Mary~Jane vs Mic Trourment
 

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votes votes votes please
ill spit first as soon as you check in

no doubt boo. i'll get a peak at what ya offer and drop a line in a bit., i got to run to the store for da moms. PEACE

no doubt ill spit ya right now 10 lines all love hun




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good luck the guy and the **girl** hope this will be good, cause I think I'll take someone between you 2 if I'M impressed no no just joking

I've got `trunks` with `pumps`, but don't `run` cuz Mary leaves "`punks`~wit~lumps"
at best, your verses are like `periods`; they only gettin `RE(a)D` like "`once~a~month`"
I'll open "ya~face~wit~a~razor"; you're spittin `incorrect` so I'll be "backspacin~you~later"
I'm "basically~greater", ya 'feelin~me~still?'; my `delivery's~iLL` like "crack~patients~in~labor"
What kind of "possible~efforts" could 'possibly' stop me from 'droppin' you on a "hospital~stretcher"
wit the entire "top~of~ya~severed"; you aint even `safe at home` cuz I been "stompin~the~`catcher`"
wit you at `base` point, I`m `rounding through`, `anxiously stealing` this win like `home base "runners`~do"
but beat you? that's fun to do, cuz on you I `drop more ammunition` then angry `machine "gunners`~do"
mic trourment `stay dorment`, you "eruptin'" is little more than "gassed~up"
you should forfeit, cuz your only oportunity for victory is passed~up

yep well you surprised me alot nice girl, seriously i wasn't waiting for that nice shit of yours, the other bitch will have to do a great job to kill that (question is that your first spitting : stp there i know it's not your first but its good) I'll be voting

thanx taxback for da feedback
and no that aint my first spit haha





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I give a phuk wether or not she's~able-to-flow~she gonna call me a'Gardner' the way ima ~play-with-a-Hoe~
as i~enable-da-blows~ i hope the *trama's-computin~ cuz battlin me for a win is pointless like~condom-re-usin~
here let me explain cuz im sure~i'm-causin-confusion~ 'in the end ya fucked girl' and i don't mean a~erotic-conclusion~
that shit was ~lame-at-best~ quick some one charge this sluts mind of crimes so she can give her~brain-a-(r)rest~
scripts her rhymes like a 'insecure novleist' just look how she has to~explain-her-text~
have her 'scared to shine' like ~panic's-stars- you'll be quicly forgotten like you rapp'd on~xanex-bars~
make her a ~fan-at-heart~ thats ~got-to-be-logik-stricken~ she's only here cuz on her last site she got beat more than~islamic-women~
ya 'connection' to hip hop is like battle links with~error-readings~ i'll have ya 'ass grounded' like banquet halls with ~chariless-seating~
you dont stand a chance like democracy in ~afganastan~ the way ima 'reduce ya worth' like ~damaged-cans~
you must be 'left brain dominant' cuz you aint~right-in-the-mind~ must be currency cuz youjust got spent and thats the~life-of-a-dyme~



RESPECT BOO. 1

nice verse playa
now lets get some voteys!





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pleeeeeeeeeease?
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both of you excelled in terms of multis, metas and flow, but then again..both of your verse were stretched as well. in the end i felt that while MJ is fine as fuck, Mic's punches were more direct and on point...


vote-MT

thanks for the vote Dezyir ;)

uppin for more votes

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can you guys go and comment my first text in english vs tu cents i think he did no show lol i was really bad lol and i win thats ok go see this

Mary Jane is Pretty! LoL

Nice Spit Mic Tournament! have her 'scared to shine' like ~panic's-stars- you'll be quicly forgotten like you rapp'd on~xanex-bars~
make her a ~fan-at-heart~ thats ~got-to-be-logik-stricken~ she's only here cuz on her last site she got beat more than~islamic-women~


^ cracked me up

good job boo!

ahhhhhhh she changed her signatire, her sig use to ay the life of a dyme, thats why i closed liek i did. lmao.

thank you Lady Divinity :)

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my vote goes to mary jane , nice text , punches were quite good multies would of been better with more of them

like the two text were real tight but after reading them quite of times, i managed to see mary jane had the best texts but it was real close vote== mary-===

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2638#post802638

check this

lol i liked this battle a lot..............................ima big fan of punches and origanality.......props to both but i felt mary's verse jus that little more................

vote=mary

I'm giving Mary-Jane my Vote cuz she's mad crazy fine!!

Nah fo real she took this on punches and flow with soem nice metas in there..Props girl!!

Vote-Mary-Jane

Shut Up Pot1ent, You Horny Corn Chip..
Lets Be Proffessional Here Fellas..

Overall.. Both Newbs Impressed Me..
Most Femcees That have Come And Gone
On This Site Have Been Utteraly Wack..
On Side From A Few (ex. Hottie, Dary HisTory..
The Poetics).. So To See A Fem Spit As
Well As She Did Is Impressive..

The Other Kat Came Well Too.. A Little Off
On His Punches/Flow Combo But Not Bad
Nun The Less..

So In The Case Of Flow To Punches Im Gunna
Have TO Give This Battle Up To The New Fem..
Good First

Vote - Mary Jane

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please hit this up, .................................................. ....

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81979

[SIZE=1][FONT=century gothic]Ya'll Have Some Nice Flow And
Some Good Punches.But Mic Tournament Had Some Punches
That Had Me Like "Damn' Especially That Islamic Women Line.

VOTE=MT
Mary Jane Looks Very Good

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I'm giving Mary-Jane my Vote cuz she's mad crazy fine!
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EXACTLEE!!!!!!!!!!!!. . .BUT IM NOT HITTIN THA POLL;)


DEZYIR=SUPER HATER/FAG!

Ya'll Have Some Nice Flow And
Some Good Punches.But Mic Tournament Had Some Punches
That Had Me Like "Damn' Especially That Islamic Women Line.

VOTE=MT
Mary Jane Looks Very Good
This was how it was supposed to look


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nice battle...I think that mic tourment just had better overall wordplay, punches, metas...nice drop...mary jane you got skills...I don't matter if you lost though...you still fine as hell!

VOTE=MIC TOURMENT

Mary Jane You HOT!!! If You Got AIM...Hit Me Up At audo324...

Ayo, let me just start by saying this Mary Jane girl is gorgeous. But to the battle I think Mic came a little harder and direct but damn she's pretty. I wish I could vote off that, but I can't. I vote for Mic cuz he came pretty hard and it was nice.

Vote=Mic

i gotta go wit mary cus of

punches
flow
multies
metas
somewha personals
consitancy
and wordplay

good battle props to both