alleyezonme4l VS X
 

10-15 lines
u drop first
that is all
chec kjinnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ill drop soon dawg

u ready alright look i bet u couldnt even make the band i would never shake your hand i wood rather play with some sand u know catch a tan if your with your boys i would eat you all that candy u know i fucked mandy or was your mom named bradny shit there is so many ways to diss you i think all the guess but i know all the girls dismiss you bitch iam 16teen so how does it feel to lose to a man bitch here my plan dog iam not baby sittin you gotta grow up

^^^ NO WAY>>..
i thought i hada take my time


guess not,cuz this cat dont no how to rhyme,its a crime to be that herbish//
my lines come in packages to destroy ya words bitch//
my rap games urban,i didnt think u was FUll noob//
who wuda known this cat spits bout me not makin the band, well its true//
i dont rap maintstream,i spit underground on beats rappin thesekids//
u hopin i dont come to hard an blow u up, while splittin ya wig
u better off if u didnt show up,but i did to merk this herb//
wit words so abusrd evennet thugs that get head slugs do comply, u fukin nerd//
i no the truth dont try to hide it noob,u really dont no how to rap//
so instead this kid pulls out the rhymin dictionary an writes a paragraph..........lmao at the last one only
everytrhing was weak as fuk ..just enuff toget me a win
ahahhaha wow
i wudnt even spit but then id get DQ////
an i dont want that

well i'd vote but i need 100 posts. lol like i dont know if its good or not, well any way all eyes needs to get back in the classroom cuz i mean dog that was BAD, get a tan play with some sand???

i was hoping to see more from X, but i wouldnt drop a dime on this one either,

i'd vote for X hands down on this one even though i wasn't impressed with either at all.

very basic but like i said i wouldt drop a dime on that either.

X if oyu wanna better battle holla at me. 1

bitch look at me lickin your clit come on your gurl tits as she suckin my dick i smoke that icky i love 2pac but its all eyes on me dog for real u might be good after i stop leavein u better come to my wood matter a fact i heard u like to fuck cats cuz your wack bitch u need to stop smokein that crack why waste your maybe u should leave u say iam white but i know your not right cuz u cant write iam like the bunny i keep goin and goin u are like the dollar store ones u just die

wow....<CENTER>BREAKDOWN<CENTER>

<CENTER>[COLOR=BLUE]Flow....X
Punches....X
Creativity....X
Vocab....X

so basically X won this hands undaground...

both elevate...alleyez...nice try....</CENTER>

sry messed up the color and center and forgot to add battle links...

vote= Un X Spected

Oh my. .

X took this easily. Alleyezonme, seriously, elevate. Stop writing in paragraphs, develop a better rhyme scheme, and get more complex with your rhymes and disses. Upping vocab wouldn't hurt.

Flow-X
Punches-X
Vote-X

Oh my. .

yea i knew if i came wit a 2 minute verse id still beat him
didnt expect wakness tho honestly
i thought after smokin sum hebrs id have to put sum effort
uppin
POLL IT

uppin for sum voters t ovote where da votes at/....................////////////////////////////
lookinb for voters,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
where d voters at.............................

First of Alleyeonme4l this was a massacre...
X took it all the way
and this how I am going lay it down
flow = X
Meta's and Multis = X
Structure = X
Creativity = X
Punches = X
Herbness Award = Alleyeonme
Overall Vote = X

Listen I have been having a problem where I can poll vote on normal frontlines only on Elite but i'll try anyways if you dont get my poll and if a admin or mod see this post please give X my vote thanks
Hit my latest Battle Link

^^ he cant vot......change pollllll voting
if any one
can uppin uppin uppinuppinpupinuppinpuppinpuppin

this battle was one legged..........................y ya battling peeps like this x.........oh well.........vote=x for obvious reasons

hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81897

gracias to whoever helpe d mye out lookin for a few more voterssssssssssssssssssssss
uppin for sum voters
an peep this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82178

^^ elite only tho

ayo..........i peeped this and ya havent even looked at mine.......return tha favour and drop an honest vote.........

Well this was a one sided battle i thought cause X took it in every thing, he had better flow, harder punches, everything really, overall my vote goes to X

aight x came harder wit his punches
better worplay as well
strucutre was more formatted and alleyes really need to work out some shit though
good shit though

vote-x