn3ss1 vs grotesque (the real one, not sure if it got messed up or not)
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your spittin first...i get too many no shows.. NO: hate d/r crew feeding biting none of that bullshit 5-10 mins to check afta set up 10 mins to drop...NO EXCEPTIONS(afta check in) |
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ok im in, ill go 1st
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excuse me, but u look like one of my groupies
mystery how my punches beat u so brutaly its time for my critiquing cuz i was peeking at ur last rhymes vocab lacks and u sound like a crowd of lost mimes ur puches bring no pain like ur personals bring no gain ill embarass ya and make ya use a fake name like mark twain ive seen puddles of mud flow better then ur played verse ill be givven ur mama a hug after they take u away in a blassed hearse i bet the birth of u was less dissapointing then ur unequal bars thought u was normal but in ur daddys geanes i guess was traces of retards 10 lines in under ten minutes bitch |
hahah umm ok... ehh..here...that took u 3 mins...prewritten? nah...i believe u rote it in 3 cuz it sux...heres my verse...
U Blowin Mics Cuz Significant Aint Ever Had Any Real Spits..// He's Like Theifing Plumbers Cuz This Cats Known To Steal Shit..// Need To Practice Speakin See, Gone When I'm Heaving Geeks..// They Say In God We Trust..So Join The Club & Start Believing N Me..// I Fight Back Dont Question The Sore Spleenz..// Ur A Twisted Fuck Like Dyslexics In Porn Scenez..// Hell Emersion, Significant Wat A Kind Virgin...// Ill Get Under Your Skin And Let Loose Like A Blind Surgeon..// Like Profesional Pyros I Know How To Handle The Torch...// And If You Step Up Again Ill Hang Ya family From The Porch...// no voting fer him so he can polll on ur battles cuz he has 100 posts.... lets get sum votes... |
lol damn man u gove me 10 minutes to write a verse and when i do u say prewritten such a herb/bitch move, nice try tho, uppin for votes
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Lyrical Cyanide
CarsonJet-2k4 AbOmInAtIoN CRYP'][' cannot vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ forgot to tell ya that...exspecially cryp....werd.. |
and ive never seen a porch that short to hang someone from, u make so much sence lol, ive seen balconys and over looks, but never porches
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man u cant put rules in after u checked in, sorry u gota state those things befor verses are posted..
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aight thats cool....but cryp if he votes its gonna b hate but w/e..... and u vote swayed ... dont do that again!.....
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what u mean i vote swayed? anyways i know lyrical is in my crew but not sure bout the others, so stop bein a bitch
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i'm a go wit royal. cause i thought he had a better flow and harder punches.
hit this up playah: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80586 |
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This was an ok Battle, both MC's need elevation though
Punches: Royal Personals: Royal Wordplay: Royal Metas: Gro Multis: Gro Flow: Tie Vote = Royal Keep battlin ya'll two, and elevation will come....pz |
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^^^what kind of explanation is that? anywho back to my explanation, heres how i thought it broke down...
structure-tie flow-tie vocab-royal wordplay-grotesque punches-grotesque enjoyability-tie overall-grotesque props to both of ya, but ima say grotesque took this, good battle and keep it up u two peace..... |
oh shit my bad, i was askin the fool on the first page about his explanatin cause to me it seemed he only wanted people to read his battle, so capcom, i wasnt referrin to u dawg, honest mistake...
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aiight this is wat i thought
punches:royal wordplay:grotesque personals:royal metas:grotesque flow:royal nice battle though keep it up aiight will sum plz vote on this so i can get rid of this wack ass battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245 an cud sum 1 plz tell me wat a "multi"............ |
Easy win for Royal, betta wordplay, punches and everything else
Grotesque came too simple Hell Emersion, Significant Wat A Kind Virgin...// Ill Get Under Your Skin And Let Loose Like A Blind Surgeon..// ^had me laughing for more than a hot minute Vote=Royal |
uppin vor votes, and some of those arent explained well enough but thats ok, yo good battle man sorry bout bein a dick the other day
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ROYAL...CAME HARDER WITH ORIGINAL PUNCHES.
BREAK IT punches..royal flow..tie metaz..WAT..lol multies..WAT..lol vocab...tie...>>but royal,,used it betta originality....royal OVERALL....ROYAL.. NOT A BAD SPIT FROM THE OTHER KAT...ROYAL JUST CAME MUCH HARDER.. GOOD JOB BOTH YA... PEACE |
i think royal sickness got this one iun every catagory to tell.....
u the truth.....he had harder hitting punches..... better usage of wordplay.....and just overall a....... better all around verse...so my vote goes to ROYAL..... yep... pz.... |
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