Un x pected -[vs]- -=[oRbiiT]=-
 

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12 lines maximum.

No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
No biting
No feeding
No recycling
No swaying

Cheaking in; i'll be awaiting your's doesnt matter who spits first.

chec kinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

I'll give you talent lectures; your not ready; my wins expected,
looking for another easy win; well ill leave you standing corrected.
Cleared your slate once; isnt it ashame you'll be doing it again,
2 losses is 1 to many, expecially with that pretty record to defend.
Anb - reincarnated?! the 1st attempt fail with that pathetic crew,
well we all no 2nd is only the best in kindergarden and pre-school.
Is there something to hide;names not legible, not ready to shine,
only respectable thing for you is the many herbs in your win line.
Wont show your first loss; ill make sure to leave a scar to remind,
that line WILL be showing vets; under your loss column, starting with mine.

dawg i got work so ill drop soon man
nice verse but i dont want ti a no show honestly on ym break ill drop
aite im out tho....ill try to drop now u came hard so idont wanna to go to waist shud be a good abttle but give me time i got work in teh city

i gpot tiem my bad im droppin now
i got time igot time i got time im droppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
peep my otehr battlesd

Lol; sounds like an excuse to me; just face it like a man and drop a verse, you have to lose sometimes; and if your just making up excuses thats pretty pathetic; you see how long it took me to post that? Right after your cheak in I started writing.

Ohh ok so your gonna post now.

Good - didnt feel like waiting for your verse.

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Like I stated in bitch slapped; the time limit is 12 am; so if you dont have your verse in 20 minutes from now your DQ'd.

Nice flow dwag

l;iked it alot, just werk on ya punchlines and similes, use more aight this is text bro, nice vocab also, keep it up

Yo man while u waitin please his this up, thanks dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81929

FUK U
not cyrp but the kid thats battlyn me stfu bitch
im droppin keep ya panties in a bnuch

IN a sense" i think you should just throw in the towel, wouldn't get it right "vanna white" flipped you a "vowel"// shitty ass spits going down to the lower extreminies of the bowel, my flows comin deep like a root canal// you come weak, i seen more heat comin out an air conditoiner// you couldn't "drill" me if you was a dental practitioner, got you in "check" as if i was a bank commisioner// With 3 blunts cashed You Thought Enough Writs Could Suffice to Hurt-Me//
It's Unearthly, Believed if ya Wore Lakers 42...that You'd Actually be WORTHY//
This is a ferocious beating i'm provoking horror like ATROCIOUS//
you tryin to use big words well here, supercaliFrAGilisticexpialidotious//
You been whispering behind our back, its about time you talk//
Your another homicide of X, reason your out lined in chalk//

Alright; both verses up, let the voting begin.
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Damn Orbit Took This In All Aspects
No Comparrison, The Other Guy's
Structure Made It To Hard To Read His
Verse. . .

Vote - Orbit

Thank you; just for some reference to my verse, Un X Pected's name was in all black so you couldnt read it, thats where your 'name isnt legible' line comes in.

Uppin for some votes people.

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Vote=Un X Pected

Pucnhes: X
Metas/Similes: X
Flow: Orbit

Thats how i see it

Orbit ya only had flow dawg, Yo X Werk on ya punchlines dawg make them more complex, fix up ya flow and structure too, make it easier to read cuz it through me off, u win this jus cuz ya punchlines

Peace, Hit htis up please, and Ims till waitin on Zany if he wants u in his crew aight

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81929

^^ Hate vote; you and me were gonna battle.

I have beef with you and I clearly stated no HATE votes;

so mods could you please remove that vote.

& I like how un x pected changed his whole sig;

because he no he got merked..

Sorry for the freepost but here's link to our beef:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

K u fuckin idiot how do i have beef with u

U wanted to battle me, so what

UR VERSE FUCKIN SUCKED, any other vet will agree with me, u basic fuck, get sum punchlines rthen come talk to me, X's verse wasnt great either but at least he had similes and shit, U had FLOW, thats it bitch so fuckin shut up


MODS dont listen to this dumb ass this aint no hate votes, n if ya'll wana take it away go ahead, dont realy care


Case Closed

Look kid; do get a vet in here



I gaurentee they would think my verse is better..


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vote=orbit

not being funny but this was an easy win.........orbit jus had it all and x didnt
punches,flow,metas,similies,sustainment all go to orbit.......

easy vote=orbit

cryp=hate

hit this up..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2638#post802638

Thank you!

I called cryp][ out for a battle so he can see my skill..

this time ill come hard; & actually take some time on it!

might be a waste though - because he sucks monkey balls

yo orbit nice drop, the punches need a little work, it was aaigh thogh
but un x pected wud get my vote cos his punchlines wer harder
nice drop from both of ya though

Not sure how many times I have upped this but okay..

uppin again; decent battle I guess, frontlines is slept on!

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^^werd..besides un x's punches were weak..talked bout wut he could do to much..

Damn Orbit Took This In All Aspects
No Comparrison, The Other Guy's
Structure Made It To Hard To Read His
Verse. . .

Vote - Orbit

yea....1

hit this up....

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81627

Thanks make sure to poll vote though please...

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Un X Pected Should be merked on this. Orbit, you shot this guy up without havin to pull a trigger 0_o

Looking to close this up; please cheak it out and leave a vote,

for who you think had the better verse; thank you.

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Damn, I really this kid Orbit. You already have the potential, now its time for you to battle vets on RB..............................

Breakdown
Punches-Orbit
Flow-Orbit
Structure-Orbit

hands down again

1 more votes to close this battle; should be my last uppin.

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Uppin this please; need one more vote to close this!

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81979

can yall help us out? we need to finish this battle, thanx ....
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this was a coo battle an yea orbit u hads summ coo lines an shit
ucame slean for a newbie if i loos agsint u ill be proud
ahahhaha actually i wont
pc

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Umm okay; how did you get another vote...

no one even gave you another vote besides cryp][

w/e, good battle; thanks for the compliment .....

orbit fo shore took this easely~every aspect of this battle he had~he came hard~dnno~if un x pected had knew what he was goin up against~


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